I don't own Naruto, although I wish I had a part share in it. All I own are my Oc characters who pop up in my stories.

So this is the second part of The Last Promise. It's from a different character, and I'm worried she doesn't come across how I want her to. Well, here goes...

Dear Otou-san,

How are you? Do you miss Okaa-san? Do you miss my brother and me?

Okaa-san says you died before you knew about us, but we were your last gift to her. I don't understand what she means, and no one will explain it to me.

She doesn't talk about you much, most of what I know comes from Sakura-oba-san and Choji-oji-san, but I think she misses you.

My brother and I are ten years old now, and we're in the Ninja Academy. Iruka-sensei takes us out for ramen sometimes when Okaa-san is away on missions and we're staying with Sakura-oba-san or Choji-oji-san.

People say I look a lot like you. How is that possible, if I'm a girl and you're a guy?

I asked Tsunade-baa-san to tell me about you once when I was little, but she looked like she was going to cry when she told me that you were sunshine. Is that why Okaa-san called me Youko and my brother Taiki?

Taiki says you were mean for leaving Okaa-san, but I think you'd be here if you could. I mean, if you're the person Sakura-oba-san and Choji-oji-san say you were, then you'd be here if you could be.

I don't know how to get this letter to you, so I'll put it with all the others in the box under my bed, but maybe you'll get my message no matter what I do.

I just wanted to tell you that I wish I'd met you, even once. You're my Otou-san, after all.

Are you proud of me? Did you want me? Would you love me if you knew me? Maybe one day when we finally meet you can tell me yes or no, but for now I'll pretend that you are proud of me and that you did want me.

So, from the daughter you never knew about, I'll say this: I love you, Otou-san. I always will.

Youko

Taiki means great radiance and Youko means sunlight child

So, how does Youko come across? Is she too insecure for your taste or too sappy? Feedback is appreciated