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Hi I was told to improve my characters by a reader so I'll try but no promises… And coz I'm sick of hinata being a good two shoes I'm making her a "bad ass" and if you don't like it stop reading, I'm sick of her happy personality... and can everyone please read my friend suberXxXduperXxXfun machine's stories they're like the best! Like I said in about the 2nd chapter I do take ideas so if anyone reading this wants to give me an idea I'll be happy to read it. Chapter 11 below. Oh and everyone I want the reader to vote for who they think will get hinata in the end so then I know who to improve so send the name Kakashi , gaara or naruto to my message thing. And I'll count them up and who ever has the least amount of votes, I'll make more interesting… I think most people will vote for kakashi but you can surprise me. Oh and I have decided to make it way more M rated.

Hinata rubbed her grey eyes as she woke up she got up, but then she remembered the conversation and fell on to the bed. What have I done they will hate me I never wanted this all I wanted was naruto then gaara and kakashi come along and confuse me… hinata let out a sob… and buried her small face into the white pillow behind her. She cried for a few moments then realised she'll just have to tell them she likes them all equally… but that's not going to work… the only way she can do this is tell them when they get to the village hidden in the mist… hinata got changed into her black and purple clothes. Thank god ino had shown her that the jumper she used to wear made her look fat. And from then on she has only worn tight black and purple (I got the colour idea off Cynthia, remember your textile colours?) midriff exposing spaghetti strapped top and short black shorts. It was strange that the second – well not the exact second more like a day or two - she changed her clothes naruto started to pay more attention to her?

Hinata stepped out into the cool air. Great another day with the idiots…

"Hi hinata" naruto said pleasantly...

"Hi" she muttered under her breath. A strand of her long silky black hair feel over one eye, she brushed it away. Hinata had changed her hair style dramatically since she was 13. She now had l jet black hair – she had dyed it that colour – which was down to her waist and was straight and out and she had a heavy fringe. She had decided to wear eye make up today because she (like me) was sick of her goody two shoes attitude, Black mascara eyeliner and shadow. She thought she looked quite hot – not nice, hot – naruto hadn't noticed her eyes being they were covered but her fringe. She tilted her head up so naruto could see. And when she did Naruto was practically drooling over her, disgusting but at least it shows the eye make up was effective. And when Kakashi and Gaara walked out to see what naruto was doing they were all drooling, EWWW.

"Umm we should er... leave" hinata said to break the silence.

"Yer sure" kakashi said still looking at her short shorts. Perv… well I guess it was rather that or at her top were gaara and naruto…hmmm… or let me think MY FUCKING FACE is a civilised place to look when talking to someone.

Hinata started to walk towards them she bounced her hips slightly when she walked she wanted to make them suffer… she had worn stilettos today so her walk was way more bouncy than she had excepted it to be. Oh my god is naruto panting. She glided softly past them and grabbed the railing for the stairs and walked down. She followed the rocky path though a lovely Japanese garden. Then around the building to the reception room she lightly dinged the bell, to tell hanzaki they were checking out. He did drool thankfully but he did look at her differently than before.

"So…" hinata said after and hour or so of walking she thought they should at least talk about something… umm but what? "How is everyone doing?" oh my god could I have been any gayer? Probably not.

Kakashi trying not to laugh – bitch –

"Umm I'm doing fine" kakashi said with a smile like I could tell any way with the stupid mask…

"Yer well I'm not I'm going to the village hidden in the mist for a girl who's gett6ing an abortion coz of me!" umm okay I totally now wished I hadn't of asked how things were… naruto unlike me was shocked by gaara's outburst.

"Hey Fuck off its not her fault she was drunk and let you seduce her."

Gaara letting out a bitter laugh " Oh so that's what you told him that you were drunk and I seduced you, ha more like she was sober and seduced me… she knew exactly what she was doing."

"hinata is that true?" Oh fuck I haven't been very honest I did seduce him…

"Ummm unfortunately for you naruto yes it is true." I managed to say.

Naruto replied with one word "Bitch"

After a moment of waiting for something else from him he added.

"I'm going back you not worth the trouble for an abortion" naruto said to me then to gaara "gaara she's yours" then glancing at me he said under his breath "Slut" and then turned to walk back to the village.

Hinata couldn't speak she was that hurt by naruto's words. Hinata blinked away some tears that had gathered under her eyes… why I had eye makeup and usually never wear it whenever you cry black smears down your face like I'm pretty sure was happening to me…

Well I guess this is the end for me and naruto. She watched him for a few moments walk away the one she had loved for 10 year…

Hinata start walking the other direction to naruto and soon enough this walk was a sprint. She turned back to look at naruto once more. but he wasn't there… at that exact moment her heart was ripped out of her, oh and also she fell over a tree root and was knocked out…