Chapter 2
"Bowser's castle is huge as always, said Luigi. I think if he thought less about the design of his castle, he could think of a way to actual defeat us." "Luigi look!" said Mario. Bowser comes into the room with Peach. Her arms were tied up and she wasn't resisting Bowser at all. "Why do they always send Mario to save you? said Bowser. Where are all of those Toads? I haven't even set up my plan to defeat him yet." "HEY, what about Luigi?" said Luigi. "What about you? said Bowser. Your just Mario's sidekick or something, I don't really know." Luigi devoured a fire flower and shot a fireball at Bowser. Bowser swallowed it and burped. "That was a good meal. said Bowser. See, your no type of threat. You couldn't harm me if you tried." "I wasn't trying to hurt you," said Luigi. Look up." Bowser looks up and notices Mario's foot coming towards his face. "Not again," said Bowser. Mario lands his jump on Bowser's head, and Bowser goes unconscious. Mario started to untie Peach. "Thanks again Mario." said Peach. "You're welcome Princess." said Mario. Luigi took the rope that Bowser used to tie Peach up and tied Bowser up. "That should be tight enough, said Luigi. I told you we would figure out how to catch him once we got inside." "What's the meaning of this?" said Peach. "Well Luigi came up with this idea that if we kidnaped Bowser, he wouldn't be able to kidnap you anymore." said Mario. "His loyal minions will save him" Peach said. "They are only loyal because they fear him." said Luigi. We're probably doing them a huge a favor." "Well it sounds like you guys have thought this through, but where are you going to put him?" said Peach. "Hmm. Luigi and I won't be able to monitor him at all times, and if he were to break out we wouldn't won't him too harm Mushroom Kingdom. said Mario. Luigi and I could build a small jail with a few Toads as body guards." "But Toads are terribly at guarding anything. said Luigi. "But they would make a nice alarm system" said Mario. "That is true, said Luigi. We should probably go before Bowser wakes up. I saw a pipe hole outside the castle. We'll make the jail a few miles outside of Mushroom kingdom, so meet me at the entrance whenever you get there." "Princess you should go to your castle while we make the jail for Bowser." said Mario. "Just be careful with him. said Peach. He may be important to someone." "I'll keep that in mind." Mario replied. What would make her say that, Mario wondered. Luigi forced Bowser into the pipe hole, and followed after him. "You go next Princess." Mario gestured. Peach smiled at Mario and went in the pipe hole. Mario went in after her.
What do you guys think of the story so far? It's my first one, so tips would be appreciated.