Okay, so I was thinking about how I wanted to do the story and they way it is set up at the moment won't work with my upcoming plans. So, I am thinking about to rewriting it in Vanessa's first person. Ill also add more stuff so it isn't awful Mary Sue's. I mean the story should be about the GW boy's right? I am also maybe gonna delete more confusing parts like where in Vanessa's sleep she said she know duo was real. To me that just was, confusing? Weird? Stalker-ish? I don't know, but I'm thinking about keeping it. I know how to explain it but I don't know where to put it. But I thought up a, hopefully auh-mazing, ending, but to get there, I need to change the point of view. But I would like to let you guys tell me if I should change it or not. Do you guys like the way it is?
Sincerely,
~The Vanessa Orchard~