AN: Ok so this chapter is basically going to be about them hunting so it won't be that long but I will try to get the next chapter up ASAP. Also I am going to start giving shot outs to people who review each chapter…. So for the past two chapters;
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I didn't like the original of this chapter so here is a revised one.
Chapter 3: The hunt
[Alice Pov]
Oh my gosh! This is going to be amazing; Edward doesn't know it yet but he is in LOVE with Bella. I love the fact that I have visions. That is except for the times when they are wrong or they are completely pointless. I was interrupted by my thoughts when Jasper said "Alice, why exactly are you so excited. I mean you are like jumping around like a crazed women who just one a million dollars."
Um, should I tell them or not. Well might as well as long as Edward isn't here. It would be best if it was kept a secret from him or else he might just go ballistic. Well here goes nothing. "Hey guys, I just had a vision about Edward and it turns out that he kind of falls in love with Bella Swan…" I trailed off waiting for their reactions.
"Why in the world would he ever fall in love with a HUMAN! Its way to dangerous, he is going to get us all killed. Either that or, this human is going to die because of one of us." Rosalie said this while looking at Jasper.
"ROSALIE! How dare you say that about your brother? Jasper is perfectly in control with himself. Also be grateful that Edward will be happy in the near future." Esme said.
"So, anyways when Edward comes around 30 minutes from now, we have to make sure all thoughts are blocked. He can't find out quite yet."
"Where exactly did you send him, Alice?"My amazing husband said.
"Well I told him that I left my phone at a store when I went shopping yesterday. He protested a lot but eventually went. Although I think he might know that something is up, he just doesn't know, yet."
"Yeah and knowing Edward he will do his best to find out. Wait Alice is your phone at the store?" Esme asked.
"Actually it is. So it technically isn't a lie because I showed him the vision of me freaking out over leaving. That vision was mostly forced though."
30 minutes later
"Edward, we are going hunting so you ready to come?"
"Yeah totally. Where exactly are we hunting today?"
"Around the Canadian border, I would assume." Carlisle said.
"Oh and also we are sending you, Emmett, and Jasper to that range while the rest of us stay local. We thought you guys deserve some bonding time." Poor Edward hates spending time with his brothers but he is just going to have to deal with it. That earned a growl from Edward. Well, you know what Edward you don't scare me; might as well get it over with though.
Fifteen minutes later
(Edward POV)
"Ah brother looks like we meet again." Really Emmett I am so NOT in the mood.
"Whatever Emmett. Let's just hunt now ok."
A few mountain lions and watching Emmett wrestle with a bunch of grizzle bears, I noticed something. Maybe it is something maybe not. All I know is that it appears that my family is hiding something big from me. I mean Alice started to think of random things like shoes, clothes, and other crazy stuff like that. Not like she doesn't already though. It just seemed a lot different.
Finally, a couple hours later and we were back home. On to finishing the chapter. YEAH, sarcastically not really maybe it will get better then the girl just bringing herself down…..
So tell me what you think by clicking that review button. Also I am stuck deciding on how to continue on with the story. What I mean is should I have them read the whole book or just important parts of the story and maybe include a little twist of my own. Idk I will try to come up with a poll for that if I can. Until next chapter goodbye. Also sorry ( ) for such a short chapter I will try to make the next one longer.