Before anyone says anything: THIS IS NOT AN UPDATE. I had only told people I speak with on the forums, but my computer had broke, and I just received a new one. I looked my story over and realized I could do better. Much better. So I'm going to start from scratch. I will leave this one as it is, and start re-updating each chapter after I'm sure I like it. Sorry for any inconvenience I caused, but now that I have resources and time, I'm going to get myself moving.
Thanks for understanding, and again, sorry.