hey this is shadow just wanted to drop bye an see how this is coming along.i think it's a pretty good story and yeah i am still working on my special. i didnt know how hard it was to come up with stuff. so lilangel hows everything going?

angel : ugh i am going to hang myself !

shadow : WHAT why?

angel : because i still dont know where i am going with this damn story its so fustrting and its only the 5th chapter . sigh i love writng but i just cant think of anything , ithink we are having the same problem.

shadow : yeah it is hard to come up with stuff that is original and that it is something that people like to read. i wonder if the other writers have problems with their stories.

angel : i know , i wonder that sometimes too.

shadow : lets get to the story.

angel : everyone , i hope you enjoy the chapter.

Chapter 5

how bad?

summary : Naruto makes some bad choices and can he live with his actions or will his love for sasuke be put to the test.

" How could you do this to me, I... I... I never want to see you again !"

"But Saka I never ment to hurt you really everything just sorta happened."

"No Naruto I may have forgiven you for alot in the past, but this I don't think I can."

They both looked at each other Naruto with pleading eyes to the fury of his lover Sasuke. Naruto didn't want to brake up with him and he felt that if Saka did want to that he would just die. On the other hand Saka was so mad he could melt a block of ice with his bare hands. The air was tense and neither of them spoke for a long time. Naruto was too afraid to say anything to the consequence of making Saka even more mad then he already was. Saka having cooled down had time to think about his next words.

"I do not want to see you Naruto."

"Saka! please I-

"Just stop it , I have made up my mind go, now leave and come back only when you think I have forgiven you, that is all I am going to say."

Naruto had a lump in his throut the size of a baseball. He didn't know wether or not he should fallow through with Saka's orders or just try to work it out. But after looking at Sasuke's face and his stance he knew his only hope of getting back on Saka's good side was to go.

"Ok I will leave but I only have one thing to say.. I love you and I always will."

Naruto got a duffel bag and got most of his clothes. He headed for the one place he knew he was hated more than at his own home. Before he even knocked on the door their was a hand up the side of his head.

"What the fuck was that for?"

" Well you did suduce my boyfrined last night don't think I am that stupid to just up and forget."

"Well I- wait I didn't suduce him he kissed me first and another thing I know I did do some stuff with him but we never acutally did it."

"Oh uh really but I saw wait he and you both had your pants off , how do I know you didn't do it."

"Because I last way longer than what time you gave us."

" Ugh whatever actually that is kinda true he does take his sweet ass time to uh you know umm yeah."

"Oh really?"

"But that still doesn't change the fact that he cheated on me so I broke up with him, he and Iaidda went to stay in his cabin up north, and from the looks of it Saka isn't too happy with you either so umm I guess, well, here are the directions to the cabin if you decide to go up."

" Well thats alot to deal I hope you give him a second chance."

"Oh I don't know I have to see how it feels to be a single guy now."

"Well ok just keep your hands off of Saka."

"Oh I wasn't thinking about Saka but if you insist."

"Ugh Gaara I swear if you touch him."

"What you'll hurt me."

"I will do more than hurt you."

" Really well I have had enough of this chit chat so bye bye I have to go see how my Saka-poo is doing."

"Stay away from him ! "

With that Gaara turned around and headed toward Naruto's house. As for Naruto he just looked up at the sky and wished for rain, he didn't know wether or not to go to Daine's cabin or to just go and stay with with his mom. Thinking about it he realized that he would rather die than go back to live with his old woman. So he grabbed his keys from his back pocket and got in to his car. Looking at the poorly drawn directions he knew he had to get in contact with Daine.

SASUKE'S POV

Saka didn't know wether or not to be more sad or angry. How could Naruto have done something like that. How could Daine do this, and Gaara, he wondered if he knew about it then he remembered the bruises and blood on Naruto. He wanted to forgive him but he needed sometime to think about their relationship. He knew he loved Naruto but he just couldn't understand why he would do someting this bad. As he looked out the bedroom window he looked down to see Naruto with his duffel, talking to Gaara and Gaara looked pretty calm . As a matter of fact Naruto looked like he was going to explode. He opened the window a little bit so he could hear what they were talikng about. The only thing he could make out was something about a brake up and Daine living witha friend he tried to make out more but things just got too quiet for him to hear. Then he saw Gaara heading for the house he stood for a moment gasing upon his lover with forgiving eyes and a broken heart. What would he do? Was the last thing he thought before he heard the bell ring.

"Hey Gaara what a somewhat pleasant surprise."

"Ugh yeah pleasant is really the word right now."

"Listen I know about what happend Naruto told me the whole thing, did you have to kick his ass?"

" HE TRIED TO MAKE WHOOPIE WITH MY BOYFRIEND AND YOU OF ALL PEOPLE THINK I SHOULD HAVE GONE EASY ON HIM!"

"Well from my understanding your "boyfriend" was the one that started the whole thing so yeah I would have thought you to be a more verbal type guy."

"Well you thought wrong."

"Yeah I figured that much, so what did you do to Daine or should I be looking for dirt stains on your hands?"

" Ha ha very funny I didn't kill him I just broke up with him so he left and went up to his cabin with one of his friends, oh I almost forgot I gave Naruto the ok to go up their."

"Really ok let me just ask you one question... WHAT THE HELL WERE YOU THINKING THEY JUST HAD A ROMANTIC NIGHT TOGETHER AND YOU ARE PUTTING THEM ALONE IN A ROMANTIC CABIN ALONE!"

"Not alone he took his friend Iaidda she will keep him straight."

"Not too straight for your Sake hahaha."

"Not funny."

"How do you pronounce her name?"

"It's pronounced I-aid-duh."

"Whats her last name ?"

" How the hell should I know."

"Okay well umm I'm hungry you want some breakfast while you're here?"

"Sure why not."

Gaara looked on, wondering wether or not he should have let Naruto go up to the cabin. He knew for a fact that he couldn't trust those two alone, but on the other hand he really didn't have to care because they were no longer a couple and what Daine did in his sex life was none of his business anymore. Gaara and Sasuke bothed sighed at the same time making them wonder if they had just thought the same thing. They bothed wondered what their loved ones were doing at that very moment. At that very moment Naruto was have a hissy fit on the side of the mountain because he had forgotten to fill up the gas and he was not fully prepared to deal with his tire being flat. He reached for his cell phone to call Saka when he remembered what had happend that day. He was stuck with no food , no help, and no warm clothes. As for Daine he was relaxing in a hot bath in the cabin while listening to his favorite music band. He had just finished his bath when he heard a loud scream come from down the hall. He rushed out to see what had happened to find...

sorry for the cut off i have been getting total writers block lately and i am not really sure of what he should see so yeah anywayz. i will be writing soon so keep on reading!!!! love all who read. -xoxo lilangelonyx-