Pairings: SasuNaru

Summary: Cinderella - Naruto style.

Warnings: Yaoi, swearing, lemon (eventual) - basically all the good stuff

Other: "Talking" 'Thinking'

Disclaimer: HA! I wish!

LEMON! LEMON!

I HAVE SOMETHING TO SAY!! READ THIS, ESPECIALLY 'Obscure Omen'

If you've read the reviews for this story you may have noticed I got a rather well thought out and detailed one from Obscure Omen.

Obscure Omen has already expressed that it's not flaming and is calling it constructive critisism.

Now, I am pro-constructive critisism, and I tip my hat to Obscure Omen for taking the time to write such a big review, and also for leaving the link to her own profile. That's a lot mor couragous than those that sing with '.' or something similar.

First thing's first. Obscure Charm, you're first mistake is thinking that I actually care a fuck about this fanfic. I DON'T! This is something I've done to shut up the people looking for 'Where Is My Mind?' updates. I DON'T GIVE A RATS ASS ABOUT THIS FIC!!! It's supposed to be shit!!!

I sat down and wrote this... so fast! I can write a chapter for this in half an hour or less. Yeah I know that their personalities are way off, but I don't care.

Oh, and thinking of a 'new original plot' doesn't work here - it's supposed to be exactly the same.

I agree with most of your points, but I just don't care. Another thing you said: You have a good grasp on grammar and sentence structure, which is a
lot more than most people on this site have.

I know heaps of people on this site don't have a good grammer grasp, at least I do. So go pick on them. Or better yet, don't pick on them. Become a Beta and help them.

As for the rest of you, sorry you had to read that. Enjoy the pointless smut.

Happy Endings

Chapter Nine

Naruto watched Sasuke suspiciously as the Prince escorted him back to his room. Sasuke had been… less than happy… to find out that Naruto actually meant to enforce his 'no touching' rule. Naruto had managed to keep it up for three days, mainly by spending time with Iruka, but he knew Sasuke was up to something.

Sasuke was pissed. His adorable little dobe was actually keeping his promise and not letting Sasuke touch him. Sasuke was about ready to jump him.

'Hmm… not a bad idea…'

"Thank you, your highness," Naruto said formally as they reached his room. "I appreciate it."

Sasuke rolled his eyes before moving. He pushed Naruto against his doors, his lips flying immediately to Naruto's neck. Naruto moaned, his eyes rolling back in his head.

"S-Sas- ah! Sasuke!" he moaned. "No…"

"No?" Sasuke repeated against the blonde's neck. "No?"

"No!" Naruto repeated as he gripped Sasuke's hair. "I said no…"

"Silly dobe," Sasuke chuckled as he moved slowly to the blonde's mouth. "Don't forget who the Prince is and who the bride is…"

"Bastard!" Naruto snapped. "I'm not a gir-"

Sasuke attacked Naruto's mouth, moaning at the taste of his dobe. He missed that.

"You're not a girl?" Sasuke asked as he moved back. Naruto whimpered softly. "Let me see the proof…"

Naruto's eyes flew open and he glared at the raven.

"No!" he snapped. "We're getting married soon! Wait!"

"No," Sasuke growled. "You ran away once, I don't want you to run again."

"Sasuke…" Naruto breathed. "Oh Sasuke…no! I'm not going again!"

Sasuke rested his head on Naruto's shoulder as he took a deep breath.

"I love you, Naruto," he whispered. "I love you so much. I-I can't lose you. Not again."

Naruto used his grip in Sasuke's hair to tug the raven closer. He devoured his mouth eagerly, swirling his tongue around tasting his Prince.

Sasuke moaned softly before forcing Naruto's tongue out of his mouth. He followed the muscle back into the blonde's mouth until Naruto broke the kiss.

"Yes," he whispered, his eyes closed. "Yes, Sasuke, yes. Yes, yes, yes."

"Y-Yes?" Sasuke repeated. Naruto nodded.

"Yes, Sasuke," he said softly. "Let's go…"

Sasuke reached behind the blonde, opening the door. They stumbled into the room, Sasuke slamming the door shut behind them. Naruto's mouth latched back on to his as Sasuke led them towards the bed. Naruto's hands remained tangled in raven locks as he fell back, Sasuke groaning in protest at the sharp tug to his hair. Naruto ignored his complaints, coaxing the raven's tongue back into his mouth.

Sasuke's tongue explored the blonde's mouth as his hands explored Naruto's body. Naruto moaned loudly, eyes rolling as he felt Sasuke's hands trailing over his body, leaving a trail of fire along his body.

"S-Sasuke…" Naruto whispered as Sasuke slid down to his neck. "Yes…yes…yes…"

Sasuke growled, biting Naruto's neck. Every word that fell from the blonde's beautiful lips spurned him on. He marked the blonde until his neck was a tapestry of marks that screamed 'Property of Sasuke.'

Sasuke leaned back, Naruto moaning at the loss of contact. Sasuke tugged his shirt off, smirking as the blonde's eyes locked onto the exposed flesh before glazing over. He reached down, ridding Naruto of his shirt quickly. A soft moan slipped through Sasuke's pale lips as his eyes traced the caramel chest before him.

A blush raced up Naruto's neck and over his face as he looked up at Sasuke with glazed eyes. Sasuke smiled softly, leaning in and pressing his lips softly against the blonde's. Naruto smiled into the kiss, his lust-dazed eyes sliding shut at the soft, intimate contact. Sasuke allowed the simple kiss to continue before he released the plump lips. As Naruto's eyes began to open Sasuke stole another kiss, this one deeper, sliding his tongue into the blonde's mouth as his hands came up to play with Naruto's nipples.

As the hands reached his chest Naruto panted heavily in Sasuke's mouth. Every time Sasuke's skin came into contact with his, Naruto's mind exploded in a flurry of sensations. His head was dizzy with Sasuke's sharp taste, a potent and intoxicating flavour. His skin felt like fire, racing beneath his skin and spreading all through his body, intensifying where Sasuke was pressed against him.

"Ngh…" Naruto moaned loudly as Sasuke's lips slid down to take over the job of one of his hands. The suction was incredible. Sasuke's tongue darted out to wrap around the erect bud before he soothed it gently. Naruto arched up slightly, hands coming up to grip Sasuke's soft hair.

Sasuke growled lightly as he moved to mark Naruto's chest. Naruto panted heavily as his hands slid from the black locks, gripping the sheets as Sasuke continued to burn a trail south with kisses, nips and licks.

Hands fumbling at his pants drew Naruto back to reality. His eyes snapped open and met Sasuke's jet black gaze, glaring at the smirk on the raven's pale face. Naruto's blush intensified and he looked to the side.

"Just do it, teme!" Naruto snapped. Sasuke's smirk faded.

"Are you so eager to get this over and done with, Naruto?" Sasuke asked in a soft and sad voice. Naruto's eyes widened and he grabbed Sasuke's head, pulling him up into a heated kiss. Sasuke allowed the move, sliding his tongue into Naruto's mouth almost hesitantly. Sasuke's tongue swirled around his mouth wile Naruto sucked on it. Sasuke withdrew with his eyes still cautious. Naruto glared at him.

"Teme," he hissed, his blue eyes boring into the raven's. "I want you so bad. And after we're done, and I'm lying in your arms telling you how much I love you, I'll still want you. I'll always want you."

Sasuke saw the truth in Naruto's eyes and allowed a soft smile to slip onto his face. He claimed the blonde's lips again, swamping Naruto with his taste once more. As Naruto's mouth was ravished, he felt hands tugging at his pants. He smiled into the kiss as Sasuke removed his pants. Naruto lifted his hips, allowing Sasuke to strip the blonde entirely. Naruto reached up to fumbled with Sasuke's pants as he broke for desperately needed air. Sasuke slid down to his neck, unruffled.

Naruto fumbled with Sasuke's pants until Sasuke took over the job himself. Sasuke tore his own pants and underwear off, leaving him as bare as the blonde.

Sasuke sat back on his heels in between the blonde's legs. His eyes trailed over Naruto, alight with lust and want. His eyes rested on Naruto's erect member and he smirked. Naruto glared up at the raven, not liking the condescending smirk.

"Teme…" he growled. "Call me… eager… but I would appreciate it if you would stop looking and get down to it."

Sasuke froze, his smirk growing.

"Get down to it?" he repeated as he licked his lips. "Well, if you insist…"

Before Naruto could reply Sasuke leaned in, breathing lightly on Naruto's erect member. Naruto's breath hitched and he sat up quickly.

"S-Sasuke?" he stuttered. "Wh-What are you d-doing?"

"What does it look like, dobe?" Sasuke purred. He swiped his tongue over the head of Naruto's member, lapping up the precum. Naruto's eyes glazed before he dropped back. Sasuke smirked before opening his lips and closing them around Naruto's member. Naruto gasped loudly as the wet mouth enveloped his member, gripping the sheets tighter.

As Sasuke's tongue ran over his member, Naruto moaned loudly. He tried to buck into the warm mouth but hands on his hips prevented it. Naruto groaned lowly; he wanted his member to be pushed further into that sinfully warm mouth. Sasuke, sensing that, lowered his lips further, taking Naruto all the way in.

Naruto panted heavily, moans slipping out of his plump lips as Sasuke sucked around his member. He was lost in the sensation of his lover's ministrations.

As Naruto continued to wither Sasuke raised three fingers to the blonde's mouth. Getting the idea, Naruto leaned forward, taking the fingers into his mouth. He sucked on them, trying to imitate what Sasuke was doing to his erection.

Sasuke hummed around Naruto's member as he removed his fingers. He lowered them to Naruto's entrance, pushing the first one in without hesitation.

Naruto barely noticed the intrusion as Sasuke continued to bob his head. Naruto tugged at the sheets as Sasuke added the second and then third fingers. Naruto groaned softly in slight discomfort as Sasuke stretched him further, but let out a loud mewl as he adjusted to the feeling.

Suddenly, white flashed across Naruto's vision as every nerve in his body seemed to scream in pleasure. He gasped loudly, pushing down on the fingers.

"S-Sasuke!" he gasped as the magical spot was pushed again. "Wh-What was that!?"

Sasuke smirked around the member before releasing it with a final suck. He prodded the spot again, successfully stopping any complaints Naruto might have had over it. Naruto arched up off the bed again while Sasuke chuckled.

"Feels good, ne?" Sasuke said. Naruto nodded frantically. "It'll feel better when I'm touching it with… something else…"

Naruto nodded again, eyes boring into Sasuke's.

"Now, Sasuke," he whispered. "I want you now…"

Sasuke didn't need to be told twice. In an instant he removed his fingers, earning a barely repressed growl from Naruto before he gripped the blonde's legs, spreading them further apart. He looked Naruto over for a moment before shaking his head. Before the blonde could question it, Sasuke rolled him onto his side, straddling a tan thigh. Sasuke gripped Naruto's other leg, throwing it over his shoulder. Naruto gripped the bedspread, panting heavily as Sasuke positioned himself at the blonde's entrance.

"S-Sasuke..." Naruto panted. "Please..."

"Please what, Naruto?" Sasuke asked in a cool voice. "What is it that you want?"

"You..." Naruto whispered. "I want you..."

With a light growl Sasuke began to push in. Naruto cried out in pain as his entrance was breached, biting his lower lip as tears welled up in his bright eyes. Sasuke planted soft kisses on every inch of skin he could reach as he continued to slide into the clamping heat.

Naruto's eyes screwed shut as he felt Sasuke slide the rest of the way into him. A soft sob slipped through his lips as the pain bore down on him. He felt like he was being split in two. Sasuke groaned lowly at the heat surrounding him, unable to stop the look of ecstasy from slipping onto his face. He shuffled slightly and Naruto winced. The pain was still there but it was subsiding.

"Naruto..." Sasuke whispered. Naruto opened his bright eyes, looking up at the prince. "I'm sorry... I know it hurts, but I can make it feel better..."

"P-Promise?" Naruto whispered. "R-Really?"

"Yes," Sasuke replied in an equally soft voice. "I promise."

"Ok then..." Naruto murmured as his eyes slid shut again. "Go."

Sasuke moved slowly, sliding back out of Naruto before moving back in. Naruto bit his lip as Sasuke moved, every thrust of the raven sending him edging from pain to pleasure. After a few minutes a soft moan flew from the blonde's lips, urging Sasuke on. Sasuke slammed in harder, at a new angle. He smirked as Naruto's eyes flew open, the blonde's breath abandoning his body in a soft 'oh...'

Sasuke hammered the spot, smirking in satisfaction as Naruto began to respond, gripping the sheets and moaning loudly, the occasional mewl thrown in. Sasuke's smirk grew as he continued to move in and out of Naruto, the tight heat clamping around and sucking him in.

"Naruto," he groaned. "You feel so good... you're pulling me in so tight."

"Ngh! Sasuke!" Naruto panted. "Hell..."

"I delivered on my promise, didn't I?" Sasuke murmured as he moved. "I always do..."

"Sasuke!" Naruto gasped as the raven slammed back into him, hitting that magic spot again. "God!"

Naruto had never felt so good in his life. Sasuke moved in and out of him, filling him completely. Every cell in his body seemed to be on fire, sending pleasure crashing through him in waves. Naruto could feel it building, hurtling towards him. He was going to burst.

"S-Sasuke!" he cried. "S-Sasuke- I'm gonna- it's- I-"

Sasuke slammed in harder, pleased to hear Naruto break off into a garbled moan. He reached down, grasping the blonde's forgotten member and pumping it, sending Naruto's pleasure to another level.

"Shit..." Sasuke hissed. He was going to come. He pumped faster, wanting his blonde to come first, or at least at the same time.

"S-Sauske!" Naruto screamed. "S-Sasuke! Oh fuck!"

With a final scream, Naruto burst. He exploded all over Sasuke's hand, staining the sheets. Sasuke thrust twice more inside of him before he came, filling Naruto with a low moan. He pulled out of the blonde, collapsing behind him on the bed. Naruto panted heavily, eyelids fluttering.

Sasuke smiled, wrapping his arms around Naruto tightly. Naruto struggled in his arms before turning around. The two men continued to pant until they caught their breaths, eyes locked. Sasuke moved in, pressing his lips against Naruto's. Naruto smiled, leaning back.

"I love you, Sasuke," he whispered as promised. "And I still want you."

Sasuke sealed his lips over Naruto's again, a simple kiss filled with love.

"I love you too, Naruto,"

Alright, that's the second to last chapter. I'm gonna go write the epilouge