Author's note: Thanks so much for the lovely reviews, I really appreciate them.
This fic is dedicated to the super genius; Morphox!
Name: Harry Potter
Class: 5AS
Task: Creative writing, use your imagination to write a fairy tale. Try to use the character you created last week.
The Rescue, by Harry Potter
Once upon a time there was a boy who lived in a cupboard. He lived with a wicked witch who had a big warty nose and a face like a horse and her husband who was a big, smelly, pink pig. A prince also lived there and he had blonde hair and blue eyes but he was very fat and he waddled rather than walked. The prince was very cruel and he liked to hurt people especially the boy who lived under the stairs. One day the prince was pushing the boy down the stairs when there was a knock at the door.
"Answer it, Freak" The prince ordered.
The boy hurried to obey as he knew what would happen if he didn't. As the door swung open the boy gasped. The man from his dreams was there! He recognised his long curly hair and there was a motorbike behind him that the boy just knew could fly. The man told the boy he had come to rescue him and take him home to live with him. The boy agreed happily and they flew home on the mans bike. They had lots to eat and Harry had a big room all to himself and lots of toys. The boy and the man lived happily ever after.
This is very good, Harry! I like how you have included the flying motorbike man from last week. The only criticism I have is the ending. The boy only got a room and food and everyone has this anyway, as it is a fairytale you should have included the stuff that you really want and don't have.
Name: Harry Potter
Class: 5AS
Task: Write up the results of your science experiment.
When the cress was in the dark it grew a lot to find light but it was yellow and unhealthy because there is no sunlight. When the cress was in the fridge it didn't grow because it was too cold. When the cress was on the windowsill it grew and was green and healthy because it was warm and sunny so it had everything it needed.
You have written up your results very clearly and you obviously have a very good understanding. I have noticed several burn marks on your arm, how did you get them?
Name: Harry Potter
Class: 5AS
Task: Write about your favourite television programme
My favourite television programme is the news because it is the only one I have ever seen as it is the only one the Dursleys watch apart from Dudley who watches everything in his room but I am not allowed in. On the news there is always lots of stories about people dying and starving. There is also often news about children being mistreated, these are the saddest ones because I know how it feels.
I very much doubt that the news is the only programme you have ever seen, Harry. I also doubt that you know how the mistreated children feel as you come from a loving family and your relatives seem to care for your every need. Try to write truthfully unless it is creative writing. AS
Name: Harry Potter
Class: 5AS
Task: Book review, make sure you mention the beginning, middle and end and also comment on your favourite parts and the parts you didn't like.
I read 'The Jungle' and it was very good because it had lots of animals in it and they were always having adventures. My favourite was when the monkey hit the big, bullying tiger and saved the mouse from being trampled on. I didn't like it when the bird got banished from the Jungle because they believed him to have done something when he hadn't and I didn't like it when the tiger was bullying the squirrel. This book was strange because it mentions lots of animals which don't normally live in jungles. At the beginning it introduces all the characters with funny songs and in the middle is all the adventures as mentioned above. I don't know what happens at the end because I didn't read the last few chapters.
This is a very good detailed review, Harry! However I am shocked to see that you don't know the ending of the book. The homework was to read all of the book not just the bits you wanted to and because you didn't complete the book your review is not completed either. Also you have not returned the book? Please bring it back by Friday. I can't Uncle Vernon ripped it up and threw it on the fire which is why I haven't finished reading it.
Name: Harry Potter
Class: 5AS
Task: Spelling test.
1) unfortunnatlly
2) exellent
3) friving
4) somthing
5) Ungrateful
1/5. Unfortunately, Excellent, Thriving, something. Right them 20 times in your spelling book. Why did you not learn this week's spellings at home? Because Uncle Vernon took them off me so that Dudley could beat me because last week I got 5/5 and he didn't get any. First of all you don't learn your spellings and then you lie about it? Of course your uncle did not take your spelling sheet off you and Dudley got 5/5 this week. You will stay in at lunchtime for lying. AS
Name: Harry Potter
Class: 5AS
Task: Write about your best memory.
My best memory was from when I was a baby and my Dad was holding me and my mum was singing. There were three other men in the room as well. One of them looked just like the man in my dream. Nothing much happens and it isn't particularly interesting but I felt happier and safer then than any other time of my life.
Very good, Harry! What have you done to your arm? I saw some deep cuts on it earlier. AS