Another Love Story, Perhaps?
Guys, as I said last chapter, this is my first story and I just uploaded yesterday and there are lots of reviews already no matter saying that I suck, moron, brat or more. Thanks for those who reviewed who tell me that I did something wrong, places that you dislike or , gay part is just the 1st chapter so that Amu and Tadase can break-up without any problem. And I just want to talk to ISayWhatIThink. So You said that my story is poorly written and ask me to practice more right? Then I must tell you that Chapter one is my first chapter and I am really trying to improve myself. And if you doesn't like the word 'OMG!' Then just skip this story and read another why don't you just show us how good your writing skills are? And P.S I am not a kid. If you keep slapping people's heart by these words, I am sure you are the kid.
That's all and here is you're second chapter
Chapter 2 New teacher?
"Briiinnggg- Briiiinnnnnggggg!" I was frightened by the sound and jumped out of my next thing I know is I need a new alarm clock. I look at my watch and found that it was 7:30 already which means I should go out for school in 10 minutes. I quickly grab my uniform, ran to the washroom, tried changing while brushing my teeth, grab my school bag and ran out.
I ran to school so fast that I was even 5 minutes early before the bell ring!
"Wow! I made it! Let me see which class I am with… Kukai…rima…nadeshiko…IKUTO!"
"Looking for me strawberry?" Ikuto suddenly whisper at Amu's ear making her shiver.
"What are you doing at our school?"
"Hey don't be impolite to your NEW TEACHER you in class."
What?Ikuto is my new class teacher? I thought he is off to Paris to look for his dad?
He's driving me crazy thinking of him! And he just came back without telling me !
End of my 2nd chapter.
Guys please really review but don't say too much about I suck or something like that.
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