A/N: YAY!
I know some people are saying all the characters are very OOC, and yes, they are.
Let me explain, I had an English project where I had to write a modern romance story. I loved it so much, I rewrote the story on fictionpress. But it didn't get good feedback and a lot of flame. So I copied it and pasted it and changed all the names because I thought it would make a cute nejiten story. That's why some people saw the name "Alana" on here.
After the first like 10 chapters, they'll stop being so OOC because I only had 10 chapters on my fictionpress thing. Make sense?
I promise this is going somewhere and I have it all planned out!
Thanks for reading and I hoped that it cleared everything up!
Please read :)
The two of us walked into the backyard towards the pool.
"That's him," I hissed, tugging at her arm, "The guy in the pool."
As she saw him, her eyes widened slightly, and she stammered, "That's... your... future... husband?"
"Yes," I rolled my eyes, "Ugh, look at him show off. He's so annoying, honestly, I-"
I stopped mid sentence. Sakura wasn't even listening to me. Instead, she adopted this strange strut, and began to proceed towards the pool. As she reached the edge, she casually sat down, in a way that showed off her great legs perfectly. I trailed weakly behind her.
I don't believe this. I CAN'T believe this; it's just too... unreal. I tagged along behind Sakura as she began talking to him.
She grinned at him, "So you're Hyuua Neji."
"Hn." He swam towards the edge of the pool, leaning against the deck.
"So, where are you from again?" She smiled, as she twirled a strand of her hair.
She never twirls her hair.
"I'll tell you on one condition." he smirked at her.
"What's that?" she said breathlessly.
"You come join me for a swim." He gave her his little smirk.
She giggled a very un-Sakura-ish giggle. "Oh, I'd love to!"
I
DON'T
BELIEVE
IT.
My best friend and my future husband are flirting with each other.
She than turned to me for the very first time, "Do you mind if I borrow your bathing suit Tenten?"
"Err-" both of them were staring at me now. "Sure, no problem!" I said, as I gave a fake laugh, "Help yourself! It's up in my room!"
"Thanks Tenten!" She beamed at me, "You're the best!"
She dashed up my room eagerly. Right as she left, I turned to Neji.
"I know exactly what you're up to," I whispered angrily in a low voice, "You can forget about it! Sakura would never fall for a jerk face like you!"
"Hn," He said casually, "So stop making false accusations Tenten... or are you merely jealous?"
I could feel my face turn green, "You WISH!" I growled angrily, as I clenched my fists into a tight ball. "Once I tell Sakura about the real you, she'll forget about you so fast-"
"Hn," Neji frowned slightly, "The real me, Tenten?" he stared at me, with a look of disbelief on his face, "you don't know me. Oh, and I thought you think Sakura is a "Stupid, annoying cow", as I remember from your Diary." He smiled slightly, not a nice smile. An evil smiling, much like the one all those villains have in those cheesy cartoon shows.
I'll pretend I didn't hear that... besides, that comment was ages ago.
No it wasn't... it was last Wednesday when she blew you off at the movies.
What are you? Some kind of super-freak-computer-genius? Do you remember every little detail that goes on in my life?
...Just trying to help...
I regained my attention back to Neji. I didnt say anything, I merely glared at him, "I swear," I said in a low, threatening voice, "If you DARE hurt Sakura in any way. I will hurt you so much, your ancestors will feel the pain."
"Is that a threat?" he spat.
"Absolutely." I smirked
He smirked back at me, with an evil glimmer in his eyes I did not like, "I'd like to see you try" His smirk grew even bigger at his last word. Did he expect me to start blowing a fuse or something? No, I'm going to keep my cool. Yes, I know I usually have a temper tantrum every time someone calls me that... but this time, it involves my best friend... and that's a completely different story.
"Well you're going to see what this girl can do." I growled. I gave him one last glare as I got up, and plopped myself down one of the chairs.
"I'm back!" Sakura grinned as she skipped out in my... wait... that's not my bathing suit.
OH
MY
GOD
What in the WORLD is she WEARING?
"Sakura, that's not my-" I began, but she gave me a "shut up" look, and I immediately closed my mouth.
What a SLUT.
For once, you're totally right about her... that's not my bathing suit! That's my underwear set!
That's not ONLY your underwear set. It's your new, silky, expensive set; I swear, when you first got it, you were actually going to buy a lock for your closet so no one would steal it.
Oh crap! I totally forgot about that! Those were my 100 Dollar Lingerie set that I treated myself for Christmas! She' can't wear those in water, they'll totally be ruined! Sakura SO owns me 100 Dollars.
I suppose this would be Neji's fault as well...?
100% HIS FAULT.
...Why?
If it weren't for his annoyingly hot face... I wouldnt even BE in this situation in which Sakura puts the life of my underwear in crisis.
So... does that mean you think he's hot?
NO. I'm just telling it from Sakura's point of view, I mean, she obviously thinks he's hot.
No kidding.
I watched the two flirt at each other. All I could think about was my precious underwear... and the pain that it was going through...
I can't watch this anymore.
"Err- guys, I'm going to go inside... and watch some cartoons." I said weakly, neither of them seemed to hear me. They were having way too much fun. I rolled my eyes, before I trudged back into the house.
Instead of going to the living room to watch T.V, like I originally said, I went up to my room, and flung myself on the bed and shut the windows and curtains tightly, so I wouldnt have to hear Sakura's little squeals.
I was totally bored out of my mind. Ugh, why can't people make a book called, "What to do when you're extremely bored because your best friend is flirting with your fiance whom you totally hate and want to get rid of."
I sighed slightly, as I got out my Diary, I STILL can't believe that jerk read it. It only means I have to find a better hiding spot... other than on top of my bed where everyone can see.
I opened it to a new fresh page... and began to write:
Dear Diary,
Today was the absolute worst day ever actually, second worst day. I can't believe Sakura is SUCH a slut! Who does she think she is? I cannot believe she took my 100-dollar lingerie set without asking, that underwear cost
me a fortune! She can be so selfish at times; I dont believe the things she does at times.
Sometimes, I wonder how we're still best friends.
Love,
Tenten
I close my Diary, and closed my eyes. I had nothing to do again. I laid on my pillow and stared around my room. It was like an average girl's room. Filled with posters and stuff. I had a pile of clothes by my
chair. An icy dread filled me... lets say I did get married to that creep... what would happen to my room?
I'm pretty sure Neji wouldnt approve of my posters.
A wave of coldness washed through me, and goose bumps began to form on my arm... even though it was about 30 degrees.
I smothered my face with my pillow trying to push the awful thought out of my mind.
I can't do this, I can't do this, I CAN NOT do thi-
Suddenly, the perfect medicine popped into my mind...I'll call Lee!
I totally adore that man. He's my other best friend. He was funny, yet retarded, honest, and carefree. He has a bowlcut black hair, and green tights.
Despite him being my close friend, he was one of the strangest guys I've ever met-he likes to pretend Sakura likes him.
SAKURA
I guess that's how we became friends. He heard that I was her best friend, and he immediately began sucking up to me... and for a while, I seriously thought he liked ME... until one day, he finally confessed his love for my best friend Sakura.
But that was ages ago, now we're really close friends... with, or without Sakura. Though he's still quite not over her. He keeps convincing himself that her "rejection" was a lie, and that she was actually in love with him.
That man will convince himself anything to make his life better.
I reached for my phone and speed dialed his number.
"Hello?".
"Hi Lee! It's me, Tenten."
"Ah!" He cried dramatically, "HI, TENTEN!"
"Uhh...?" I raised an eyebrow, "Lee? You're very loud."
"HI! WHAT MAKES YOU CALL ON THIS LOVELY DAY? ISN'T IT--"
"I need to tell you something about SAKURa!" I blurted out before I he can talk anymore.
He suddenly seemed to have totally forgotten about everything, he replied urgently, "Why? What did she say? Did she finally confess her undying love for me?"
"Err- no." I said sheepishly.
"Than what is it?" he demanded.
"Well, you see, there's this guy here and-"
He let out a loud gasp, "Are you telling me that... she's, cheating on me? All those times, all I've done was cherish her with gifts-"
"Lee!" I interrupted him, this guy could be SUCH a drama king sometimes, "They're not doing anything bad!" I lied, "Err- I just wanted to tell you because... I thought you might want to come over and hang out with us!"
Oh snap, WHY did I just say that? Sakura's totally going to hate me for this!
Why do you care? She ruined your underwear.
Good point.
"Yes, Lee," I smiled smugly to myself, "Do you want to come over?"
"Yes," he replied urgently, "I'll be right there. I cannot lose my love to some nincompoop!"
"Of course. See you in a while."
As I hung up the phone, I felt the smug smile grow wider and wider.
Revenge should SO be my middle name...
A/N: I updated faster now!
I want to see how many people still read so if you can put it a review or send me a message telling me you're still reading, that'll be nice!
Oh and can anyone tell me how I can get email notifications?
I used to but then they suddenly stopped :(.
Oh and my goal is 50 reviews! So the faster they come, the faster I'll update ;).
Thanks!
-Rya
