ME: Hey everyone thank you soo much for reviewing! I hope your New Year started of well! Mines did but then as we were heading back home I got car sick and now I hate 2012... but I hope it will get better.
One of my resolution was to make longer chapters so please read and tell me is this long enough or should it be longer?
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ROCuevas: Thanks for review I happy you liked the chapter and yea I just thought it be a good idea to use the title at the end.
Paris City: Love your name. I just love Paris and thanks so much.
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xlovecandyxx: Sorry it's not going to be a mix up and that was Bubbles who was talking to Boomer I thought I made it clear sorry.
Blaze: Thank you so much!
Adork4cartooncouples: Thanks for reviewing and yea I think I shall put her next after Bubbles day is over. she's also my favorite :)
blackhearts33: I loved your review and it makes me know that people actually do like my story! Thanks for reviewing! :D
becomingemo: yup more people choose her so I think I will put her next after Bubbles's day and thanks for reviewing.
youngwriter: I think I'll put Boomer since it will be better so you'll have both point of views to compare and thanks for reviewing. I don't think anyone else calls me doll boo yes but not doll and I like it for some reason. ^^ And you have no idea how close your guess was! I can't believe you got all that from just the first chapter! Your probably ahead of everyone!
kuku88: Don't worry I don't think I want to quit this story and have people hating me for putting the story and then bailing. And I'll update more of 'A Monster High' soon.
I should also add that nothing in the story is mine only the plot and ideas. Enjoy :D
Boomer's POV
I met this girl at the park just this morning. She's blonde, 5"5', sky blue eyes, cute, and just so easy to talk to.
She says she goes to Breakwood Private Academy For Extraordinary Young Women. I always thought that the girls that went there were all stuck up rich sluts but she so isn't.
We talked for like about two hours! It felt like a few minutes to me but when she noticed she said she had to go to the mall.
I actually asked if I could go. My mom was a major shop-holic and my brothers would never go to the mall with her so I always had to go with her. (A/N: Keep in mid the words WAS and HAD!) That's why even though we went to like all the stores that we could possibly could it didn't bother me.
Actually with Bubbles, that's her name, time just flew by. She kept looking for something though. It was about 12 when I got hungry.
"Hungry, Boomer?" Bubbles said after hearing my stomache growl.
"Nah, that was just...um...my.." I tried thinking of something.
"Your what? Your stomache?" she said.
"No! It was my...PHONE! It was my phone." I said finally thinking of something.
"Oh well if your not hungry then we can just go shopping until the mall closes." she says with a smile that made her look so innocent even though I'm pretty sure she knew I was hungry.
"Okay. Maybe I'm a bit hungry." I confessed.
"Then come on lets go eat." She said.
She paid for the clothes that she got. She didn't try them out though. They were mostly purple and brown, black and green, and pink/red and orange. The only clothes she seemed to try out were blue, white and a little black.
"How come you only try out some of the clothes?" I ask as we were going out of 'Forever Clothes!'
"Because not all are for me," she responded simply.
"Then who are they for?"
"Remember the friends I mention earlier?" she says.
"Yea Butterscotch, Rabbit, and Boss'em?" I ask hoping I got their names right.
She shook her head then spoke. "No, Buttercup, Bunny, and Blossom. But the name Boss'em does describe Blossom. She's kind of busy sometimes"
"Oh my bad." I say scratching my head.
"That's okay. Not everyone can remember alot." she said smiling.
"Well what are my brothers' names?" I challenged.
"Brick, the red head, born leader, has anger issues, has blood red eyes,most responsible, is like a parent, fifteen years old as of two months ago, and is the oldest quadriplet. Bandit, brunette, the mysterius one, secretive, loves animals,doesn't like talking about himself, calm...most of the time, dark purple eyes, fifteen years old, same birthday as Brick, and second oldest quadripet. Butch, black hair, forest green eyes, third oldest, strongest, short tempered, self-canter most of the time, loves sports, fifteen years old, and same birthday as Brick and Bandit." she said examining her nails.
My jaw dropped open how did she remember all that?
"What?" she asked looking at me.
"How did you remember all of that?" I say still shock.
"I'm a good listener." she says, "Now come on. Lets go get lunch."
She grabs my hand and leads me to the food court.
We order, pay for our food and sit down.
Bubbles has a salad, a small diet coke,and an oatmeal cookie.
I have two double stack burgers, an order of fries, an extra larger coke, three slices of pepperoni pizza, and two tacos with extra meat.
Bubbles giggles softly. I know I didn't order alot but I wasn't that hungry so I order a little. Right?
When the day was over it was around 8:30 we were going out of the mall. Bubbles had so many shopping bags that I had to help her.
I walked her all the way until the court yard of her school. "Here I don't think I can help you anymore." I say.
"That's okay. I'll text my friends." she says holding up her phone.
"Well I hope to see you again." I say.
"Here, this is my phone number. We can talk more or I can plan another day to ditch to hang out, k?" she said writing her number on my hand.
"Sure here's mine." I say writing mines down on her palm.
Then I see three heads poke out from a window.
"Uhhh, look at Bubbles!" A brunette says.
"Omg Bubbles got a boyfriend. Well good job, Bubs. He ain't that ugly." the one with green eyes says.
"Would you two stop," A girl with pink eyes says.
I look at Bubbles, who looks both mad and emberrassed.
"Well catch ya later," I say and kiss her cheek. Maybe I shouldn't have done that though because her friends then started laughing. Not all of the just the one with purple eyes and the one with black hair. The pink one shook her head at the two.
"Bye, Boomer." she says blushing like crazy. I'm pretty sure I am too.
Then I head home.
Buttercup's POV
"So who was the boy who kissed you?" Bunny asks Bubbles as soon as she steps foot in Bunny and I's dorm.
"No one," she says still blushing.
"Come on. Is he your boyfriend because he is kind of stupid." I say.
"How would you know if he is stupid! You never met him!" she says.
Bubbles has it bad.
"He just looks stupid." Bunny and I say together.
Before Bubbles could say anything Blossom chimes in.
"Leave her alone. Lets justs see the clothes she got us." she says.
We go look at the clothes Bubbles got and tried them on. She also got make up and shoes.
The clothes she got us were cute, fit us, and matched our personalities.
Bubbles did a great job with our outfits. We look good.
"Hey who's going tomorrow?" Bubbles suddenly asks.
"ME! ME! ME!" I shout raising my hand up in the air, "IT WAS MY IDEA!" I add in lastly.
"Okay just stop acting like a five year old, Bc." Blossom says.
Yes, I'm next. Now where will I go? The skatepark, the movies, I don't care anywhere I guess.
Butch's POV
Boomer came home around nine. His face was red though I mean he was redder then Brick's hat! What happen to him?
"Hey, Boom. Why did you just get home?" I ask laying on the couch watching a soccer game.
"Because I wanted to." he says and heads upstairs.
That was weird, even for Boomer. What did he do all day?
I just stayed in the living room and eventually went to sleep.
When I woke up, I think it was around nine a.m. Since my brother Brick goes to work as a library assistant, Bandit is probably in the aquarium, zoo, pet shop, or something that has to do with animals, and Boomer has been acting weird I thin it's best for me to just go somewhere away from home.
Home. If you can call it that. It's an old abandon ware house that we live in ever since our parents died.
There was a huge fire and our parents died saving us. We were only five at the time and some woman said that we were going to put in an orphange.
There this couple that couldn't have babies came in. They liked Boomer the most. He was the most quietest when we were small after all.
Boomer didn't want to go with them. He wanted to stay with us. The couple said they could only take in one child and that they were going to give him a week to pack and say good-bye.
Brick didn't want Boomer to leave either. I found out later it was because he was the oldest my parents had said before that if they were never there to take care of us and to stick together no matter what.
Bandit and I didn't want Boomer to leave. He was our little brother after all. Six horribly fast days past. It was the night before Boomer was to leave when Brick woke me up. He said to grab my stuff that we were leaving and to meet him outside.
I grabbed all my stuff that was already in luggages in case the couple changed their mines and climb out the window since we were suppose to be sleeping.
There I met Brick who also had his things. Bandit arrived with his stuff. He looked tired and moody you can say. Boomer came lastly. He carried his stuff and he looked like he had been crying. I couldn't blame him, I almost cried. ALMOST but I didn't I was to tough, brave, couragious, manly, and good looking to cry.
We ranaway that day and hid in the ware house. It was old and coming down but we could still live in it. We had to hide here because the police was looking for us. Not any more though. They probably think we are dead. After a few years of remodeling, the ware house is not that bad any more though.
We all have jobs though. To get food, clothes, and things need for survival. Brick has two jobs actually. We say, as in me and my other two brothers, that he can quit one and still be able to get along but he doesn't. We go to school too...sometimes.
At school we do good. Brick always gets A+'s and occasionally an B- when he has been working over time at work. Bandit get B's and C's. Boomer A's and B's and me I get B's and C's occasionally and D, F, or A.
The teacher don't really mind. They told us once that as long as we do our work and not distrub the others we can do whatever we want.
I didn't feel like going to school today and work for me at the music store didn't start until 4:30.
Bored with nothing to do, I head to the skatepark. I'm actually a pretty good skater. There are some people there to. They must have ditched school too.
Then I see this girl. She has black wavy but not that wavy hair, soft pale but not like pale pale, a hot model body with great curves but surprisingly that's not what gets my attention. It was her eyes. They were so beautiful. I couldn't tell if they were lime green, emerald green, or both.
I couldn't help but noticed her. Why haven't I ever seen her beautiful? She was way to beautiful to be unseen. What really surprised me was she had a skateboard. Lime green with black stars. I didn't know she could use her skateboard but if she can't I can teach her can't I.
"Hey, I'm Butch. And I was wondering can you use that?" I say pointing to her skateboard as I walked up to her.
"Umm...no. It's my first time and I hardly know how to use it." She said looking at how everyone here knew how to do tricks and things. II came right now because I thought it would be empty and I could learn but it's not."
Perfect."I can teach you." I offered with a smirk.
"You don't have to. I can just leave," she said standing up from the bench she was sitting in.
"No, really it's no bother," I say grabbing her hand to stop her from leaving. She turned around and smiled, "Okay." she said.
"Here. This is how you stand." I say standing on my skateboard. I look at her to see she already was on her skateboard.
"Okay, than." I say. She managed to learn in less than five minutes! She was even doing some tricks. When she looked at someone trying to do an advance mve even I couldn't do and fell, I muttered ,"Idiot." but then I see her trying to do it and she actually managed to...perfectly, I should add.
My mouth dropped open.
"H-how d-did you j-just do t-that?" I say shocked.
"I'm a fast learner." she said and skated on the rail.
We spent about three hours there at the skatepark and then I got hungry.
We ate at McDonald's and when we left got some ice cream.
"So besides knowing your name is Buttercup, you just learn how to skateboard to day, your a fast learner, and your a girl, I know nothing about you. Tell me about yourself." I say.
"Okay. Lets see...I'm fourteen years old. I have three older brother and one little one who is twelve years old brother. Oldest from youngest: Brett, twenty goes to college with his girlfriend Brenda , Brian who we call Brain, eighteen years old and graduating high school this year, Benjamin who we call Ben is sixteen in high school, me, and Brisk who is twelve and gets into alot of trouble. I love sports espicially soccer and since you taught me how to skateboard I can play all sports now." She says.
"What else?" I ask.
"Well my favorite color is green. My birthday is March 23. And..." she says. I eat the rest of my ice cream, "I go to Breakwood Academy For Extraordinary Young Women." she finishes. I start choking on my ice cream. I didn't even know that was possible.
How does she go to that school. She isn't stuck up. She pats my back.
"Are you okay?" she asks.
"Yea I'm alright just surprised." I say.
"What? That I go to 'the snobbiest school in America'?" she says quoting the words the snobbiest school in America with her fingers. "Do you think I'm a stuck up snob now?" She says.
"Yes! I mean NO! Your not a snob!" I say but she is already angry and starts walking away from me with her skateboard.
"Buttercup! Wait up!" I shout and getting up and grabing my board.
She stops but doesn't look at me. She is really angry. "What do you want?" she asks in a voice filled with venom and hatred.
"I mean I was just surprised. And no I don't think you are a snob. Stubborn yes, a snob no way." I say trying to make her stop being angry at me.
"Fine I believe you." she said turning around.
"Good," I say, "Now lets go somewhere." I get on my skateboard and she does the same. We race to the video game store and go look at some games. I don't think many girls play video games but she does.
I look at my watch once we leave. Shit! 4:26! I need to go.
"Umm...Buttercup I have to go. I have a job that I need to start at 4: 30." I say.
"That's okay you can go. It's only.." she looks at her watch and her eyes widen," SHIT! I need to go to school too! There's an assembly today that everyone needs to attend."
"Here," I say writing my phone number on her hand with a pen. She blushes slight like you hardly tell but I noticed.
"That way if you ever ditch school again, we can hang out." I explain.
"Okay. Here's mine." She writes down her number on my hand and this time I feel my cheeks get hot! NO! I never blushed before.
"We should go we have two minutes and counting," she says.
"BYE!" I shout as she rides her skateboard back to school.
"BYE!" I here her scream.
Cool, I think as I look down on my arm. I got her number. And then I remember. SHit, Work! I run for it I'm going to be late!
ME: This has been my longest chapter ever! BUT is it long enough or should it be longer? Well please review.
Bubbles: Buttercup finally has a crush! This is so going to be used as pay back!
Buttercup: WHAT! *looks at me* Your going to let her torture your favorite ppg? And I don't like Butch!
Me: We know...You love him!
Buttercup: *Growls*
Me: Well see ya next chapter!
***Peace Out***