a/n ok guys i would really appreciate some constructive reviews if u dont like how im writin just suggest some corrections doent just call me evil. ok thanks a lot heres ch. 6.

so after leving the italian restaurant el said 'lets go back to my house now that kathy and i r getting divorced it wont be very akward.'

'sure El but r u sure that she won't hate me.'

"Yeah I know her she's the realy peaceful type.

so the rode a cab back to el's house and el said 'hey everyone this is liv im gonna marry her now and kathy and i are gettin divorced'

his kids said "cool dad we're glad now ur won't have to be so angry and take things away from us!"

"Great' said El 'hey kathy do u mind sleepin on the couch tonight so liv and i can sleep in our bed. we're pretty tired after campin out last night."

"Oh yeah sure said Kath.

so el and liv went upstairs to their bedroom and el said liv i love u so much even tho i never got to kkno you very well after bein ur partner for 12 years. Where do u want to have our honeymoon?"

'Elit I've always wanted to go to the moon but thats probably not possible.'

'Alright I'll see what I can do.'

suddenly the bedroom door creaked open. 'el what was that?' 'i don't know maybe it was one of my kids or our pet panda.'

suddenly a voice said. "You bitch you stole my husband away from me. Now you will pay.

'that voice… said elliott.. 'it sounds so familiar .. its its… oh my gawd its my wife kathy.

'yes you traitor. now she's gonna pay.' Kathy pulled out a shotgun and shot at the bed but completely missed.

'Um, i think u missed said livva'

'oh well i wont miss this time u bitch. take this.'

BAM! Kathy shot again and hit liv who cried out. "uggghghgggg!' she said.

Kathy you bitch oliv is the love of my life and you just killed her' El fumed with rage like never before and jumped out of bed and kicked his wife through two walls. "ahhhhh! take that i never even liked you anyways." then he turned around 'liv liv liv! are you okay oh my gosh oh my gosh ohh myy gawd! Liv! DOn't give up dont follow the light, its okay you'll make it i promise.'

'Uhggg… she moaned.. 'take me… to .. the hospitalll…'

'oh my gawd.' El picked her up and ran out.'

so what do u guys think! IS liv gonna survive? will she have her babies? what happened to kathy! so intense I kno right! so comment and let me kno if i shuld continue or not! yeah EO!