11-18-10
A Note For All
Hello dearest readers~! This is MKL here, the author of this...erm..."wonderful" piece of "literature". I'm here today because of a review (flame?) I recently received, and I'd like to write a response, since it concerns quite a few much kinder and more well-written reviews I've received. The review is from an anonymous reader named "kiki" who, word for word, writes:
"wrigt a seqal you ass or i'm gunna be really pissed of and why not have it in
Ed's world this time do not stop or i will kick you ass all the way to "
Yes. That was the review. So here we go.
First of all, regarding a sequel: Sorry, but it's not happening. Looking back on it, this story completely sucks and makes me cringe horribly at the bad characterization, spelling, made-up words, inappropriate notes, etc. throughout, as well as the writing overall. I hate it now. There was going to be a sequel (I think I mentioned it, but if not, there you go), and it was going to take place in Ed's world, but I'm beyond the point of even wanting to look at this overused plotline and ugly story again. Sorry.
Second of all, should anyone wish to take up this story and revise it with a sequel or whatever, feel free. Just let me know and I'll give you my notes of a few things I'd like to happen when you write the sequel/new ending, and then you're free to do what you wish. You're welcome. ^.^ Don't forget to let me know, or else I'll report you! Promise~! -innocent smile-
The final thing is a direct response to the reviewer that you all may or may not read.
Okay, "kiki", thanks for your input. Seriously, I enjoy being told what people want and legitimate concerns they may have. But the problem with what you wrote is that it's very...flame-like. I've always said I don't mind flames (and I don't...they honestly make me laugh, like this one), but they should be well-written or else I will feel free to make fun of you. So figure out how to write and I will tell you about the sequel- -while using correct punctuation. And why didn't you sign in? Are you too scared I'd respond negatively? That's a really cowardly thing to do. I don't appreciate that. If you're going to insult me and my writing, however sucky it may be/is/was, PLEASE tell me that as close to face-to-face as we can get so I don't have to air my grievances publicly and thus share them with the Fanfiction world. Embarrassing, isn't it? To know that you sparked a whole lengthy paragraph and a showing of your badly-written review to the other readers at large? Yeah, I thought so. So next time you're going to review, sign in. It would make the world much better for both you and myself, although the readers might get a kick out of you being brought down a peg once more. Feel free to respond to my note for you, "kiki"; this was fun. ^.^ And maybe next time you could actually finish the review so I don't feel the urge to "kick you ass all the way to "
Anyway, that's it from me. Hope that cleared some things up, and that you all will forgive me for my horrible writing of this story, haha. Until next time, faithful readers!
Later!
-MKL, signing out.
"Any sound can shake the air. My voice shakes the heart." -Sho Minamimoto, The World Ends With You (NDS)
