lil-angel-onxy here hope u like the frist chapter now to shadowofhope666

shadowofhope666: well i had fun writeing this and i hope u like it back to u

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Disclaimer: i want to but can't o well

Fox began to moan louder as saka began to go harder and faster making fox feel absolute pleasure. As Saka was doing that he began to bite on fox's neck giving fox a feeling of being on extascy. when he started to bite down hard naruto's eyes turned pitch black and he turned around and in one swift motion ripped sasuke's shirt off and went down on his knees pulling all of saka inside his mouth. Saka screamed with surprise and joy.

"ah mmm ah hu ah what r u doing?" asked Saka.

"i want you" replied Naruto.

"this isnt like you babe, whats come over you? said Saka.

" i need you" replied Naruto.

and with that said naruto began to put two fingers in saka's opening then three. as it became easier to put them in and out he took it upon himself to slowly put himself into saka.

" Not too hard " said saka.

i know i will go slow" replied naruto tenderly.

And naruto began slow and as he got deeper saka pulled onto fox letting him know that it was ok for him to go faster or harder. So he did he gave it all he had to give making saka scream in pure extascy and joy.Naruto himself could not understand why he was acting this way but neither of them them cared at that moment. both could feel the other was a about to implode

So with saka digging his nails into the already bloody back of naruto and naruto biting into saka's neck like a piece of good meat .

they both came as they did both where to be seeing stars. they also did not realize that they were in the tub. soaked with more than just water(hehe). saka leaned over and said " i love you naruto" naruto was not only surprised to hear this but he was absolutly in shock he wondered if that was how he truly felt or if it was just the sex talking.

" i ... you...too saka". replied naruto shamefully, he did not know wether or not he should say it back and what it would mean for there relationship if he did. so as they went to bed he wondered bout the night they had, had. (it is two in the morning and naruto can not sleep.)

" umm hu uhhh " moaned naruto.

" are you ok babe?" asked saka sleeply.

" go to sleep saka i'm fine" said naruto snapped.

" ok, ok goodnight" said saka as he fell to sleep.

naruto sat up in bed unable to even think of sleep. he didn't know what it was but he knew that he wouldn't sleep until he found out what was bugging him. so as quietly as he could naruto got dressed and headed for the woods near there home in search of his "place".

A place that only he knew about where he could be himself and think in complete silence. As he arrived at the hotspring he was not surprised to see that kyuubi was already there and what seemed (from naruto's point of view) to be waiting for him.

what are you doing here" asked naruto.

" ahhhh it is not why i am here that matters it is why you have come here yuorself" replied kyuubi sliely

"huh?! what the fuck is that supose to mean?" yelled naruto.

" sh sh sh calm down my young one please have a seat, it is quite nice in here." said kyuubi

" man, you are so lucky that i trust you already or you would be outa here" snapped naruto.

" ok, ok just come in the damn spring already." said kyuubi "so tell me what seems to be troubling you my friend?

" well i don't know for sure but i think it has something to do with saka and daine."explained naruto

" i see and what does daine have to do with it all?" asked kyuubi.

" well i met him a long time ago before i met saka we had been pen pals while he lived in america, he had been having some trouble with his family and friends so i told him that if he ever came here that i would take care of him and to my astonishiment the next weekend he was here, i would be lieing if i said that i did not have feelings toward the guy but, i just kept him as a loyal friend."

Naruto explained further about the many times it had come down to him and daine actually doing something but there was always something that would get in the way. when naruto left for military school he met the young and rebellious sasuke. it was lust at first sight for both yet they were too shy to say or do anything.

" i see where you could have a problem , but do you think that if you had been able to anything with daine that you would be here now? " replied kyuubi

" i sort of understand what you are saying but something still isn't right, i mean saka told me that he loved me, HE LOVES ME HUhuhuhu" huffed naruto getting out of hand and losing his breath.

" calm down are you trying to kill yourself over this little thing? i mean sure he told you he loved you , you should be gald as for the uneasyness" sighed kyuubi " you will have to talk to daine and sasuke about that one."

" ok,ok fine at least let me tell you about this crazy dream i had tonight"exclaimed fox

sorry readers but your going to have to wait for the next one i love writing so (whisper: it might be tomarrow) hummm hmm ok well i hope you like it leave me anything you like(suggestions, critisism,loveness)

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