Primary School Essays

by Angelauthor14

Have you ever wondered how no one knew about the abuse Harry had to sustain? The clues were all there, but they were all dismissed. This fic is of Harry's essays from primary school; the clues are all included, but are all ignored. COMPLETE!

4. Chapter 4: Reports

Name: Harry Potter

Form: 5AS

Attendance: 64%

Maths: B

English: A

Science: C

PE: A

RE: D

History: B

Geography: A

Overall grade: B

Comments:

Harry is a very gifted child who copes well with excessive workloads especially considering all the school he has mysteriously missed. He seems to be ill an awful lot for such a young and reasonably healthy child. He gets consistently good grades in most of his subjects and he works well with others though he seems to be a bit wary of a select few such as Dudley's friends.

He writes well and has a vivid imagination though he doesn't seem to be able to establish the difference between fact and fiction and sometimes does creative writing when he is supposed to be writing autobiographically.

He still seems to have a problem with telling the truth and often tells very far fetched stories. I think he should relax a little and have some fun, he seems to be serious most of the time which is unusual for his age group. He doesn't seem to have a special friend and should perhaps interact more with the other children.

He is a polite and well spoken child but he should be a little louder and he lacks self-confidence. Overall he is a good student although he should work on his concentration.

AS

Targets:

- To interact more with class mates

-To be more confident

-To improve communication skills

-To improve concentration.

-To volunteer information in class

-To keep up the good grades.

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Name: Dudley Dursley

Form: 5AS

Attendance: 100%

Maths: C

English: B

Science: D

PE: D

RE: D

History: D

Geography: F

Overall: D

Comments:

Dudley is a very confident child, he is not nervous while giving oral presentations and he often answers questions in class but his written work is lacking and his attitude and manner can be quite rude. His spelling needs work as does his handwriting but he is good at descriptive writing.

He lacks concentration and enthusiasm and his grades could improve dramatically with a bit of effort. He seems to be quite violent towards the other children and I have often caught him doing or saying inappropriate things to them especially his cousin, Harry, though overall he seems to be quite accommodating to him. I think Dudley needs support but he seems reluctant to accept help, I wonder if we could have a meeting to discuss this?

AS

Targets:

-To improve concentration

-To improve written work

-To improve attitude

-To be more enthusiastic

-To make more of an effort

- To be less violent

-To be kinder to the other children

- To improve spelling

-To improve handwriting

-To accept help when it is needed

-To keep up the good work in English.