Hope of a clan, revised and edited

by JVIoonlight Shadow

Basically Hope of a clan translated and w' comments by yours truly. First fanfic. R&R please! Here's the real summary: Hopepaw is a normal apprentice, but when things start going wrong for her, how will she coop with a huge secret that she can save the clans and only her. Watch her as she saves everyone because she is so awesome!11! No flamerz please!111!1!11!

2. Hopelight the deputy

Hello once again audience, (Read in a toby turner voice) I'm BACH! (Cheesy pun alert) anyways,Here is the second chapter. One word, BEWARE

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What are you talking about... I'm not a troll!(Yep definitely no a troll, yep, yep.. *Cough cough* Troll *cough cough*

I am just a normal girl with an awesome story. (I can make a better story without even trying! Wanna see?

There once was a girl who could spell. She could spell wonderfully, and knew how to make exclamation marks instead of ones, and when it was appropriate to use caps lock. One day she wrote an amazing story, filled with details and ideas and characters that ACTUALLY MADE SENSE! Amazing right? And that girl went to become a famous writer. Now who was that girl? Certainly not you.)

Please no flamers...dfs (What does dfs stand for? Donkey fart syndrome?)

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Hopestar walk around camp. The clan was congratulating her fur being so hot (Oh no get her to the medicine cat quick! She might have greencough! Yay!) and awesome. (Sounds like prussia. Completely ignore that last comment please)

Suddenly a cat named Hotcat walked up to her, "Heyyyy (He wants the D), he meowed. Do you wanted to be my mate?" (No.)

Hopelight smiled, since her lifelong dream(It can't be a lifelong dream if you were only alive for 6 moons, considering most of it she was a kit. Pedophile!) was to marry Hotcat (How do cats marry ? Would someone please explain?). He was the hottest (With a body temp of promptly 100 degrees Kelvin) cat in all of Tiaraclan. (What the dark forest?)

"Want a mouse?" he asked. (Heck no)

Hopelight looked at the mouse in horror. "Burt I am a vegetarian!" she screamed. (Somebody failed biology.)

Hotcat looked down at the dead mouse. "We are horrible.(Yes you are) Why do we do this ot (How does somebody misspell to? That takes talent.) poor little animals?" he asked. (I don't know, maybe because its in your friggin DNA maybe?)

Hopelight looked up,,,,, "WE WILL NOT EAT MICE RABBITS OR BIRDS ANYMORE SINCE IT IS WRONG!" she declared.

The rest of the clan looked up and nodded. "WE WILL BE RENAMED VEGETARIANISM!(Actually its vegetarianclan but i thought that was funnier.)" Hopestar(I thought that she was deputy?) declared.

The leader of the clan came up,, "You heard what hoplight said. Go collect veggies."

soon the cats came back. and they all had salad for dinner.(How are they so ? I know! 'cuz they borrowed Stargleam's clones!)

Hopelight smiled and went to her own personal den. And then she fell asleep. (Fascinating)

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Please no more flamersssssssssss(Yes flamersssssssss! :D)...!1!1111! 11 !3234(What.) !1

Love you all (Except Flamers.)(Love you flamers! Keep up the good work!)

Thank you for shopping at walmart~Moonlight