Hello :)
So, tell me truly now, how many of you thought this was dead as a doornail. (Looks as the raised hands) Well truthfully I did too. But as of late I've had some time from my class I've been going back over my old works. This one stands out as my longest, well except for Why Me but that's another point. Something else I noticed about it was the grammar…or lack there of. At points this one was…painful to read. I remember when I was first writing this everyone keep saying I needed to improve the grammar and I kept asking why.
Why should I double check the grammar…I was a noob.
Now with a couple of years, yes years, more experience and college lever English and creative writing classes under my belt I'm going to take the stories I've done I like best and redo them. Updating their grammar and textural appearance so that not only are they smooth to read, but look nice. With things like punctuation and paragraphs or what ever they need.
So probably within the coming month expect to see chapters drop off of this and improved chapters replacing them. No real story alterations will be made but seeing as its been so fraking long since my last update…(looks at date above)…oh crap…4 YEARS! What was I thinking? No wait don't answer that, I wasn't. So yeah I'm going to actually throw effort into the update and yes continuation of this until it is complete.
I'll have to work around my class assignments but that shouldn't be too problematic. Well onwards I suppose.