So, I said 2, but, I WAS NOT EXPECTING SO MANY REVIEWS! Thank you soooooo much, I needed it, but now this chapter... I still need more inspiration for where it's going! And I'm going to also shout out the one reviewer I found helped the most:
Girl-of-many-otp
Congratulations! You really helped me continue striving!
So, here's the story:
No-one's POV!
The school ran, they ran for their lives, there was no way all of them would make it out in the jumbled mess they were making.
Ben,he was still standing on the podium, watching silently as the crowd of once civilized students scrambled for an exit, yet all those evil seemed like there was no need to rush and scramble, in fact, it was obvious Maleficent was enjoying it, laughing at every student left in the dust.
Mel was biting her lip, almost screaming for her mother to stop, but, she just couldn't.. she, she's rotten.. to the core... there isn't a reason for her to be mad with her mother, she isn't meant to... she is NOT a goodie goodie, her mother was the one who was doing the right thing, wasn't she?
Ben was shoved of the podium, of every person there, he deserved to get out the most! At least, that was what everyone was telling themselves! Who could be more important than the current ruler, the ceremony was over! He was King Ben of the United states of Auradon, there was no one more important!
Everyone rushing, everyone tearing at the doors and walls, using skills their parents were known for to get out of the congregation hall.
Maleficent laugh silenced the crowds, they were all staring in her direction, mouths trembling as they noticed her evil presence, she breathed in and let a stream of words leave her voice,
"I have surrounded this hall with a barrier, much like the on that you kept me in for two decades!" She gave a glare to Belle and Beast, who looked pleadingly back at her. "Your only escape it to persuade me to open it, and I believe you already know what I want, so the real question is, will you give it to me?"Darling children, keep an eye on them for me, I'm going to get your parents, and Mel, we are in an area where magic is allowed, so be a dear and make sure they all get proper treatment if anything is out of hand, else I will force it to happen anyway, and probably far harder than you would... have a lovely time while you are trapped, maybe you could discuss what you are going to choose, 'cause, after all, if you don't allow it and all die in here, I'll simply take over that way, and might I say, don't try to escape, it will not work, the villains have been trying for decades, and we have far less limits on how we try!" By the end of that small speech the whole crowd was silent with fear and the children were worried and embarrassed.
"But, um.. mother?" Mel spoke softly.
"Yes darling?"
"Well.. um..."She looked desperately around the room, searching for an excuse to let them out.
"I'm waiting and Mel you know I hate it when I have to wait!"
Mel finally got an idea, "Well, don't you think it rude mother, you are giving them more of chance then they gave you!"
"What do you mean, Mel?"
Well, for a start, they made sure of it we were away from civilization so... um... well, wouldn't it be better if they were somewhere like the Isle, maybe you could bend the boundary so that it could become an accessory and that we don't have to wear it, and it has limits so that they can't go past where the boundary previously was, sure it would give them some resources, but, it means we don't have to wait on them hand and foot."
Maleficent's eye's lit up at once, "Yes, yes yes! Mel, you are a very smart person." Maleficent waved both her staff and the wand at once, allowing them to transport to the Isle.
'Well,' Mel thought sadly, 'at least I've given them some time.'
So that was it... BUT DON'T BLAME ME! I was being rushed! Oh... and also,
DISCLAIMER:I have not owned anything towards entertainment and probably never will.
ALSO... please instead of just saying 'please continue it was good' could you possibly give me better feedback... like... 'Oh, that was really good but could you maybe add in some more benxmel' or even 'I liked it, will ben ever love Mel again after this betrayal', it gives me ideas... and also..(yes, i do realize i'm rambling) I'm going to ask you what the next hapter should be about, review the answer,
a) Ben yelling at Mel
b)The group laughing at how horrible the good guys are at doing things that they grew up with
c)Plotting!
d)your own choice!(Review what you want to happen!)
And also, same rules apply, I need to get at least 2 reviews to continue, although I might make that number bigger considering how many people enjoy this... oh well
-BatFan-
