Breathing/burning burning/breathing. The black smoke from the green flames suffocated him unable to breathe because if he did he would burn, an intense yellow light had erupted in his vision and he was drawn into it.

The first thing he saw was a face distorted in almost a cartoony way his head cleared a bit more and he saw he was looking through the curved glass of his bio-pod. He recognized the face belonging to ziguraht the head scientist who was enoemian and naturally took the greatest interest in him. His face was grave and was almost successful at holding no emotion. "I am sorry there…was nothing we could do for him, he suffered a painful and slow death in the last augmentations surgery. It was to my understanding the new recruit made a mistake." What who died and when!?"

He demanded in a tone that meant that he was not to be bombarded with meaningless riddles. "Your father at the time your alt upgrade was being infused with your supporting frame." Ziguraht replied. Kanden was the first to break the silence. "I see, please leave Me." Alright your schedule is strict tomorrow though so maybe you ease your mind with some training exercises." Then he left him. Kanden stood outside of his pod thinking deeply to himself for hours until night came,

"come" he looked up to see what fool demanded his attention at such a sour time but there was no one in the current proximity his sensors had told him. " We are imprisoned in the endless void!" Echoed a multitude of voices deeper than any living being should be able to. He looked around still despite his sensors, "COME!" He couldn't help but be pulled toward the stairs that led to the ground level, as he drifted to his unknown destination he noticed there were no scientists busily milling about. As there should have been, he eventually found his way to the restricted area that he was forbidden to pass through unless ordered to by highest authority. He tried to stop himself but he didn't feel like it, so instead he just tore the alarm and then the lock away hoping nobody would notice yet "closer" ordered the omnipresence,

as he opened the door he noticed many different things the first being the unusual transparent glass portals on the walls and doors farther ahead, some of them were open and he detected that there was some form of gas gently coming through and he could see a starry sky framed by a luminescent forest, his onboard A.I told him the sweet smelling gas was unfiltered raw air with no added sanitizing aerosol. His gaze to the forest could not be broken even if someone shot at him. He quickly morphed into the Stinglarva and went outside.

A rule broken that is punishable by ejection into the nearest star "Radion."


as you can see I am tyring to keep most things linear to the metroid story as possible I also tried to shorten it so its easier to read and its more spaced out. And the next chapter will be much longer