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Alice POV:
She was smiling as she bounded into the room with a dreamy look on her face. I came up with Maddie and Kayla. They were all carrying their dresses and needed stuff. I arrived at the best part. I was seeing Bella with a confused facial expression while Bri just grinned at her happily. I could also see Maddie's dark brown eyes sparkling with a twinge of excitement and Kayla looking nervous. "I think Bri has a heart attack, "Maddie offered as a theory. Bri rolled eyes. "You're right, though are you sure it's nothing more serious than that?"I joked breaking the tension. "I'm going to have a surprise,"Bri said suspiciously. "Ok...so girls, it's time for make-overs"I shrieked jumping up and down. "Bella goes first, "Rose told us. Of course, she's probably the most unwilling one. The next would have to be Kayla.
I looked at all of them one by one. Kayla had a few waves and it was in a pony tail. Rose had her golden curls cascading down to the middle of her back. Bella had a brown bun with many clips and accessories. Bri's hair was straightened and I put a few dark brown highlights. Maddie had her hair in waves with her black hair down and ready to go. I jumped up and down in excitement as we changed into our dresses.
I skipped down the stairs but stopped abruptly with a shocked look on my face. It was amazing. There were a few balloons and decorations surrounding the room with long glass-topped tables set up where I thought food would be. I searched around the white and black walls. They had set it all perfectly and in order but me, being Alice and all, needed to fix or add more stuff if there was nothing to fix. I also had a frappe so I was just a little hyper. Ok, maybe not a little. I was more than a little.
I got to work and decided to check on the food. The food was very important. I ran to the kitchen which was in the middle of the 1st floor. I watched as our baker rolled on dough and flattened it. I realize he was making pizza because of the shape and that I could already smell pizza from the oven. We needed a lot of food. I jumped up and down at the sight. Mrs. Hale came through the door. I ran up and hugged her. "Thanks mom, I love the decorations and everything's perfect!"I exclaimed. "No problem, we also have the waterfall in the quiet areas too. The blinking lights and microphones are being installed now, "she announced with a smile that her choices were pleasing me. "Yay!"I said happily as I turned to go. I took a step. "Wait, I almost forgot to tell you." "Huh?"I replied, ready to be surprised.
Bella POV:
I stared in amazement at my reflection. It didn't look like me at all but it was. I turned around to thank Alice but she had already bounded down the stairs. I received confused glances with the others as well. I decided to let it go and started to turn on the flat screen on a random channel. We finally settled on one and watched intently. It wasn't that interesting so I stood up. "I'm going to my room to get a book,"I called out as I walked to the door. I walked into my spacious room to my collection of books. I scanned the rows until I found what I was looking for. I grabbed my new copy of "Wuthering Heights" and opened it while I was walking to the room. I heard Alice's soprano voice to my left. I looked over my shoulder and was almost ran over by her. She was talking animatedly on her cell with an annoyed voice. "Hey, I can't believe it!"she shrieked into the phone. Silence. "What? It's not like it's going to be that horrible as last time."Alice reasoned. Pause. "Please,"she said in a deadly sweet voice. "Don't make me drag you." "Yeah, definitely deadly,"I thought with pity. I realized that I was still standing near my bedroom door. I blushed noticing that Alice already seen me so I quickly walked away without a glance. "Yay! You're going to have to go shopping fast!"she said as her voice began to fade away.
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