Amazingly Lost

by bitchenpartygirl

P L E A S E O P E N *edward & bella* A tear trickled down my faced as I soon realized my case was hopeless-just like me. My silent plea for help eccoed helpless into the lonleyness of the night. Until one day me world was turned upside down by Edward..

8. The End Before It Even Began

Just when Edward and Bella where about to have their first long conversation (the next chapter)

A bullet ripped into view, snarling as the wind flew by- a mile per minute. As it came into view I let the thrill overtake me..it was finally over

Just then It when through me, "I am shot" I said to myself as I let my last heart beat fall. I just laid there and died

THE END of my FanFic

Opinions ? Haha I know this wasn't much of a story but honestly no one reviewed, so I guess I wasn't good, I actually have the next chapter written out like it was lONGG and bxe were talking and It was all the beginning but I got news that this was "sucked and was the worst fanfic" and I sort of agree.. it

But yea just let me know watcha think(: ? Should I write a new Fanfic or what ?