Hi this is my first fanfic! Hope you enjoy (expect there to be some silly mistakes)! I won't use any of the characters from the actual series sorry if you're disappointed.
Frostkit bolted out of the nursery, excited about her first time in the camp. Her fluffy white fur was groomed and now dirty from the dust she collected along the way.
It was very early in the morning for a kit to be out for the dawn patrol just got back. Frostkit watched as they stretched and yawned obviously tired.
"Hello Frostkit, you certainly are up early today! I see your mother finally let you explore the camp," Rippletide mewed from behind her.
Frostkit jumped in surprise. "You scared me!" she squealed.
"Err... sorry, I didn't mean to scare you," Rippletide apologized, the tabby brown tom's tail drooped slightly.
"It's fine," Frostkit mewed as she started walking towards the center of camp. She was amazed by how big the camp was. The warriors from the dawn patrol slowly padded over to the warriors den. Frostkit looked at the warriors looking for Oakfall, her father.
A Few Moons Later
Frostpaw stretched her legs. It was her first time sleeping in the apprentices den. Her mentor, Rippletide woke her up way earlier than she expected.
"Come on slowpoke we should start hunting practice!" Rippletide purred walking over to the entrance of camp. "Let's see how good you are at remembering, you lead me to the training hollow."
Frostpaw hesitated for a moment then remembered. "Okay, I'm pretty sure I remember where it is," She replied.
"Okay let's begin," Rippletide mewed as he stepped out of camp. Frostpaw leaped towards the entrance of camp and went to where she thought the training hollow was. She held her breath as she turned trying to remember where it was.
When she made the final turn she closed her eyes and held her breath. "Are we there yet?" she mewed to Rippletide.
"Relax, we're here," Rippletide mewed as Frostpaw exhaled and opened her eyes.
"What, how?" Frostpaw breathed surprised to see the training hollow in front of her.
"Good memory," Rippletide purred walking to the center of the training hollow.
"What are we going to do?" Frostpaw mewed bouncing over to Rippletide.
"Every cat needs to know how to hunt so we're going to practice the hunters crouch," Rippletide purred getting into one. Frostpaw tried to copy her mentor, keeping her belly low on the ground and her tail still. She watched as Rippletide moved forwards pretending to be stalking a mouse and she tried to copy him.
"Did I get it right?" Frostpaw mewed to Rippletide as she slowly moved forwards in her hunters crouch.
"Lower, make sure your underbelly just brushes the grass," Rippletide mewed.
"Okay," Frostpaw mewed pressing her belly closer to the ground.
"Better," Rippletide purred. "Now try to move, but remember to put each paw down gently because mice..."
"Can feel me coming before they can see, hear, or smell me," Frostpaw finished.
"Right," Rippletide mewed. "Start!"
Frostpaw moved forwards pretending that she was creeping up on a mouse. She carefully placed each paw down and moved slowly.
"Try to move a little faster, a mouse would have noticed you by now, or even worse finished eating his meal!" Rippletide mewed.
"Okay how about this?" Frostpaw mewed, moving faster.
"Good, now try it again," Rippletide encouraged.
"Rippletide, do you mind if you could watch how Maplepaw was doing? Bring Frostpaw with you," Birchtail mewed poking his head out from behind a tree.
"Okay, Frostpaw let's work on it later!" Rippletide called.
Frostpaw sighed as she followed Rippletide out of the training hollow.
I didn't have to write another chapter, hooray! Reviews please! I need suggestions for warrior names because I'm making an Allegiance chapter thing... so anyways suggestions please?!