Author's Note: k. so. this chapter was suppose to be up on thursday, but fanfiction wouldn't let me log on. aorry for the long wait once again.
1) i dont remeber/ know if the book ever saidwhat street the Curtis' live on. so, in my story they live on oak street. you can correct me if you know what street they really live on.
2) anything in italics is either song lyrics or thoughts
3) im not sure if there were cell phones back then but for story purposes we're going to pretend there were.

WARNING: one part of the story is a little uh..gorey i guess? idk, if you ask me i'd say it isn't that bad. and it's a really short part too. but imwritting this warningjust as a little heads up (in case there are like 10year olds reading this..or people who dont like blood.)

Disclaimer: i dont own the outsiders. they belong to S.E. Hinton. and i don't onw the song used in here either. It's 'Ride the Wings of Pesilence' by From First to Last.

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October 25th- somewhere between 8:45-9:10pm

The cool autumn wind sent leaves swirling off trees asa silver car turned onto Oak Street. The windows of the car were slightly rolled down and if you were close enough you'd be able to hear the sound of music coming from the stereo.

'Hiding behind the shadows
I'll be waiting in the dark
To drive this blade straight through your heart

I'll drag your body to the car
As blood races down my arms
Your friends will all wonder where you are
Tonight...'

"Can you lower that or something please?" the 16 year old girl in the passengers seat of the car asked. The driver of the car looked at her and frowned but followed the command.

Looking out the window the girl sighed and said "Where are we going again?"

"Angela, I told you a million times already. We are going to stop by the Curtis' house to see if anyone wants a ride to your brother's party." The boy answered.

"Aw Kevin why do we have to stop at the Curtis'?" Angela asked. Her boyfriend Kevin just looked at her and rolled his eyes.

Angela Shepard was not one of the most patient people in the world. Dressed in a tight black leather top and a ridiculously short skirt, she was ready to party. The soft curls of her brownish black hair sat bouncing on the tops of her shoulders. Kevin had just taken her out to dinner and they were now going back to her house for one of her brother, Tim's, infamous parties. Unfortunately, Kevin had decided that a pit stop was in order. Two-Bit Matthews and Ponyboy Curtis had stopped by Jay's today, the store where Kevin worked at, and said that they were going to be at her brother's party. Kevin, being the good person that he is, thought it would be nice if he offered them a ride.

"Alright, we're here" Kevin said.

"I'll be right back." He leaned over and gave Angela a kiss on the cheek, then opened the door and got out of the car. 'I'll give him 5 minutes' she said to herself.

--------- 10 minutes later ---------
Leaning her head back against the cold interior of the seat, she sighed and closed her eyes. 10 minutes had passed and Kevin had yet to return. The silence was starting to bother her so she turned on the CD player. It started in the middle of the song Kevin had had on before.

'I'll hide you in my walls
Your body will never be found
I'll wear your skin as a suit
Pretend to be you
Your friends will like you more than they used to'

"Oh that's lovely. Definitely a good song to be listening to when your locked in a car by yourself at night" She muttered to herself as she turned off the cd player.

She looked at the clock on the dashboard. 8:57. 12 minutes had passed. She sighed again and watched the little green numbers on the dashboard flicker until the clock changed to 8:58.

13 minutes gone. She reached into her purse and grabbed her cell phone. She was done waiting and decided it was time to call Kevin. Suddenly she heard a noise.

Screech, screeeeeech. Screech.

Angela's head flew towards the window. Through the deadly silence she could swear that she heard something scraping against the roof of the car.

"Kevin?" she yelled.

No answer.

"He's probably just playing a trick on me" she said trying to reassure herself. About a minute later the squeaking noise came again, followed by the soft pitter-patter sound that rain would make when it hit your window or car.

"What the hell is going on!" Angela said frustrated and scared. She quickly pulled the lock up and opened the car door, just as the pitter patter noise returned. What was that noise? It wasn't raining.

"Hello?" she called. 'ugh, I sound like one of those helpless girls in horror movies. Time to toughen up Angela.'

"Alright, whoever that is better get their ass out here right now!" she yelled.

The pitter patter noise came again. She felt something splash onto her arm. She wiped it off and looked at her hand. It had a smear of red stuff on it.

"What the hell?" she said, just as another two drops hit her. She wiped the new drops off with her hand once again. And like before, she found that more red had smeared across her hand.

Suddenly, she heard a cell phone start to ring. Now, cell phones ring all the time and never bother her, but this time, it did. The ring tone of the phone was the same one that Kevin had.

Slowly, she turned around, bracing herself for a scare in case Kevin had returned without her noticing. Unfortunately she was in no way ready for what she found when she turned around. All the words that she was about to say drifted from her mind as she saw what was in front of her. Her stomach made a violent jump and bile rose in her throat.

There, hanging from a branch on the tree above the car, was Kevin. He was dead. His beautiful blue eyes were now rolled into the back of his head exposing the white of his eye. His hair was matted with blood and his face had cuts and was the slightest tint of blue from lack of oxygen. The white shirt he wore had a tear in it and had blood stains on it. The stab wound on his left side was dripping the crimson blood that leaked from his body and was now starting to pool on the roof of the car.

Angela let out a scream so loud that she was sure people all the way down the block could hear. She quickly turned around, still screaming, and ran towards the Curtis house.


short chapter, i know! srry. most of u thought i was gonna kill off one of the outsiders in this chapter. hehe, that was my origonal plan..but, i changed my mind. the killings are just getting started and another death will be in the next chapter (this time it won't be a non important character). anyway, i think i have said to much. i might not be able to updatefor a little. i literally have like5 projects for school that i have to do and finish within like 2 weeks and i have to study for the SAT 2. maybe if your lucky i'll update later this week.

Ps: rewiews make me happy...so review my story.

oh, and the urban legand i used for this was the one where the guy and girl are sitting in a care in the woods. the girl gets nervous and wants to leave. the boyfriend gives in but says he has to go to the bathroom. he leaves the car and dosent return. the girl starts to hear sceaking noise and stuff on the roof of the car. she later finds out that its her dead boyfriend hanging from a tree. (yea, i didnt use the legend exactally, i changed somethings.