Hey~everyone knows about those stupid errors right? well, this is the one story I am allowed to edit, jokes on me since I was ignoring it for Harry's amusing antics and hanging out with friends and playing games~ So I'm back...again.
If you are willingly still reading this, check back once every Month to see if I uploaded the new edited chapters; this is the slightly unfinished chapter Two; I just got to Edit the last bit-Or I may jump to chapter three; This is to Verelan because I just realized how sketchy the chapters were before chapter six or was it chapter five oh w/e.
Title: Another Time
Disclaimer: I do not own Star Trek 2009, I only own this Mind and I gladly lend out my idea's. I don't mind seeing the exact same story written by another person as long as it has its differences. NOR do I own Avatar, I just borrowed Pandora b/c I love that saying and thought it very romantic.
Pairing: Nero/Mandana
A/N: I also just realized that Mandana and Nero may not have existed in this time line so I'm sorta running on the assumption that they had long life's like Vulcans.
A/N: I'm editing it, because I just realized how short and small it was. Not enough Info on Mandana at all so I'm going to update the chapters! And it really needs to be Edited for me to put up chapter six else the ending which I finally came to an agreement on because I was real if-y about it, wouldn't make much sense. So, thank you V and I hope this has you jumping with joy as you press the Next Chapter Button-I'll try to Edit it as fast as possible; but don't stop yourself from reading-I think I'm keeping what I have up because its a basic outline. So on to the new and improved Directors (laugh) Cut.
Edited Version A: as of 1/14/2011-through-03/?/11
Time for some McCoy action!
Chapter Two: Space and Changes
Disclaimer: I don't Own-Otherwise it would constantly have more hints on Spock's romantic life.
A/N: this chapter is dedicated to my first reviewer Black-Dirge (aka Verelan) , hope you like it-I don't want to keep you waiting so I'm going to try an update as often as possible-I'm hoping to slowly build it up so it makes sense and yes-I'm working on the Nero scene; I'm thinking of something she has to fix on the deck so that Nero will see her when he contacts the Enterprise.
This is Nero
This is Mandana
There doing some telepathy through space
CHAPTER 2
"Cadet Mandana, you have been re-assigned the USS Enterprise by Captain Pike,"
Mandana clearly got the impression of Pride, confidence, and well, she could only describe the most dominant feeling as sadistic glee of having accomplished something. She wondered what Nero was up to, if she didn't know better she would say the 2nd Lt. of a Mining ship was off conquering planets. She frowned for a moment, only the slightest hesitation in her stride, did Nero's feeling have anything to do with what was going on at Vulcan?
There was a possibility that they were mining some part of the surface and that the Vulcan's panic would greatly amuse the Romulan's but she was sure he should also be feeling annoyance because the Federation would show up.
Vulcan.
I'm coming.
No! Stay, Danger,
Fear...Confusion...I'm coming.
Mandana gave a little half wave half salute to the cadet standing outside the hub.
When the hub finally took off Mandana was a little surprised to see that one cadet that had caused such an uproar this morning sitting beside her looking peculiarly queasy. Maybe he didn't like the idea of being in space-which was ludicrous in the first place because everything about Starfleet dealt with space. Although she had constantly heard Cadet McCoy's grumbles on how easy it was to die in space, the man was an excelent doctor-she remembered the many absurd looks he would give her when she came into his class hours with a broken bone or bruised ego; she would always demanded that he had to be her doctor.
"I don't understand why a good woman such as yourself finds it necessary to take advanced combat classes-withthe security bubs!" McCoy grunted, slowly pulling a thin piece of thread towards him. "Or, why you demand more natural healing methods. Do you enjoy pain? No don't answer that. Crazy hobgoblins, your lucky I know how to do stitches, the look on the CMO face when you asked for something so archaic!"
After all he was the only human male who didn't go all goo-goo eyes on her and cause more damage. That's why she like working on the egineering deck, she could fit into the smallest places that the other cadets couldn't and usually the smallest places where no ones fingers but hers could reach fixed the biggest damage.
Mandana stared out the window at the passing hazy blue sky. There was a low smog, barely detectable from below, but once you passed through it you could tell the difference. The blue was bluer, there wasn't a doubt about its shade; no longer a grayish blue, but a cotton candy blue. Mandana theorized that the air was probably cleaner and easier to breathe up here; but at such altitudes Humans' would find it hard to breathe.
The blue reminded her of home, of a pond hidden in the niche behind the rolling hills. It was an uncommon pond, rare because it had formed naturally there, most bodies of waters were made by the Romulan Empire, the insignia made from an arrangement of rocks at the bottom of the pools. Ponds reminded her of water, and water reminded her of the shipyards of Romulus. She used to dream of shopping at the market that resided on it. She had left before she was old enough to wander through the vendors with pocket change.
Mandana gazed out into the vast darkness of space lit with distant stars. It boggled her mind that what she was seeing was the past, and that these lights could shine so bright as to travel hundreds of light years to appear as a pinprick of hope. Some of these stars might already be dead, there light wouldn't reach them for a century more, some might have just been born...Romulus was out there.
She remembered a human tall-tale about a place called Neverland; it was a story about a group of children who lived there and never grew old. But her favorite line was the directions on how to get to Neverland.
"Second star to the right and straight on 'til morning." she whispered, her warm breathe causing the window to slightly fog over.
"Pardon, but, did you say something?" McCoy asked, turning to look at her, Mandana glanced between the two men. McCoy looked slightly guilty but he straightened a bit more in his seat.
Mandana smiled, "No, nothing. Do I even want to know what you gave him to make him so sick?"
McCoy smiled, blushing under her friendly but slightly patronizing gaze.