To anonymous reviewer Colin: I did not get the title wrong. Actually, I'm turning the second Percy Jackson book (The Sea of Monsters) into a movie, and trying to somewhat fix the mistakes that I believe were made in the first movie. If I had my way, the first movie would have been just like the book. And there's no need to rewrite that :D

To anonymous reviewer (no name): I understand the Fates and the Gray sisters are 2 completely different things in Percy Jackson. If you've ever seen Disney's Hercules, they have the "Fates" share the eye. I combined the 2 ideas for the movie, because a lot of other things are different too.

Thanks EVERYONE for the reviews!

Percy Jackson/Logan Lerman
Annabeth Chase/Alexandra Daddario
Tyson/Dylan Patton
Clarisse LaRue/Leelee Sobieski
Ares camper/Loyd Bateman
Aphrodite camper 1/Marielle Jaffe
Aphrodite camper 2/Christie Laing
Lee Fletcher/Callan McAuliffe
Chiron/Pierce Brosnan
Ares camper 2/Chris Hemsworth

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Gray sister 1 (driver)/ Jane Fonda
Gray sister 2 (middle)/ Helen Mirren
Gray sister 3 (window)/ Susan Sarandon


Percy Jackson and the Olympians:

The Sea of Monsters


Annabeth sped through the entrance to camp. I hurried after her. Tyson followed behind me. Annabeth looked over her shoulder, probably to shout something at me, but stopped before she could open her mouth. She glared and turned back around as she ran.

"How is he in here?" she yelled back at me.

"What do you mean!" I shouted in reply.

"Monsters aren't aloud inside the camp! The magic borders..."

"Who cares?" I asked. "Let's just find out what's going on."

"Right." Annabeth nodded and kept running.

We passed by the regular spots: the bonfire where everyone ate, the tents and cabins, the training courses. We didn't see a single camper. We finally reached the battle arena- a grassy area surrounded by trees next to the edge of a cliff, where we did most of our combat training.

Every single camper was among the trees or out in the open.

Battling a giant, bronze, bull.

And I mean everyone. Campers shot arrows at the bull from under the trees. Aphrodite campers ran around helping wounded campers to the sidelines and putting out fires. The campers closest to the bull were trying to take it out with their shields and swords, but the bull just swatted them aside.

"What is that?" I asked Annabeth.

"I don't... I don't really know," Annabeth said, which shocked me. She normally knows everything.

Annabeth looked around and stopped a camper (obviously someone she knew) who was running to attack the bull. She had caramel colored, stringy hair and angry eyes.

"Clarisse," Annabeth said. "How did a giant bull get inside the camp?"

"Now isn't the time to talk, brain child," Clarisse snapped. "You guys need to get suited up and help us kill this thing." She ran off.

Annabeth glared after Clarisse, the she and I rushed over to the armor tent and put on the heavy metal breastplates and arm-bands while the bull attacked some other campers. Annabeth grabbed a shield and tossed it at me before getting one for herself. She pulled out a hunting knife and I pulled out my sword. We joined the rest of the campers at the battle arena.

Clarisse had stepped up right next to the bull and was fighting it like crazy. A boy was helping her: big, tough-looking, and probably a son of Ares. They looked like they were doing a pretty good job of weakening the bull's defenses.

Then the son of Ares went to slam his sword hilt into the bull's snout. It would've smashed the bull's face in, but then it started blowing fire at the camper. He fell backwards, his clothes and hair in flames.

Clarisse continued to fight the bull as a pretty Aphrodite camper came to the boy's aid, helping him put out the flames. Annabeth charged forward with 1 or 2 other campers and began attacking the bull. I stayed behind and watched the chaos unfold. I hadn't realized how much I hadn't trained compared to everyone else.

Something caught my eye. Off to my left, another son of Ares and a blonde boy I didn't recognize carried a body on a stretcher. I stopped the boy.

"What happened?"

The boy raised an eyebrow at me.

"Percy Jackson," he said. "You're back. I owe Beckendorf 5 dollars." He started walking again. I jogged after him and the other boy.

"Okay, listen... you..." I began, pointing at the kid. I realized I didn't know his name.

"Lee Fletcher," he said, practically reading my mind.

"Look, Lee, I don't who 'Beckendorf' is, or why you guys were betting on me, and right now, I don't care." I looked down at the wounded camper. It was a daughter of Aphrodite, her armor half-melted off and her hair and clothes singed from flames. "What happened to her?" I asked.

"She was helping someone off the field and the bull got her, full blast," Lee replied. "It isn't going too good out there. The flames keep catching us off guard." He looked at me expectantly. I rolled my eyes.

"You need someone who can control water," I said bitterly. Lee laughed.

"Good guess," he said. He started to walk off towards the infirmary again. I turned my back on him, took a deep breath, and marched towards where Annabeth and Clarisse were still fighting the bull.

I emerged from the crowd and, for the first time, got a really good look at the bull. His eyes were pitch black and his bronze coat of hair shimmered with sweat. His hooves were dangerously sharp, and his horns sparkled.

Annabeth appeared next to me.

"Stop staring and do something, before you get killed," she teased. She managed a slight smile

"It's beautiful, in a really scary way," I replied as I approached the bull. He turned towards me, completely ignoring Clarisse pounding him with a shield. I swallowed my fear and stepped up to him. We locked eyes, and neither of us moved. The commotion around us slowly died down. Campers started whispering 'what's he doing?' and 'how did he...?' all around me. The bull started building up fire. I closed my eyes and held up my hand, willing the water just past the edge of the cliff to rise.

Right as the bull let his fireball loose, my eyes snapped open and a huge wave of water came down on the battle area, dousing everyone near the bull. Annabeth laughed in victory and shook her wet hair out of her face. She smiled at me, and I lunged at the bull.

I'd slowed its reflexes by getting it wet. I kept stabbing it with my sword and it didn't know which way to go. 2 other campers joined me. Within a matter of seconds, the bull fell over on its side, completely dead.

Everyone cheered. We got a couple claps on the shoulder and back, and people started crowding around us. Annabeth smirked and clapped for me. I smiled.

Then Clarisse, soaking wet from my wave of water, broke through the circle, screaming in rage.

"You ruin EVERYTHING!" she shouted, pushing campers out of her way. "I don't understand why you didn't just STAY gone!"

Annabeth stepped in between Clarisse and me.

"Calm down, Clarisse," she hissed. Clarisse scoffed in outrage and stomped out of the circle.

Everyone was silent and frozen for a couple seconds. Then someone starting clapping, and the cheering started up again. I tried to smile and celebrate, but Annabeth looked at me like 'what just happened?', and I couldn't shake the feeling of hate that I'd felt from Clarisse. It probably showed on my face.


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