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Chapter 5
The Night of Commitment
The wind was cool, the trees, plants and flowers lush green. The heavy shower of rain left behind drops of rain on the leaves, and the sun's rays made the plants glitter and gleam. The lavish hotel looked beautiful and the people living there looked too happy today...
She was sleeping on the bed, the great expanse of the room described nicely that she was all alone. She tried to wake up, but her head was throbbing with pain. Just then she saw him coming towards her, all dressed, all ready, looking handsome.
"Uth gayi?" he asked. She didn't reply. She was holding her head with both of her hands that were also covering her eyes.
"Yeh lo" he said handing her a glass of lemonade. She took it.
"Isse tumhara sir dard thhek ho jaayega" while saying so he turned to leave.
"But sir aapko kaise pata kee mere sir dard ho raha hai" she asked curiously.
"Bbb vo.." he managed to speak finding for words, for an excuse, he begged his sharp brain to muster up an appropriate answer.
"Vo tum aise sar pakadkar bethi ho to isliye" he said trying to whet his words.
Provoked at her own stupidity, she smiled and said.
"Oh haan"
"Now come on get ready, we have to continue with our mission." He said in a firm tone..and sauntered outside the room.
She quickly drank the liquid and made her way to her luggage.
He was trotting in the corridor thinking, he thought that for the life of him he would never be able to say those words to shreya, but now it was the limit. He know that this mission wasn't unassailable.
When they were ready to go, daya and shreya went to the lounge looking for suspects, looking for persons who were not behaving normally. That day there was a party that was thrown in the hotel, there were posters all over inviting the guests to the party hall for the party in honor of their 10th anniversary or something like that. Daya thought that the party would be full of people and it wasn't totally absurd to check that place once.
They both got separated, Daya went into the hall and shreya made her way towards the laundry where no one was allowed rather than the attendants. She peered from the glass window inside the laundry, but no luck, nothing unusual, washing, ironing and bringing of clothes were done. She wanted to gather at least one clue, she didn't wanted to lose the mission, to let her team down, to let Daya down and the most important to let C.I.D Mumbai down. She had already got a battery of advice from her seniors ACP and Abhijeet, so it was not the time to just kneel down and say I couldn't do it. There she saw a door which was leading to the pantry. 'yes! the pantry, maybe the killer would have stayed here as a cook, a chef maybe' she thought to herself. But she just couldn't go inside the pantry and say 'hi!' to the cooks, she definitely needed some other place to hide and see inside the pantry, as the door was made up of wood she couldn't peer through it. She turned and saw a dark alley leading towards somewhere. Walking down the alley vigorously, she ended up in a great expanse of grass, and the smell of dishes. Yes! she was surely at the back side of the pantry.
Suddenly she heard the sound of the back door of the pantry open and a man in a white jacket and checkered pants, he also wore a chef's hat. He came inside the little place smoking a cigarette, shreya quickly hid behind one of the trees to look at the person. He didn't seem unusual, a cook only until she heard THAT.
He took out his phone from his pocket still smoking and dialed a number, soon their conversation began.
"Hello! haan haan vo yaheen hain..haan paanchhve din ki raat ko hee kaam hoga...arre apun log apna style kabhi nahi bhoolte...haan haan theek hai naa...ok ok..bass 2 din vo maare jayenge..haan haan...bye!"
She got no opportunity to conjecture she instantly got what he was saying, she held her head high in proudness.'yess she had got a clue". She was feeling wondrous.
She saw the man crushing the cigar under his legs and making his way inside the door. She quickly turned to leave and made her way towards the alley. She knew that a name or face never escaped her mind, also being a officer she had to be alert every time. She was excited to tell the news to daya, but she knew that she should not lose her presence of mind. Suddenly! an idea struck her mind, she should take the cigar with her, taking the evidence packet out of her pocket she carefully placed it in the pocket and made her way to the dark alley, walking steadily she reached her hands to open the door, but what! it did not open, yes it was surely locked from outside, she pushed it several times, but no luck, she tried to break it but she knew, nobody was better than daya in breaking doors...She took out her phone and checked for network, but no luck! Finally she walked down in the open area where network was available, she dialed his number and told the situation, feeling a little embarrassed of herself, she waited there for some minutes, and the door click open and there was him, staring at her. "oh! what an experience it was! she said relieved, "come on let's go" he ordered and she followed him . She told him what she had found and daya praised her, they checked the hotel again.
It was dusk now, night was falling and the sky was becoming darker, grey clouds were forming in the sky. Both were ready for dinner.
Daya had decided he would say those magical words to her soon. He was all ready and already booked a private seat for both of them near the pool side, their first candelight dinner, he thought..Oh wow! he thought to himself.
"s-shreya mei pehle chala jaata hoon, order de ke rakhoonga ok?" he asked trying to sound causal.
"oK!" she answered absentmindedly.
"Phew! mission accomplished" he was proud..
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The table and the two chairs were decorated beautifully, a beautiful candle with a pleasant smell was burning in the center of the table, the water was shining brightly, he was sitting in one of the chair's waiting for her quietly, a lot of questions running through her mind, and suddenly! she arrived..looking mesmerizing, her short hair dancing with the wind, no makeup..looking beautiful, for him she looked the most beautiful in her engagement but sadly it wasn't with him it was with sidharth, but she looked beautiful and confident always.
She seated herself opposite to him and asked
"sir ye special arrangement kis liye?" she asked rather curiously.
"hmm aise hee" he said"tum khanaa start karo naa!" he instructed as the food was already placed on the table.
They had their dinner, silently here and there talking about the case. As they finished she stood up to leave when he called her.
"Shreya! mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai.." he said
"jee sir" she answered not aware of what was coming next.
He took a deep breath, and brought himself on his knees beneath her...holding a red box in his hands..
She was shocked, she did not really expect this from him after her engagement with sidharth.
Hee took that plunge and closed his eyes and slowly opened the box and a beautiful diamond ring flashed before her eyes...and he said..
"I-I really love you shreya, jab se tumse mila hoon tabse, kuch alag saa feel hone laga hai tumhaare liye, I know bohot der ho chuki hai lekin mein ab keh raha hoon, that I really love you..."
He opened his eyes to look at the surprised face of shreya..he smiled and said..
"will you marry me?" he asked...
Shreya was in utter shock, she couldn't believe her ears, but she should be the most happiest person on the earth right now right? she was waiting for this moment since ages..she should be standing in the seventh heaven..but this feeling was not like that now for her..she closed her and her mother's face flashed in front of her eyes...she was the one who took care of her throughout her life...her maa who she loved the most, she knew she was suffering from a heart problem and when she had told her that she doesn't want to marry sidharth, her reaction, her pain, if this was what will make her mom and her family happy..so she would do it..A big sacrifice...Tears were trickling down her eyes..and then sliding down her cheeks..
Daya stood up and smiled and asked her..
"Kya hua shreya?" he asked and put her one hand on her shoulder...
"I-I am sorry sir" she said and turned away and ran...wiping the tears which had formed in her eyes..
Raanjhan dhoondan main chaleyaa...
Raanjhan mileya naa ye..
Jigraan vich agan laga ke rabaa..
Lakeeraan vich likh di judaai...
He stood there numb trying to figure out what had happened, in just a fraction of seconds, and then he realized that once again he had lost his love, yes the second time, he was sad, the world had ended, he threw the red box in the pool, and shoved the ring inside his pocket and burst into tears, why? why only him every time..he sat on the chair tears sliding down his cheeks..
Kho gayaa..gum ho gayaaa..
Vakt se churaaya thha jo..
Apnaa banaaya thaa..
Vo tera..vo mera..
Saath nibhaya tha jo..
Apna banaaya thaa...
She ran through the lounge, the reception, the corridor crying, everyone rose their heads up looking at her, trying to figure out why this young lady was crying, some aged ladies tried to console her, ask her what had happened, but she wouldn't listen. She made her way to the room and sat on the bed crying..
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni..
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni..
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni..
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni...
Memories flashed before her eyes, how he cared for her, how he became worried when she had accidentally wounded her hand and how he took out her handkerchief and tied it on her hand in satara...(Satara mein khoon)..
How he was anxious to beat the man who had kidnapped her in Ahemdabad and how he argued with ACP for her...(Ahembdabad mein daya faraar-2)
Aisa bhi kya milna? Saath hoke tanha...
Aisi kyun saza humein hai paayi raanjhana ve..
Phir se mujhe jeena tujhpe hai marna..
Phir se dil ne dii hai ye duhaai, saanjhanaa ve..
Laqeeron pe likh di kyun judaai...?
He sat their thinking, how he fell in love with her, how she cared for him, how she praised him, how she defended him and at last how she said no to him..."why shreya?" he asked...he remembered how she was was willing to sir 2 hours in the hospital just for him..how she slept on the couch near his bed..just for him..he didn't ask her to do so..so why she did that every did she fast for him?..(Daya ka diwaali dhamaaka)
How she praised him when a baby was in danger..how she said.."sir aap kuch bhi karsakte hain, aap ke liye koi kaam mushkil nahi hai, bade bade gunehgaaron se nipat sakte hain..chhote chhote bachon ko sambhal sakte hain..(Baby in danger.)
Gair saa hua khud se bhi..na koi mera..
Dard se kar le chal yaari..dil ye keh raha..
Kholoon jo baaahein, bas gham ye simat rahein hain..
Aankhon ke aag lamhe kyun ye ghat rahe hain..
Jaan koi kaise sehta judaaiyaan?
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A/N- ppl mujhe aapne bohot kuch kehna hai so point wise..
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2- You know what i think i am the youngest write on ff...teen..no!
3-meine apne pehl ki kuch stories delete kar dee..kyunki mujhe ab vo pasand nahi..so i AM STARTING over..
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