Hm wel Im am happy with my reviews. Im sry my computer messed up as u can tell. Well I know i got a review saying Bella wasnt ready for a baby or marriage at 18 but she is ready for eternity so why not. Plus Things arent alwayz going to be good int this fanfic...things will go wrong!

Last time in Beauty In The End: "Well I want to try and see tonight." She said messing with my collar. I picked her up and we ran to the house. No one saw us fly up the stairs. I kicked opened the door and layed her on the bed. I walked back over and closed the door quietly. I looked at Bella and smiled. Tonight was going to change the rest of our lives.
BPOV

What was I doing? I mean half of this is happening without thought but...Edward...eternity...baby...marriage... all so much so fast. But when it comes down to it even though I've acted as if I didnt want half those things...I DID.

I looked at Edward. He walked over to some candles and started lighting them. It set the mood and made all this more beautiful. Edward walked over to me afterwards and sat next tome.

"Bella...are you sure about this?I called Charlie and told him you were staying with Alice so it'll be fine tonight."He asked/said rubbing his hands together looking down.

I looked at him and put my right hand under his chin, I lifted it slowly and went in for a kiss. I layed back allowing him to get on top of me. Our lips pressed harder and harder.

I broke apart then said, "Edward darling Im sure about this. Are you?" He looked at me and smiled and whispered in my ear "Ofcourse."

I couldn't take any longer. I started un buttoning his shirt, but my hands started shaking so it was harder. Once it was fully done I slid it off his arms. He lifted my dress up at the bottom and put his arms under grabbing my underwear and pulling them off too fast for my eyes. He bit my strap and pulled it off slowly. With my other strap he took it off with his hand while kissing my shoulder. Chills ran through my body as he kissed my neck. I reached for his belt and took it off. I wrapped the belt around the back of his neck and pulled him closer mashing our lips together. He licked my lips and then nibbled on my bottom lip. I threw the belt across the room and unbuttoned his pants. I pulled them off with my feet so I didnt break the kiss. I broke away for air as he slid off my dress leaving me bare.( AN realize most girls dont wear abra with a dress.oh and their shoes are off but im too lazy to type that in the story) Before I kissed him again I took his boxers off. I looked down seeing that he was ...big...really big. I didnt comment not wanting to ruin the moment.

He pressed his body against me and I shivered.

"Bella Im sorry here." He said getting under the covers so I could be a little warmer.

I got under and he climbed back on top of me. I wrapped my arms around him and kissed his shoulder. I could feel his member against me. I looked at him and smiled while nodding. "Are you ready Bella? If you dont want to we can wait...I dont want u to feel rushed." He said looking concerned. I put my finger over his lips and nodded adn kissed him.

"Bella...I love you..." He said positioning himself.

"I love you too Edward...don't worry." I said arching my back getting ready.

He smiled and then I realized his eyes were green. I remember Carisle telling me they were green.

I wrapped my arms tighter around him getting ready. Suddenly he entered me, slowly. I felt so much pain yet so much pleasure. I threw my head back and felt him leave and enter again. The patterned continued getting faster. I wrapped my legs around his waist pulling him closer making him push harder. I moaned in pleasure

"Oh Edward it feels so...Ohh good. Faster" I said moaning loudly.

He went harder throwing himslef more in me. Then I felt my first orgasm. I moaned louder and he could tell wat happened and went faster and faster making the bed move and hit the wall over and over. I t felt so good. Edward kissed me while he still entered me and came out going faster.

"Oh EDWARD OH KEEP GOING" I yelled clawing his back. He listened and went inside me again slowly but once he was in he pressed hard sending pleasure all through my body. This was incrediable.

"Bella are you sure you want one? Im about to cum." He said going slower just incase.

I answered by throwing my hips into him hard making him moan. He threw his head back as I felt hot liquid enter me. At this point I started getting tired but nto tired enough. He entered me pushing it back and then entered again.

I rolled him over getting on top of him. He looked at me confused but I put my hands on his shoulders as I threw my hips against hip. He put his hands on my hips pulling me down on him putting him further and further into me. I smiled going faster. Up and down harder each time making him moan loudly almost sounding like a growl.

"Bella..." He moaned three times closing his eyes.

A wave a tiredness hit me and I slowed down but throwing him into me further. Then I felt more sperm enter me.

"Oh Edward..." I said.

"Im sorry that snuck up on me." He said bending up to kiss me then layed back down.

"It's ok." I said throwing myself into him hard one last time. I got off and layed next to him.

We cuddle with eachother. I knew I would remember this forever. I smiled and drifted into a slumber.

Yeah couldve been better sorry. REVIEWS

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