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Chapter Nine
Hello
Cody's POV:
I knocked on the door to the Seteone's suite. It has been three days since Joseph kidnapped Amy, Lilian, Zack, and Max. Amy hadn't left her suite since then. Zack still was in a coma. Joseph died when Max shot him. Lilian came to the door and opened it.
"Hi, Zack you woke up," Lilian said.
"I'm Cody," I said. Lilian looked upset when I said that. Mrs. Seteone came to the door.
"Cody, how are you, Amy's in Lilian's and her room," Mrs. Seteone said "before you go in listen for guitar music and singing, if you do wait till she's done." I walked over to the door and heard a guitar. I sat down so I could listen. Amy started singing. She's a good singer.
Sunny days seem to hurt the most
Wear the pain like a heavy coat
I feel you everywhere I go
I see your smile I see your face
Hear you laughing in the rain
Still can't believe you're gone
It ain't fair you died too young
Like a story that had just begun with death
Tore the pages all away
God knows how I miss you
All the hell that I've gone threw
Just know no one can take your place
Sometimes I wonder
Who you'd be today
Would you see the world, will you chase your dreams
Settle down with a family
Wonder what you'll name your baby
Some days the sky's so blue
Feel like I can talk to you
I know it might sound crazy
It ain't fair you died too young
Like a story that had just begun with death
Tore the pages all away
God knows how I miss you
All the hell that I've gone threw
Just know no one can take your place
Sometimes I wonder
Who you'd be today, today, today, todayyyy
Today, today, today, todayyyy
Sunny days seem to hurt the most
Wear the pain like a heavy coat
The only thing that gives me hope
Is I know
I'll see you again someday, someday, someday, somedayyyy
She finished the song and I knocked on the door.
"Come in," I heard from inside the room. I opened the door.
"Cody," Amy said.
"How you doing," I asked. She smiled.
"I'm fine, I have to get ready for Jenn's funeral, is Zack awake yet," Amy asked.
"No," I said flatly. Why does she still like him? Amy looked upset.
"I have to get ready, I'll see you at the funeral," Amy said. While walking out of her suite my cell phone went off. I have a text. It was from Max. She's at the hospital.
Text Message
Guess what….
At the Funeral:
Amy's POV:
We were greeting guests when I saw Carey. Cody's here. Then I saw Carey and two other people.
I was born in the heart of a hurricane season
In the house where my mama was raised
That old September wind
Feels just like a long lost friend
And I…
One was Max. She was wearing a spaghetti strap black dress. When she saw me she ran up and hugged me.
"How are you feeling," Max asked.
"Fine," I said. Max had a huge smile on her face.
"You'll be happy to know who's here," Max said. I stared at her confused.
I want to run threw the fields
Fall asleep in a bed of fresh fallen leaves
And in every wind that blows
There's a song of letting go
It's not goodbye…its hello
Zack walked up to me.
"Hi, Amy," Zack said. I hugged him and he held on to me.
Cody's POV:
Amy hugged Zack. What does he have that I don't?
Amy's POV:
I looked up at Zack. He leaned forward and kissed me one the lips. I returned the kiss and wrapped my arms around his neck. His arms went around my waist.
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