I got one review. Its just that reviews truly bring a smile to my face thanks so M U C H to ILYTwilight my faithful reviewer. This chapter is for you, it truly means so much to me that you reviewed. To everyone else you added me to their alerts-thanks but please please please review it would mean the world, also trust me my updates will be way quicker never this long. I just felt my story was bad because I only got one review…Sorry It took like a month
R E A D D D D D- I might just stop updating this story-my first FanFic if I don't get reviews because I sorta feel like its bad now, so this M I G H T be the last chp..please review if you want me to keep ?
If there is a next chapter, the real action begins E and B talking !
G-O-N-E just like, goodbye. A sudden chilled draft his my arm as I realized my foolish dreams
It was back to home-back to hell, back to her.
Well, my angles fantasy was nice for a while, but now it back to the shallow depth of feeling like nothing.
I strolled out of the classroom and into the parking lot completely wrapped around my own selfish pity.
"Beep Beep." I straightened my neck and reached for my door handle as the same chilled draft froze my hand in place.
I moved my gaze upward only to see Edward Cullen standing at me door. He pulled me into a passionate kiss and whispered the words "run away." Into my ear sending several move shivers to overtake me.
My head snapped up just in time to see the football a mere inch from me head. With a smack I was on the floor with my backpack sprawled open, and my fantasy shattered.
I slowly and painfully stood as a shock of pain shot down my leg. However, nothing was more painful then knowing I had my first crush on a boy I could never know. Why would he ever want to talk to me- Isabella Swan?
I quickly erased the previous images from my head and began on my way home to my mother and her foolish games-anything was better than starting to hope for a fantasy that would never come true.
With this realization I lurched into my car and began to let my feelings unfold
I felt the weight of the world crushing on my shoulder
As my silent plea for help faded
Just as I did, crying and screaming
Let me go LET ME GO
The tears trickled they fell down my face
Ohh how I wished the pain would fall
Or just come out
Locked away in my soul it was
Growing with more and more power as it threatened
It took over
The pain enveloped me wholly
I gasped exasperated as I realized it was hopeless..
NO there was more
Save me
A shrill cry echoed from my heart as I stared
It wasn't over not yet
The pain didn't win
It couldn't
Suddenly awakened my fierce cries ripped into view
I sat their awe struck as my nightmare began
Only the nightmare faded and I was left standing
Collapsed on the floor I came- I realized
It wasn't a nightmare, it was me
I was not just a nothing, no because nothing, because nothings caused no harm. I sure as hell was something-a monster
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