Okay guys, so I got a review from hetalianorwayfan and I think that you all deserve to know what I'm going to say to this. They said:
I love the story, but you seriously need to update. I have been looking for new chapters in this story, but I haven't found any yet! I think that you should have the roll call list changed so that Harry appears as "Harry Williams-Beilschmidt"! Because otherwise it would seem that the professors didn't get the message. I would also like to see Malfoy's personality change from "muggle-hating pureblood" to "I don't care about magical heritage". And also, have Prussia propose to Canada on Christmas vacation. that would be so cool!
In response to this, I would like to say that I am trying my hardest to update, but my life is incredibly hectic. Homework is piling up and I'm trying to help out my cousin with all her problems, plus I do have a life and I'm already writing so many stories at once. I am trying to write in order to please all of you, but it is hard, so don't rush me because it is extremely stressful. Also, Dumbledore chose to ignore the letter and didn't tell the staff because he wanted Harry to be recognized as Harry Potter. This has been done so many times before and he thinks that it wouldn't matter if Harry was recognized as Potter for his little pawn. And yes, I will eventually change Draco's personality because there will be no other way. I'm thinking it'll go a little something like Ron stooping to Draco's level and then Draco just going "Oh heck no, that's it, I'm officially becoming better than Ron Weasel." This is just some information I thought to answer any questions others have read, but also thanks for the suggestion, I might just do that if other readers want. If not, I'll have Prussia propose on Canada's birthday.
Also, to Guest who said:
I would love to help with Dawn's problem, but sadly, I have zero love experince. Although I would say don't do anything with guy #2 because it will be awkward with her friend around. On another note, I'm a little upset that Harry didn't go to Pigfarts, the headmaster, Rumbleroar, is a lion. Plus the school is on Mars! ;D
I've heard of Pigfarts before! I heard it was a wonderful school!
Harry: Unfortunately, mom said that it was too far away and cost too much.
Canada: *blushing* HARRY STOP CALLING ME MOM!
America: Dude, that would have been SO AWESOME!
Ummm…. Okay, random intervention from the nations, but anyway. That's all I really have for you guys, so enjoy the chapter! BTW, the details in this chapter are a bit fuzzy so I'm sorry this took so long to update. I needed to remember the details and get the book but I had other stuff that I needed first. Also, funny little thing about guy #1 (the non-stalkerish one), it turns out that he might just be gay. Either way, it's a win-win situation. Dawn either has a guy liking her or gets to see real live shounen-ai eventually.
PLEASE R&R AND ENJOY!
This text is taken straight out of the book
Chapter 4
No one's POV
Dumbledore smiled discretely at the fact that Harry got into Gryffindor. This ensured him that his pawn would still be on the light side no matter what. He had no clue that Harry was a bit too rash and would most definitely not take orders from anyone except his parents and Canada's boss if it was absolutely necessary. Seriously, he did exactly the opposite of what England had ordered him to do once. (This was when England was babysitting him and told him to sit down and stay silent. Harry had instead run around the house screaming. England got a few weird looks from the neighbors and the police investigated the next day to make sure that he wasn't doing anything illegal to children)
"WE GOT POTTER, WE GOT POTTER!" The Weasley Twins cheered. Harry smiled and sat down, waving to his friends at the other tables. After "Blaise, Zabini" had been placed in Slytherin, Dumbledore stood up with a smile on his face and a twinkle in his eye.
"Welcome!" he said. "Welcome to a new year at Hogwarts! Before we begin our banquet, I would like to say a few words. And here they are: Nitwit! Blubber! Oddment! Tweak! Thank you!" He sat down as everyone clapped and cheered. Harry just had a bewildered expression on his face and turned to the redheaded prefect, Percy Weasley, beside him.
"Is he mad?" He asked. Well, he is mad considering he wants to turn me into a pawn, but still, that's not normal, he added mentally.
"Mad?" Percy echoed. "He's a genius! But yes, I do suppose he is a bit mad." Harry nodded and turned back at the table. He saw the food and then suddenly cried out in horror.
"Th-th-this is BRITISH FOOD!" He exclaimed in absolute terror, falling out of his seat. All eyes in the Great Hall turned to him, but he paid no mind to it.
"U-uhh, mate, are you alright?" Seamus Finnigan questioned hesitantly. Harry stood up and pointed at the food with wide eyes.
"When my papa ate British food, he got sick!" He exclaimed. "When my vater ate it, he passed out! The last time I ate it, I was bedridden for three days!"
"Wait, haven't you lived in England all your life?" Ron Weasley asked. Harry gave him a surprised look.
"You mean the old coot didn't tell your Ministry?" He asked. "I've lived in Canada all my life with my parents eating Canadian food and…" hearts seem to float around his head as his eyes became sparkly. "PANCAKES! I would have had beer, but apparently I'm under-aged." He pouted. "So unawesome!"
"Harry," Hermione said as she walked over from the Ravenclaw table, "we're eating this food and none of us have died yet, so I think we're okay." Harry grumbled and sat down. He reluctantly took a piece of roast chicken and took a bite. He hummed and placed more food on his plate.
"Not bad, I suppose," he commented. "It still has nothing on the pancakes Papa makes." Without another word to anyone, he dug into his food.
"That looks good," a ghost said wistfully.
"I'm sorry that you can't eat, mister ghost," Harry told him. The ghost nodded sadly, but then brightened.
"Oh, it's no big deal," he assured the young nation. "My name is Sir Nicholas de Mimsy-Porpington, resident ghost of the Gryffindor Tower."
"You're Nearly Headless Nick!" Ron gasped. "My brothers told me about you."
"Nearly headless? How can you be nearly headless?" Seamus Finnigan interrupted.
"Like this," Sir Nicholas said irritably. He tugged on his left ear and his head fell onto his shoulder. Obviously, someone had attempted to behead him before he died and did not do it correctly. While most people were disgusted, Harry simply shrugged and went back to eating.
"How are you not affected by that?" Seamus asked, gaping. Harry gave him a pointed look.
"Well, have you ever walked in on your parents going at it on the dining room table when you were five years old, and then in the living room when you were eight years old?" he asked. He didn't wait for an answer and went to talking to Sir Nicholas. He learned about the other first years' heritage and learned of a Professor Quirrell after asking who he was due to his scar hurting when he looked in his direction. He knew something was off about the supposedly nervous wreck of a professor.
After a while, the food disappeared and Dumbledore stood up, silencing everyone. He warned the students about not going to the right-hand side of the third floor corridor, how you can't use magic in between classes, something about Quidditch, and then had everyone sing the Hogwarts song.
"Hogwarts, Hogwarts, Hoggy Warty Hogwarts,
Teach us something please,
Whether we be old and bald
Or young with scabby knees,
Our heads could do with filling
With some interesting stuff,
For now they're bare and full of air,
Dead flies and bits of fluff,
So teach us things world knowing,
Bring back what we've forgot,
Just do your best, we'll do the rest,
And learn until our brains all rot."
The song ended with the Weasley twins singing to a very slow funeral march. Dumbledore then sent them off to bed. Harry followed Percy to the common room, along with the rest of the Gryffindors. Walking sticks suddenly floated by them and started throwing themselves at Percy.
"Peeves," Percy whispered. "A poltergeist." He raised his voice, "Peeves, show yourself." A loud sound like the air leaving a balloon answered his call. "I'll get the Bloody Baron." A pop abd a little man appeared, floating in the air with the sticks.
"Oooo, Ickle Firsties!" He cackled. "Fun!" He swooped down at them and everyone ducked.
"Peeves, stop it this instant or I will get the Bloody Baron!" Percy barked. Peeves stuck out his tongue and vanished from sight, the sticks landing on some poor first year's head.
"You want to watch out for Peeves," Percy advised. "He only listens to the Bloody Baron, no one else." They eventually reached the end of the corridor where a portrait of a fat woman wearing a pink silk dress was hanging.
"Password?" She asked.
"Caput Draconis," Percy said. The portrait swung forward and revealed a hole in the wall. The Gryffindors scrambled through it and found that they were in the Gryffindor common room. Percy showed them where the girls dormitory were and where the boys dormitory were before shooing them off to bed. Harry found himself in a room with Ron, Seamus, and Dean Thomas, but they were all much too tired to talk, so they pulled on their pajamas and went to bed.
That night, the only nightmare Harry had was never being able to see his parents again because the old coot sent him to the Dursleys.
Yeah, basically just the arriving at Hogwarts and stuff. I actually just got the book today so I'll be following the chapters in the book and many things will be the same, other than manipulative!Dumbledore and some other stuff, of course. I'll probably be updating faster now that I have the book because I have a limited time to keep it considering it's a library book.
REMEMBER TO DRAW HARRY WILLIAMS-BEILSCHMIDT FOR THE CONTEST.
P.S. Do you guys think I should pair Harry with Draco? :o I don't know why, but I have recently gained a love for Drarry.
