p style="margin-bottom: 0in;"span style="font-size: x-large;"Sorry to tell you all this but I am putting wildcard heroes up for adoption I lost inspiration for how to proceed in the war in the story and lost my train of thought for it. If you want to adopt this and maybe improve what I have up than just send me a Private message and I will see if you can do better than I did. And let's face it my fight scenes suck in this and I just lost the will. And like I said I originally planed two versions with the oc of the story verse here was gender flipped. If you want to know what the costume design for the tigress spider is than think a inverse of costume design from max's costume. If you all wanted me to continue than please help me be able to write a war. I did say in my little authors notes that I never written a war before and that I had no experience with fight scenes one on one I can do but multi vs one is a bit out of my league there. So yes I am afraid I will have to put this story up for adoption. Thank you all for your support for this story and I hope you have good luck with this story.
To be honest I got inspired to do this from shattered dimensions and the clone saga of the comics. And the whole artificial DNA splicing to form max thing was just what I thought could happen with cloning.
If a clone is an exact replica of just one person than what would happen if they mixed two different DNA in cloning. I already saw at least ten Danny phantom stories where this happened in the case of dani fenton. That showed that I was not the only one to think it was indeed possible to create a whole new person through cloning techniques. If this was applied to the military for the intention of creating super soldiers than you can agree with me on the whole 'no one deserves that kind of power' point peter made when they heard about project hybrid. That is just playing god right there. The moral issue here is plain as day and you can agree that people like the red skull would do it regardless of the morals and just see a way to get better soldiers. -sigh- that and im getting tired of trying to get the original plot of this story down to papper. While the story flowed I kept getting many ideas on how to improve and couldn't decide how to evenly make sure I could do them all without making the characters overpowered,proverbial gods, and pretty much make the story to cluttered and have no actual plot. I originally planed for hydra to replicate wolverine's healing factor and give it to max and his rule 63 version to make it seem like the ultimate super-soldier but than I realized that would make him and her over powered and that would have made the story worse. So I made the oc have regular healing. Any way with that rant over hope you all can at least make a better version than I did. Because really you all saw how I suddenly switch pov and did in fight scenes and to be honest I did not do background detail much as I was not sure how to word it. Think this version of spider-man is a fusion of previous incarnations:
unlimited, ultimate, amazing, and the comic version. That was what I based this spider-man off of. The electric webs thing was to signal that peter's spider-sense was tied to the electric signals of his brain. His sixth sense is actually a mix of his heightened senses from the more active parts of his brain. His danger sense is because his electric signals in his brain was accelerated and more charged.
My guess was that when his DNA got altered his mental capacity got overcharged in the terms of his five senses and they together formed a subconscious that takes in all of peter's surroundings and alerts him when danger is going to happen like most animals and insects. His spider-sense is actually his subconscious alerting him. We all know he was smart before the bite and if he gets really ticked his electric signals might manifest as a new power and we all saw what that might manifest as in my story but it could also increase his speed and strength. this might explain how he can park-our so well and how his reaction time is so quick. Again I ranted. Oh well if you all got answers from that than you will have a better time understanding how the story can go to the point of seeing a bit of my thought process. until someone adopts this story in that case I would review to show how I thought of the version. And to be honest in ultimate spider-man I did put my exact feelings about Mary Jane Watson and harry onto here from what I noticed. The only ones peter ever hangs out recently was his team and on occasion the avengers not anyone else from his school that shows that peter is having a hard time staying stable in his life as peter parker and not spider-man.
The usual golden trio of spider-man here has officially been destroyed by the stress peter feels about new york. Think peter hides his grief of his uncle in a jokester personality, he is stressed from jameson, getting bullied and it really did not help when it looked like his childhood friends abandoned him. Really the only ones keeping him stable is his team. It's obvious that only Ava knows the real peter considering how much the two went through with kraven. So yeah im impressed peter didn't break down since Ben's funeral. But he can't keep it bottled up forever it will come out if the stress builds. I am really sorry but my mind has gone blank on this story and I hope you all can forgive me about this. Well this is geohikari152 the second and I bid you all farewell./span/p
To be honest I got inspired to do this from shattered dimensions and the clone saga of the comics. And the whole artificial DNA splicing to form max thing was just what I thought could happen with cloning.
If a clone is an exact replica of just one person than what would happen if they mixed two different DNA in cloning. I already saw at least ten Danny phantom stories where this happened in the case of dani fenton. That showed that I was not the only one to think it was indeed possible to create a whole new person through cloning techniques. If this was applied to the military for the intention of creating super soldiers than you can agree with me on the whole 'no one deserves that kind of power' point peter made when they heard about project hybrid. That is just playing god right there. The moral issue here is plain as day and you can agree that people like the red skull would do it regardless of the morals and just see a way to get better soldiers. -sigh- that and im getting tired of trying to get the original plot of this story down to papper. While the story flowed I kept getting many ideas on how to improve and couldn't decide how to evenly make sure I could do them all without making the characters overpowered,proverbial gods, and pretty much make the story to cluttered and have no actual plot. I originally planed for hydra to replicate wolverine's healing factor and give it to max and his rule 63 version to make it seem like the ultimate super-soldier but than I realized that would make him and her over powered and that would have made the story worse. So I made the oc have regular healing. Any way with that rant over hope you all can at least make a better version than I did. Because really you all saw how I suddenly switch pov and did in fight scenes and to be honest I did not do background detail much as I was not sure how to word it. Think this version of spider-man is a fusion of previous incarnations:
unlimited, ultimate, amazing, and the comic version. That was what I based this spider-man off of. The electric webs thing was to signal that peter's spider-sense was tied to the electric signals of his brain. His sixth sense is actually a mix of his heightened senses from the more active parts of his brain. His danger sense is because his electric signals in his brain was accelerated and more charged.
My guess was that when his DNA got altered his mental capacity got overcharged in the terms of his five senses and they together formed a subconscious that takes in all of peter's surroundings and alerts him when danger is going to happen like most animals and insects. His spider-sense is actually his subconscious alerting him. We all know he was smart before the bite and if he gets really ticked his electric signals might manifest as a new power and we all saw what that might manifest as in my story but it could also increase his speed and strength. this might explain how he can park-our so well and how his reaction time is so quick. Again I ranted. Oh well if you all got answers from that than you will have a better time understanding how the story can go to the point of seeing a bit of my thought process. until someone adopts this story in that case I would review to show how I thought of the version. And to be honest in ultimate spider-man I did put my exact feelings about Mary Jane Watson and harry onto here from what I noticed. The only ones peter ever hangs out recently was his team and on occasion the avengers not anyone else from his school that shows that peter is having a hard time staying stable in his life as peter parker and not spider-man.
The usual golden trio of spider-man here has officially been destroyed by the stress peter feels about new york. Think peter hides his grief of his uncle in a jokester personality, he is stressed from jameson, getting bullied and it really did not help when it looked like his childhood friends abandoned him. Really the only ones keeping him stable is his team. It's obvious that only Ava knows the real peter considering how much the two went through with kraven. So yeah im impressed peter didn't break down since Ben's funeral. But he can't keep it bottled up forever it will come out if the stress builds. I am really sorry but my mind has gone blank on this story and I hope you all can forgive me about this. Well this is geohikari152 the second and I bid you all farewell./span/p