I got a Review from a guest named MAS and when I read it I had to agree with him XD. So MAS, if you're reading this, you're pretty much right, I did kind of rush chapter 1 which is something I came to see after I wrote it... I'll make sure to take this chapter much slower! I hope you enjoy it guys! :D


The sun rose slowly on that morning, Keitaro was having a sweet dream about his life with Naru. Sadly for him it was just a dream… but did it have to be a dream forever?

The sun's rays shined through Keitaro's window and into his eyes. They began to flutter and slowly open. Keitaro yawned and tried to sit up but noticed a bit of weight on his chest. He looked over to his right and saw Naru cuddled up next to him. His pupils shrunk as he jumped back and nearly shouted. "N-Naru!" He had his hands in front of himself and swinging all around trying to come up with an explanation. "N-Naru! I-I was asleep and I didn't mean to—"

Naru's head lifted from the pillow as she rubbed her eyes and looked over to him. "O-Oh… Sorry Keitaro." She sat up in the bed and scratched the back of her head. "I'm sorry… last night I just felt… kind of cold…" She smiled nervously and looked over to him.

He lowered his hands and looked at her. "Wow… Her mom dying has really hit her hard…" Keitaro looked around the room, there was an awkward silence floating around the room before Keitaro got the nerve to finally speak up. "S-So Naru… How DID you sleep?" He looked at her, his cheeks slightly red.

"Oh… I slept fine, thanks." She blushed and looked away from him. Both of them felt incredibly awkward towards each other and neither of them had anything to say.

Finally Keitaro grew a pair and looked over to her. "Hey um, Naru… would you like to um…" He began. "Well, would you like to go out today?"

Her face went red with embarrassment. "L-Like a date?"

Keitaro's eyes shrunk for a moment. "N-No! Not like a date! No!" He began to laugh nervously and scratch the back of his head. "I mean like, just to go out and get your mind of things…" He mumbled the last words.

"W-Well…" She began.

"I-I'm sorry I even asked!" He started to laugh nervously, "Why don't we just forget I ever asked and just go the day as normal right? Yeah let's do that!" He laughed nervously more and began to walk out of the room.

"Wait!" she shouted.

Keitaro froze in place and slowly turned his head.

"I um…" She began, "I wouldn't mind going out for the day…" Naru mumbled the last words, her face flushed with a deep red color. "J-Just as long as you don't try anything pervy!" She quickly shot at him.

Keitaro chuckled a bit and smiled at her. "I wouldn't even think about it." He walked over to his closet and opened it up. "Well then I'm gonna get ready… what about you Naru? Are you going to change in here to?" His face turned red and he laughed at his own question.

Her expression changed to an embarrassed one and her face flushed red. She growled and hit him on the shoulder. "You're so disgusting Keitaro!" She laughed and climbed up to her room. "I'll be ready in a little bit ok?" She smiled and disappeared from his sight.

Keitaro sighed and began to think of all the things they were going to do today. He'd do his best to keep her entertained and happy, he was going to do his best to cheer her up and have fun in the process. "I'll be waiting out front OK Naru?" He shouted up to her. He heard her shout 'OK' and proceeded to the front door. Just then he was stopped by the foreign girl known to everyone as Su.

"Keitaro!" She jumped out of nowhere with glee. "You look very handsome today! Are you going on a date with Naru?" She smiled innocently. A certain fox faced girl poked her head in at the mention of "Date" and "Keitaro and Naru".

"Ohh Keitaro! You look so nice!" She walked over and wrapped her arms around his neck. "You're not dolling yourself up for Naru are you?"

Keitaro took a step back from the both of them began to get very nervous. "W-What? No! O-Of course not… I-I mean we ARE going out to town but not like, a date or anything!" He began to stumble on his words and couldn't think straight. At that time he looked to the stairs to see Naru wandering in.

She had a sad look on her face and looked as if she were about to cry.

There was a short silence. "Naru?" Mitsune spoke up. "You ok sweety?"

"I'm fine." She sniffled. "Can we just go Keitaro?" she walked over to him as they began to walk out.

"U-Um… We'll be back later guys, don't wait up!" He shouted as they walked away.

Mitsune and Su both watched as Naru and Keitaro walked away and out of sight. "Hmm… Something fishy is going on… Naru didn't look too happy to be leaving with Keitaro…" She looked down at Su.

"You think she's being forced to go with him?" Su wondered.

Silenced filled the room for a moment. "I don't know… let's go look in his room and see if there's anything that don't belong." Su and Mitsune crept over to Keitaro's room and slowly opened it up. Immediately Mitsune spotted the two beds. "Oh mah gawd." She put her hands over her mouth. "I bet Keitaro's got some dirt on Naru…" She walked all over the room looking for something that Keitaro may have on her best friend.

Su bounced around the whole room giggling and laughing. "What makes you say that? Keitaro isn't a bad guy!" She laughed.

"Well, look at yesterday, Naru SURE was clingy to him yesterday! Why would she ever do such a thing unless she was being forced? I know those two like each other but this is so unlike Naru." She brought her hand to her chin. "I think we should gather everyone here and force Keitaro to let whatevah hold he has on Naru go, something tells me that they're hidin' somethin' from us."

Su hopped down from the shelf she was on and landed on the floor next to Mitsune. "Well then let's start warning everyone!" She smiled innocently and walked out of the room.


The 'couple' walked down the street into town and were looking around for something to do. Keitaro watched her as she looked around. "Naru? Are you alright?"

She looked away from him. "Yeah… I'm fine…" She saw a sign for a carnival nearby on a wooden post. "Keitaro!" She ran over and pointed to the sign. "Let's go here!" She had a big smile on her face and Keitaro couldn't help but smile.

"The first time she's smiled like that in a week…" He walked over to her and read the sign quickly. "Sure Naru! It looks like fun!" He smiled over to her and began to walk in the direction of the carnival. The couple soon arrived and were amazed at all the rides and games they could play. "What would we do first Naru?"

In her hand she held a map for the entire park and looked around for any games or rides they may want to get on and enjoy. "Hmm…" She pointed to one of the rides, "How about we go for a roller coaster ride?" She smiled warmly.

They both walked off into the direction of the roller coaster and were eager to get on the ride…


Meanwhile, back at the hinata…

"OK you guys, Keitaro and Naru should be back in a little while, so we've got the time to prepare to confront Keitaro! Just remembah, he's got dirt on Naru so even though he's our friend we shouldn't treat him so nicely! Not until he lets Naru go of her… activities when they go to bed…" Mitsune looked around the room as everyone agreed with her.

Suddenly Shinobu spoke up, "Are you sure that he's doing these things with Naru? I mean… Keitaro wouldn't do that! He's not that kind of guy! He's too nice…" she mumbled her last words.

"He's a man Shinobu; one thing they've all got in common is that they like to defile women. Keitaro is no exception." Motoko had her sword resting on her shoulder.

"B-But he's not like that! I'm sure Naru was just upset about something else…" She sighed and sat down.

"If I know Naru, then it would have to be over something major and the only major thing I've seen 'round here is Keitaro and Naru spendin' a whole lotta time togetha." She placed her hands on her hips and frowned. "Now unless they suddenly became best of friends ovah night I don't see any otha reason why Naru would be in Keitaro's room ovah night."

"Don't worry Shinobu! We won't hurt him to much! Just so he'll leave Naru alone!" Su hung from the ceiling and smiled. She jumped down and walked over to the group.

"And now we play the waiting game for them both to return." Motoko unsheathed her sword and frowned. "We'll make sure not to alarm Naru of our discovery, if we do this right we can get Keitaro to let her go on his own terms instead of us just making him do it."

Mitsune frowned, "aww… but that's not as fun…" The fox faced girl sighed and sat down in her chair. In her hand she held some sake and took a sip. "Well we might as well have a little fun before they come right? They should be home in an hour or so… can't stay out to late can they?" She smiled and took another sip of her sake.


It was starting to get late; Naru looked up at the sky and frowned. "Think we should head back?" She looked up to him.

Keitaro smiled, "yeah, I guess we should. Don't want them to worry do we?" They turned around and saw that the carnival lights had begun to dim and shut off. "Besides, it looks like they're closing anyway." He sighed began to walk home with Naru at his side.

The walk home was quiet; neither of them knew what to say to each other. Keitaro looked down at his side and at Naru's hand. His hand shook for a moment but he managed to intertwine his fingers with hers. She gave him a surprised look for a second but turned away and blushed.

The two walked into the hinata house and started heading up stairs. "Oh wait, Naru, you go on up, I've got something I need to do real quick." He smiled.

"Sure." She turned away and walked up stairs.

Keitaro yawned, "Oh man… a real tiring day… We both had a lot of fun…" He smiled and walked over to lock the door. It closed and locked with a click and he soon turned around to see Motoko. "Oh, hi Motoko!" He smiled. "You're up kind of late… aren't you usually asleep by now?" He walked over to her.

"Keitaro, sit down please." She pointed to a chair.

"Um… OK?" He walked over and sat down in the chair, looking over the room. "Is um… something wrong?" he questioned.

A figure came out from the shadows. "We know Keitaro." Mitsume frowned.

"Kn-Know about what?" He had a scared look on his face. "What are you guys talking about?"

Shinobu and Su came from the kitchen, Shinobu looked sad while Su was as jumpy as ever. "W-We saw your room Keitaro… there… were two beds…"

Keitaro's face turned red. "W-what? What does that have to do with anything?"

"You and Naru boy! Are you that dense? Now, I know that you and Naru like each otha, but if I know Naru she wouldn't WILLINGLY sleep in the same room as you!" She got in real close, "And Naru didn't look too happy leavin' with ya today neitha'!" Mitusme put her foot on the chair.

Motoko walked over to him, her hand on her sword handle. "So we'll give you one chance. Either tell us what kind of blackmail you have on Naru, why you're forcing her to do these… UNSPEAKABLE things with you… and to go apologize immediately… otherwise…"

Keitaro gulped, "O-Otherwise?"

"Otherwise we'll stop going easy on you…" She growled, "I know we're all friends here, but we love Naru like a sister and we won't let you force yourself onto her…" She drew her sword. "One chance Keitaro. Tell us the truth about Naru."

Keitaro looked over the group, he was scared straight. "Should I just tell them about Naru's mom?" He pondered it for a moment but soon shook away that idea. "No… No I can't! Naru asked me not to tell anyone, not even her friends! I have to keep her secret!" Keitaro looked up at Motoko. "I won't tell you her secret, and I'm not doing anything to her! I mean it!" He shouted out.

Motoko sighed. "I was really hoping you'd be honest with us Keitaro…" She grabbed his collar with her hand and brought him close to her face. "Now I have to be rough with you…"

Keitaro gulped and closed his eyes. "No matter what… I'll keep your secret safe Naru…" He thought to himself.

Naru sat inside the small bed Keitaro had made for her in his room, she knew said she was going to her room tonight, but couldn't stand the thought of being alone again. She suddenly realized that whatever he was doing, was taking a long time. "I guess I had better go check on the idiot…" She yawned, rubbed her eyes and started walking down the stairs. "Keitaro… what are you… doing?" He stopped halfway when she saw Keitaro on the floor and the group around him. "Wh-What the hell is going on here?" The brunette shouted.


Here it is! I hope you guys enjoy chapter two! The third and final chapter will be up soon! Till then, enjoy this! :D