Ello, been a looong time hasn't it? I'm redoing CH.4 because it was complete rubbish. I was on Zero (writing during an all-nighter I think we-well mostly know how all that feels) and if I really do care about my writing I shouldn't leave this a pile of shit. I will probably make a few more chapters and then pull the curtains on this old gem I started. I don't want to be one of those people who start a story and don't finish. Well here we go. :U
*Note: I am changing the perspective from first person to second. I'd like to stay in one perspective, I switched horridly back and forth in my earlier works.
Ash POV
Ash sunbathed on the terrace of the house he shared with his love Mary Lynette. A wondrous Venetian styled home, with the terrace on top so Mary-Lynette could exam the heavens. He was at ease and fully satisfied with his life and so was she; Mary carried over drinks for them both. She settled down into a lawn chair next to him, Ash couldn't help but note the skimpy green bikini she wore. Everyone else was out partying for St. Patrick's Day but they just decided to relax up here, only wearing the festive garb to 'participate'. Ash could remember last year how many times he got pinched by his daughter. It had been awhile since they were alone Ash lamented.
Though Ash didn't know if he could get it up again, from the action he got earlier. She ran him ragged. Mary-Lynette passed him the frothy holiday themed brew. "You know I shouldn't drink with such a beautiful woman. My wife would have a cow." Ash kindly remarked.
Mary-Lynette laughed, "You're sounding like Quinn," she took a wholesome sip of her green beer.
The comment made Ash gag.
He cleared his throat, setting his drink on the ground next to his chair. "I can't be nice to my wife? Do I always have to be a smart ass to you? Is it a sick turn on? Or do you want me to go bible thumper on your ass like he does with Rachel?"
"I don't know about "Bible thumper," She removed her button shirt that was clinging to her body in the heat, "I just think he's a gentle man."
"Professor tight ass you mean?" Ash sat up from his reclined position.
"You're so mean to him!" Mary-Lynette remarked from her sipping. She leaned in forward as Ash was, with her hands on his knees. She set her glass down with a satisfactory clink. "And you're comment was very welcomed," Mary-Lynette grabbed his hands. "I don't think your wife would mind." Mary Lynette smiled.
"Oh good," Ash took away one of his hands grabbing his beer. "I can now enjoy this." He gulped down half his glass leaving a foam mustache.
"I knew you were going to do that," She yanked away the beer, roughly shoving him back with her free hand, keeping his beverage out of reach. He landed on the coarse concrete, pain shot up his back. Though he wasn't paying attention to that sensation. "Soul mate," Mary wolfishly smiled. He could feel himself get stiff as Mary climbed atop him. She straddled him tightly, like a cow girl trying to maintain a since Ash was on the thoughts of cow girl or a reversal he really couldn't complain. He grinned.
Mary still held the glass up high, she toyed with her breasts slipping out tiny moans; all the while she rubbed her crotch against Ash's like a bitch in heat. "Oh-" Slipped out of her perfect plump lips.
Ash licked his lips, he reached for his glass. Mary lifted it higher; teasing him. "Do you want it?" She playfully asked. Ash nodded. She mocked passing it to him, she instead tilted the glass and poured the contents over her perfectly round breasts. Ash felt himself go from hard to flaccid as he watched the beer trickle down her bosom in little rivers to her womanhood. He ran a hand up her thigh: goose bumps. The beer was freshly from the fridge, it was cold in this unforgivable heat. Ash could also smell the scent of the beer almost taste it. That naughty girl took away something that was his. And he wasn't finished with it.
"Are you cold?" Ash asked her playfully, Mary tossed away the cup bring back her attention to her bosom. He chuckled diving forward quickly into her breasts. He ripped the bikini top with his fangs, which made Mary squeal in delight. She still had a steady motion on Ash's crotch. He let out a sultry moan.
Ash sucked on her nipple tasting its salty flavor with the sweet taste of the green beer. His other hand was preoccupied with toying with her left nipple. Ash had her purr in delight to his motions. His other had worked on her bottom.
"Ash-" She moaned, Ash looked up to her blushed face. Her hair was up in a bun, it all ways had fly aways. The wind blew more loose and it clung to her soft skin. The wind rushed its cold embrace as the sweat ran down on his raging body. His member wanted out it needed her now.
He roughly hoisted her up on so she was standing upright on her knees. He tore her bottom off. Ash then slid off his bottoms, he abruptly grabbed her wrist pinning her to the ground. Ash began to kiss her neck, nipping her with her fangs as he did so. Each bite gave a wondrous firework sensation.
Mary Lynette wriggled a hand out of his pin and brought him up to her lips. They began to hungrily kiss, his hand slowly moving down to linger on her womanhood. Ash couldn't help but the heat that radiated from that one special place.
"I want you now." Ash demanded. He flipped her over on top on of him. She hovered over his dick, it pointed like a compass to her pussy. Mary bit her lip raising a seductive brow.
"I'm waiting," Mary ran hands over Ash's smooth chest. Ash smiled his irresistible smile and he grabbed her hips. With all his might he forced himself inside of her. Mary let out a loud howl of pleasure. Heat washed through Ash's cold sweat as he bucked. The pleasurable flows rushed through his as she called his name, "Ash! Ash! Aw-Aw-!" With her hands idle to her breasts she bucked to him with the same rhythm.
Near climax Ash shot up to sitting position to grab her waist. He could her getting tighter, her hot juices running from her pussy. "God!" Ash started to ravish his lover's bosom with kisses and little fang bite. Mary ran her hands through her hair loosening her bun to finally letting free. Ash buried himself in her warm familiar scent. He finally pounded as hard as he could, his penis swelling with his cum; he couldn't take it, he got to his orgasm. He pulled out coming on their chests. The warm cum ran down his chest but Mary-Lynette rubbed it her chest like a fine lotion.
"Lay on your back," Ash told her, she did so. He came up beside her, a hand in her wet pussy teasing it and his other hold him up.
"More, more." Mary kept crying in her lust filled voice. Ash could tell she ached for. He added more fingers, Ash soon added all of his fingers; then he roughly thrust his fist in his lover. She bucked her hips and finally had her orgasm, "Yes! Oh Ash!" She squirted all over Ash's hand, he teased it a little bit more for the last of the orgasmic tremors.
She gave a satisfied tired sigh to herself, Ash licked her womanly juices from his hand. "Manna from the gods." He smiled. He rested next to her on the hot terrace ground. Mary-Lynette snuggled into his exhausted form. Ash pulled her closer to him, her back was to his chest. "Isn't it nice when we dump our kids on our friends, so we can have days like this."
"Mhm." Mary nodded as well. "From the excitement you had gotten into earlier I'm surprised you could get this excited." Mary mumbled.
"It was only this morning with a beautiful lady." He stroked her hair back from her face. "And I wouldn't have had it any other way." He whispered in her ear. He saw her grin, with that invitation he wrapped his strong arms around her.
"Me either." Mary noted cheerfully.
Ash kissed Mary's neck fragile neck; even though he was rough with others he'd be gentle with her. Always.
"I love you with all my heart." He whispered to his love as he drifted off into slumber.
Now I know it was shorter than my other stories but I think it did just fine. It's been awhile since I've read Night World but I think the characters still hold their personalities. Lord I looked back at my old Chapters, the grammar is atrocious! Quote: looking outside the snow harder outside. I think I meant: looking outside it SNOWED harder. But you live and learn. Anyway it all should make sense in the next chapter. Anyway I hoped you liked this. I made this with Careless whisper as my background music...sooo if you want to set a mood you can listen to that. Although I'm not sure if it makes it cheesy...
