Okay.. i didn't get the 5 reviews I was looking for, but I figured you guys really like my story so I'll be nice and update :D

and thatnx to Jen, I'm thinking about using your idea about Max and Luke having some sort of a competition over Fran in this or the next chapter.

And in case anyone was wondering, I am going to incorparate this in with the actual storyline. coming up soon will be Max and Fran's first date.

With Elton John lol...

Don't forget to review

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Fran looked up from her kiss with Luke momentarily. Sher happened to glance over at where Mr. Sheffield was standing, and she saw the look on his face. Pure Jealousy. She almost felt guilty, almost felt bad. Almost, being the key word. She remembered all of the times he had caused her pain like the pain she could see so plainly written on his face.

"M-miss F-f-fine" he stuttered "Nice to see y-you, and your, uh-um, date."

"Oh, hello, Mista Sheffield." said Fran, with a slight smirk. "This is Luke, my boyfriend."

"Nice to meet you, Luke. Miss Fine, could I see you in the kitchen?" asked Max

"Uh, sure." said Fran, while thinking "What did I do this time?"

(The Kitchen)

Max couldn't believe that Fran had betrayed him like this. He thought that their relationship had been going somewhere.

"You knew that she wasn't going to wait for you forever." said the voice. "You knew she would get tired of your backtracking and eventually move-on."

Deep inside, Max had always known that what the voice had just said was right. But he couldn't help anything he did anymore. It was her fault, but he couldn't blame Fran at all.

"Miss Fine, how could you be dating other men? I thought we had something going on between us." said Max

"Well, you know what, Mista Sheffield, SO DID I! That is, until, you took back telling me you love me, and until after everytime you kissed me, and then you acted like it was a bad idea. I'm so sick of you backtracking in our relationship, and I'm trying to get over loving you by seeing other men. If you're not going to move forward in our relationship, then you have NO RIGHT being jealous when I bring home anbother man." shouted Fran, who was heading back out into the living room.

"What's wrong?" asked Luke

"I have two words for you. Mista. Sheffield." said Fran "et's go. I need to forget about him for a while, if ya know what I mean." she finished her sentence with a slight wink towards Luke. She also knew that Mista Sheffield had heard the last part of the sentence.

"Miss Fine, wait, please, wait." creid Max as she walked out the door. He didn't know when, or if she would come back, and he wouldn't blame her if she didn't. He couldn't stand to be around himself anymore. He knew he deserved everything he got.

All of a sudden, he knew how he'd win Miss Fine's heart. He'd beat Luke in some kind of a challenge, ask her out on a date, and win her heart. He just had to plan something that he knew he could win at. He had to get to work.

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Okay... sorry it was so short. I'll update later tonight, just give me a few reviews for my troubles. Thanx :D