I am redoing this story. I think the characters are very vague so far, and I'd like to have a long irst chapter. In my opinion, the story sucks. So for the few of you, who read it, don't fret. It hadn't started how I wanted it to, so I'm rewriting it over the summer, I was too hasty when I was writing it and I'd very much like to restart it and make it better.

Lidsworth