Hello there! It's my first story, so sorry if there's mistakes in it. Now enjoy!
Also, Madara Uchiha is actually a good person in this story, and the evil Madara is a impostor. For now.
"Talking"
"Jutsu / Flashback"
"Bjiu"
'Thought'
Naruto of the Rinnegan
He was now ready to go back to Konoha.
Naruto was strolling through a route to Konohagakure when he heard a twig crack. Grabbing a kunai, he posed a defensive postion, he saw that it was only a old man. Putting the kunai back, Naruto asked the elder, "What are you doing there?" "I just was walking the road of life, you should try it sometime." 'Wow! He is a crazy old bat!' Naruto thought. "Anyways, what's your name, boy?" the elder asked. "I'm Madara." Naruto told him his name, and Madara exclaimed, "Maelstorm? My, you have a dangerous name!" Madara liked him and decided to stroll along with Naruto.
They walked for days, and Naruto liked Madara, so he decided to tell the old man his secret because he was kind to him. "Hey, Madara-san, I know we only met days ago, but I want to show you something and you have to promise to never tell?" Madara nodded, "Sure, Naruto." the Uzumaki then transformed his left eye into a sharingan eye. Madara almost had a heart attack, and all but yelled "Naruto! How did you get the doujutsu?!" Naruto proceeded to tell his encounter with Kabuto, and the fight occurred. Madara slowly nodded and when Naruto was done, Madara said, "Naruto, I have to tell you my secret, I'm Madara Uchiha. I can teach you the ways of Sharingan. But you have to hide it because the Uchiha do not love it when outsiders has their prized eyes." Madara's eyes transformed into the Sharingan. Naruto's mouth was open and stuttered, but composed himself. He then respectfully accepted. "I accept your training, Madara-sensei." the Uchiha's face then turned into a face of malice, 'Oh yeah, it will be fun!' "Let's train NOW!" Madara jumped and Naruto took a stance.
A few weeks later..
Naruto was exhausted after sparring with the legendary Uchiha. "Excellent! You are getting better at Tajijutsu, Ninjutsu, Sealing Arts and even Genjutsu!" Madara proudly told Naruto. When Naruto was training with Madara, he forced the red haired boy to perform chakra exercises until he could walk on water for nearly a day. Due to that, he could do a triple layers Genjutsu, and even created a genjutsu that pulls up a victim's darkest fears and do most fearful things. Madara was particularly proud of that.
"Naruto. I have to tell you something about your Rinnegan. Since you have mastered the Sharingan to the highest, like you can react to your enemies' moves and project A-rank genjutsus on someone, we can proceed to your eye's next stage, the Rinnegan." Madara told to Naruto, and reached in his bag then got a scroll in his hands. "I stole it from the Fire Temple where the Rinnegan's power was documented by the Sixth Paths of Sage. Now you can study how to use the Rinnegan. Oh! I almost forget that!" He got a different scroll and told Naruto "That is the next stage of the Sharingan, the Mangekyou Sharingan. It is most powerful, but it comes at a cost. You see, you have to witness a traumatic event where your loved one gets killed, your grief unlocks the curse. Also, when you use it, you get a bit blind so that if you use it too much you'll become blind. Do not mention anything about your eye to anyone, even your own friends and the Hokage, except for normal Sharingan." Madara warned. Naruto gulped but nodded.
When all suddenly, the bandits appeared from the forest. "Let's kill the old cronk and the brat. I want to see if they have any money!" the leader shouted. "Naruto. Don't use your sharingan, we don't want any tricky business." and threw a kunai to a bandit's head and it exploded due to the note, the gore was spread on the bandits who were taken back. Madara, despite his age, lunged forward to the bandits who had gore on them and were blinded by the blood. Madara used that chance and sliced his enemy's throat and grabbed the esophagus out to frighten the bandits. A fearless bandit got his katana and foolishly exclaimed, "Hey, you old coot! You can't do shit against my sword!" and lunged forward. Madara scoffed because in his eyes, he was slower than a snail and grabbed the sword, then the Uchiha legend broke the tip off and stabbed the tip to the fool's eye. He screamed his lungs off and Madara grabbed his remaining eye and squashed his eye. "That is the power of the Uchiha. Leave." Madara powerfully spoke, some bandits ran but most remained. Madara sighed. He then proceeded to perform the handsigns and shouted "Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku!"
What happened was Naruto remembered why Madara Uchiha was the most feared enemy. He blew out a huge fireball and it burned all bandits to the ash, and ash to nothing while still screaming. But next, the old age caught up to Madara and fell down, and Naruto ran to support Madara. "Are you ok?! Do you need medicine!?" Naruto cried out to Madara. "No, it's time that I die. Naruto, I had a lot of fun teaching and mentoring you. But it's time I go to end of the road of life." Madara croaked out "Naruto...You..need to swap with my left eye, I have a Eternal Mangekyou, that means you cannot be blind when using it. It's my gift to you, use...it...wisely...also...use...my...battle..fan."Madara gasped and coughed out blood "Plea..se...bury...me...next...to...Hashirama...I..can...see...him..."Madara smiled and his eyes closed.
Naruto cried harder. Harder than when he cried in the orphanage. Harder than when he was chased by the mob. Harder when he was lost in the forest. Naruto inhaled deeply and switched his eye with Madara using his limited medic skills he had learnt from the battle hardened veteran.
He could see much more clearly and the left eye transformed into Madara's eternal Mangekyou Sharingan, then into the Rinnegan. 'Madara-sama, I will use the eye to right the wrongs of the shinobi. You won't regret the day you met me!' Naruto determinedly thought.
Next day...
Naruto was reading the scrolls when he saw the village gates. He got to the guards when they noticed him and asked "Who are you and what is your purpose here in Konohagakure?"
"Uzumaki Naruto and to reunite with my village." Naruto cooly replied.
And..Cliffhanger! Sorry. So you know Madara does have a heart after all, what do you think of this? Should Naruto get Mokuton? Please review so i can improve with writing more chapters. I'm thinking about giving Naruto three nature affinity, Wind, Fire and water.
