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Chapter 2
First Victim
Xemnas/Samen POV
I sensed it immediately, Ansem is back. I would go to where he landed but the only thing that stopped me was that I sensed something evil or someone evil, Maleficent. If I can sense her here then it must mean that Ansem is dead, and that we are in danger. The only bright side is she doesn't know where all of us are, the only members who know all of our locations is Me, Saïx, Larxene, Zexion and Xigbar. If she wants to find all of us she's gonna have to go through us. Almost Immediately though I don't know how I know, but I know she knows where I am and she is after me. I would move to another location but that would mean my Friends being suspicious of my immediate move, its not that I don't trust them I do, but I get the feeling 1 of them could be her spies, No ,I'll stay here. Let her come. All I need to do is get Saïx out of the way so he doesn't get killed as well.
"Jax! Come down here we need to talk"
"for the 20th time Sam I am not getting into bed with you, unlike you I am busy with work!"
"Jaxon this is important this is not about getting into bed"
Saïx makes a noise that tells him hes getting off the couch. What a lazy excuse to watch sport honestly Work, What kind of job is watching sport?
"What do you want!?"
"we need to talk about Organization XIII"
This gets his attention
"What about it? For the 8th time Sam they are perfectly safe from her"
"Will you just shut up and listen! They are no longer safe! Can't you sense her with your doggy senses? She's here!"
"and she doesn't even know our location there is nothing to worry about"
"LISTEN JAX!"
From the look on his face Saïx realizes this is important, He gives me another look when he realizes she is walking in our direction
"Listen carefully Saïx. You need to watch over the others make sure they aren't hurt or in danger, Take action if you have to."
"what about you can't you….?"
"no one knows about you but a few know about me…. I'm no longer safe"
"No. We have already lost our sombodies and Ansem I am not losing you too you or the others…. We are ready Xem, we are ready to fight her"
"Not all of us are ready, sure you have mastered your abilities but I haven't. Give them enough time a few days a month, then we are all ready"
"you are willing to risk your life to save them, C'mon Xemnas the 5 of us can do it, we don't need Xion Roxas or Axel or the other 9"
"how would you know Zexion and the other 2 are ready ? Is it because we are older than the others? I am the oldest and I'm not ready"
"I won't leave you, I won't let you die"
I had no choice but kiss him
"Please Saïx, Do it for me"
This convinces him as he kisses me back, Turned into his Puppy form and ran off into the Night. An hour or 2 has passed and I knew that she was close. I decided to step outside and I immediately felt a wave of darkness.
"y'know it takes more than that to sneak up on me Maleficent, if you want to kill me now try getting here without me sensing you"
"oh I'm not here to kill you"
"yeah that's right let me guess Pete and the heartless"
"how about Friends?"
Friends!? Who could she possibly be talking about
"Are you confused Xemnas, now who could possibly be betraying you? Hmm? You can come out now"
Immediately I see a face I recognize
"You!? Why you? How did you even know our locations only 6 of us know!"
"I may not be the oldest Xemnas but I'm not the stupidest unlike Demyx. You see she told me that if I revealed the locations of the rest of the Organization I Can live."
"You should be ashamed of yourself she is using you like a puppet don't listen to her. After she kills us she will kill you"
"ENOUGH!"
Before I could do anything I felt a stab of Pain as a weapon went through me, my vision starts to blacken and before I die I looked at the traitor directly in the face whom had tears flowing down the cheeks, my last words to the Traitor was
"I hope you BURN in hell"
Elsewhere around the world the rest of the members of the organization felt the burn of 1 on their arms, Which warned them that Xemnas was dead and they are next.
Who is the traitor :O i gave you enough hints on who it isn't
