HOLA! Yes, yes, yes I know I should be working on my other stories but I got this idea in my head and it won't leave me alone…. So TA DA!
Also I've been wanting to try angst writing… and well… this is my first try at it, I wanna know if I'm good at it before I put it in my a new story I'm writing soon called "The Power You Possess" There's a trailer on youtube if you wanna watch….
Chapter 3
The Saga of Fears
He was slammed back into the wall, struggling to stay awake, even though he couldn't see it, he could feel the blood streaming down his face from the cut he just suffered. He fell to his knees at looked up at the despicable thing that towered over him.
"You're sad you know that, after all that you've done I at least expected you to try and put a fight."
He stood over him, hands folded and his head shaking like when a mother scolded a child.
Danny didn't reply
"You're weak, worthless; it's no surprise everyone is against you."
Danny could feel the tears starting to trail down his face
"What, are you crying? Haha! That's rich. Danny Phantom, crying. Of course that comes as no surprise to me."
Dan put his foot on Danny's stomach.
"You always knew you would end up here, alone, but you were always alone, your own parents saw you as a threat."
Danny's mind drifted to that day was almost caught
"What are you doing in my house you freak! Jack! Get the ecto gun! There's a ghost in the house!"
"I got him Maddie!"
His father shot at him
Danny flew out of the house, sitting on the roof and waiting until everything calmed down inside to return. But he knew he would never forget what his mother told him.
"Ah, I remember that day also, but the truth hurts Danny, it's better to accept it now than later."
Danny slumped down the floor
The more the thought about it he came to the conclusion it was true, everyone called him that, and if more than one person believed it, would that make it true?
"I'll leave you alone with your thoughts, but before I go"
Dan pointed down the road through the rubble of the fight, you can see Danny's friends and family tied to the Nasty Burger.
He fired the shot at the tank
And it was all over
"Think about what I said"
Dan vanished.
Danny stood there awestruck
He ran to the once famous burger joint
He tried to find something, anything, to prove they were alive.
There wasn't anything
Everything was gone…..
Everyone was gone
And he was alone
Danny gasped as he woke up in his bed; he saw the time was a little after 2 in the morning. He sighed and tried to smile when he realized it was just a dream, he looked in the mirror and realized he was covered in sweat and was breathing rapidly. He brushed his hair back with his hand and laid down on the bed again.
"It's only a dream…. I'll never become that…."
That's what you think
Danny jumped up at the sound of the voice only to find nothing there.
He closed his eyes and went back to sleep.
Wow….. that….. sucked…
I fail at angst -.-
However this IS going to be a scene in the power you possess…. Any tips on how to improve would be nice! I'll even give you a cookie :D
