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Unknown Rivalry- Another L/J fanfic
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Memories Live Forever- A fic based on the Mediator by Meg Cabot J/S
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The New Girl
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Chapter 1: First Impressions
Lily Evans stepped out of the thestral-pulled carriage and felt a cold wind whip her face.
I wonder how many other students can see thestrals here. Probably not many.
England's dreary weather was a nice change in Lily's opinion. Lily had originally attended an all-witch school in Greece dubbed Neberdan. The school had been right on the water and it seemed like the sun was always shining.
"Miss. Evans, I am Professor McGonagall. Here at Hogwarts our students are sorted into houses Ravenclaw, Slytherin..."
"Hufflepuff and Gryffindor, I am familiar with the houses Professor. I read about the school before I arrived in order to prepare myself. Must I be sorted with the first years or may I do so in private?"
McGonagall appeared shocked for a moment and pursed her lips as if in thought, "I see no reason why we can not sort you quickly in private after the first years."
Lily allowed a small smile to creep onto her lips, "Thank you Proffessor, I would sort myself with the first years but I believe it would be quite awkward."
"Of course Miss. Evans. Follow me please."
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The first years had all been sorted in their houses and a relaxing banter was being exchanged between friends throughout the Great Hall. Four friends in particular were talking most joyously to each other.
"Remus! Peter! Me and Sirius havn't seen you blokes in forever!" James clapped his friends on the back, "This year is going to be the best ever. I can feel it! And I have Head Boy privledges to uphold."
Sirius started to crack up laughing, "I hope you mean abuse James."
"Of course he doesn't Sirius! James was chosen as Head Boy and he has to set a good example for the…"
Remus was promptly cut off by James, "Padfoot, I meant abuse. Mooney, face facts mate, your friends with a bunch of delinquents. "
"Don't I know it."
"What was that Mooney?"
"Nothing Prongs, nothing."
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Tink Tink Tink
"May I have your attention please?" Professor Dumbledore gazed down upon his students. This is going to be quite an interesting year. His gaze lingered on the Head Boy. "I would like to start with warning the first years and reminding the rest of the students that the Forbidden Forest in off limits. Next…"
Dumbledore was cut off by the Great Hall doors being thrown open and a girl with fiery red hair strode into the hall.
"Sorry Professor Dumbledore. Do you want me to join my house now?"
"Yes Lily, Please take a seat."
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Great! Everybody is watching me! Way to be on the down low. The whole point of me coming here was to be incognito.
Lily headed for the table with the scarlet banners flying over it. Because scarlet was the Gryffindor color she figured it was safe to assume that the table was where the Gryffindors sat.
Professor Dumbledore continued on with his speech about corridors that were off limits and best wishes.
Spotting an empty seat beside a boy with blondish brown hair she gracefully sat down, "Is this seat taken?"
To say the guys look startled is an understatement.
"No it's free."
"I'm Lily."
"Remus and these are my best friends Sirius, James and (UGH) Peter."
"Which is which?"
Just as Remus was about to respond Dumbledore proclaimed loudly, "Let's Eat!"
Food appeared on the table and Lily watched as a young man with straight, black hair dived for the food and piled his plate high.
Gross!
Remus was looking disgusted as well, "That is my dear friend Sirius Black."
"Nife ta meef yah."
Chew and swallow first please.
"Can't quite say the same but hi anyways."
A boy with ink black hair that was tousled to look like he had just stepped off his broom started to laugh.
"And the joker would be…?"
"Ohhh, that's James. He's head Boy and can show ya round if ya want."
"Yeah, If ya want we can take a tour righ' now." James wiggled his eyebrows suggestively.
"Nah, I'm hungry…"
…though I certainly wouldn't mind eating you. Oh bloody hell he smells so good! No Lily! You promised yourself you would not allow your …urges…to be your undoing.
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Is it natural for a girl to be that sexy, look that good, and eat so much?
James stared in wonder at the pile of food on Lily's plate
She could beat Sirius! But unlike Sirius she has manners like actually cutting up her food and chewing before swallowing.
James was on his second round, but he still felt extremely hungry.
"I'm like a bottomless pit tonight Mates, plus Lily."
Her eyes sparkled as she responded, "So I'm not good enough to be a 'Mate'?"
The two other mauderers looked to James, "No! That's not what I meant. I mean even peter is my Mate. I just didn't know how you'd you know…react." He pointed to a rather plump boy with thin, blonde hair that barely covered his head.
"Hi." Peter squeaked and wiggled his fingers at her.
"Hey."
What is with me? None of this food is having any effect on me! I could go for a steak and nice large raw stea… raw? Did I honestly think raw? Oh man that is gross.
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I know it is not long, but I wanted to introduce you to some people and show you how people respond to Lily. Also it is Christmas Eve and I have a party to go to soon but I wanted to get an update up! Anyways, hope you all review review review!
Love to my fans!
Isolde Eris
