Whispers in the Dark

by Yoi no Chi

Sakura and Naruto are twins who been abused and finally kill their mother. 4 years later they go to Konoha high and meet the Akatsuki. Sakura and Pein start falling in love with each other. But what happens when a person from Sakura's past comes back?

8. AN

Oi my faithful readers,

I'm sorry for not updating for almost two months . I'm going to update soon and the chapter is going to be longer than the rest (insert clapping here). I'm trying to alter my writing-style because when I reread Whisper in the Dark, I found a lot of mistakes as well as sentences that didn't need to be there. I want you all to enjoy this story and not wonder: "what the hell is up with this crap?" What I'm working on is changing the chapters (somewhat) and making them better. I'm most likely going to add more chapters before Yahiko's death.

I found that Pein and Sakura shouldn't fall in love with each other quickly (I'm so used to writing one-shots that I forgot this fact). I mean come one, they have only unknown each other for three days and on the first day Pein thinks she should join the Akatsuki. Isn't that very out of character? Yes, it is. Pein and Sakura-do to their past- are weary of the other at first but as time progresses, they learn to trust and love.

I'm going to make this story enhance for your entertainment. I'm sorry for taking up your time in reading the story and this author's note but I hope I can repay you guys with putting my entire energy and the strength of my imagination in to this story and craft it into something that you will take pleasure in reading. If there are any questions you would like me to answer or if you have any ideas on making this story appeal to you, please let me know by review or by PMing me! I would be grateful for your opinion, good or bad. Again, I'm so sorry! –Bows-

On Friday, August 13, I'm going to change the prologue and a week after that, the first chapter and so on. To tell when I have change it there will be a "redone" after the name of the chapter. Thanks again for your faithfulness. =D

I would like to take the time to show my appreciation to all who reviewed, favorite and/or alerted,

MaxsunnyAK 47

SakuraXAkatsuki

Emoprincess98

Jo and Booker

Animefan3250

Hell's demon butterfly

ItaXalex

Jackie-chan1230

Justice Reeps

Lady Comare

Sailor Silver Cosmos

Sakuraluver1215

Shadow-the-hedgehog-247

SweetScarlett97

Tenshi no Sakura

xxEmoxTwilighterxx

Angels Cry Tears of Blood

Deadlyblossom-2995

EvilChildGenius

ProBowler

Rosepuppy

SKY-PIRATE THEIVE

Thanks you guys =D!