Hey people, thanks for the nice reviews. Wow, 56 reviews at the moment. Awesome! Never had this many reviews… ill try to keep going. I usually never dedicate this much time to writing, and 12 chapters… wow. I'll see how long I can keep this up maybe ill keep going until you guys get bored with me.
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Scary Stories Re-Told
The Man in the Middle
It was almost midnight; Raven had gotten on a subway train at 13th street after visiting her friend.
"Don't worry, the subway is safe… there's always a policeman on duty…"
Her friend had said, but that night she didn't see one on the train. She was the only one in the subway car.
"Where is everyone?"
At 16th street, three tough looking guys got on; two were holding up the third. He looked drunk, his head rolled around, his feet wouldn't move.
"Well… at least I won't be alone…"
The men sat down, with the 'drunken' guy in the middle. His head rested on one of the guys shoulders. He seemed to be staring straight at raven, she tried to ignore him.
"Oooookay…SOME-one has staring problems…"
At 20th street, one of the men stood up and said:
"Take it easy Mumbo…"
To the man in the middle, and got off the train. Then at 24th street, Mumbo's other friend got up and said:
"You'll be fine…"
And then he got off.
So now the only people on the train were Raven and Mumbo.
Just then the train went around a sharp curb and Mumbo pitched onto the floor at Ravens feet.
When she looked down at him she saw a trickle of blood on the side of his head, and above it… a bullet hole.
End
Sorry for the 'long' delay, I was busy and… well sorry to keep you waiting. Hope this isn't too boring. So as usual…Review please!