Ramen Society chapter 2 v.1 Silence
Sorry I missed my deadline guys! I went school shopping and got dragged to a country concert with my father so I was late in finishing this. Sorry again! Here's chapter 2!!
Warning OC/characters!!
Blah Blah - Flashback / Thoughts
Blah Blah - Author Note / AN
\Blah Blah/ - Sounds other then voices
Blah Blah - Everything else
Flashback
"What, no sakura! I dont want to lose you please don't leave me. I don't want to be alone again!" he said in a panic grabbing her in a crushing grip even as she spoke soothingly to him "Do not fear Naruto you won't be alone and you will see me sometime in the future, I promise."
He felt something hit his cheek and looked up in surprise to see that Sakura had started to cry, he reached up to wipe the flowing tears that began to fall from her porcelain cheeks.
"Naruto!!"
But before he could he was interupted by a loud voice coming from below him. He looked down in confusion only for his eyes to widen in horror as he gaped at the riceball in his hand. It had changed, it now had spiky white hair and cold green eyes. Attached to its back was a tiny purple sword.
Our blond hero released a girlish scream before jerking awake.
Flashback Over
The first thing he felt was the cold concrete floor below him then the distant shouts that made him suddenly aware of the throbbing pain in his head.
"Naruto?! Naruto?!"
Who the hell is yelling? he thought sleepliy Why won't they shut up?
Before he could continue his musing he felt something hit him like a thousand sharp needles causing his eyes to shoot open in shock and him to release a gasp of pain as he jerked up to stare down at the ice surrounding him.
"Finally your awake Naruto. Your a real heavy sleeper that's the fifth bucket of ice cold water I've had to throw at you." I looked up in surprise to see a small pale hand outstreached towards me, "Come on were going to be late."
I looked up to meet hard icy green eyes and a grin split across my face. I reached up and grasped the hand offered to me and I slowly stood. Toshirou released my hand and began walking away and once he was a good few feet away he paused for a moment and said calmly over his shoulder, "Naruto you coming?"
I groaned before running after him.
There was a confortable silence between us as I studied our surroundings while Toshirou did...whatever it was he did. As we walked our feet making an unfamiliar sound, he was used to the soft thud of feet on dirt instead of the sharp click that ricoted against the soild white walls as they manuvered themself's through the maze making so many turns I soon found myself lost in the ever changing path before us.
"What is this place?" I said in amazment as we made a left turn.
"This Naruto, is the Soul Society"
Soul Society... Huh that was a nice ring to it.
We soon came across a tall white building with a black roof surrounded by smaller white building. ((I have no clue what the Captains meeting place looks like, Sorry!))
Toshirou pulled the door open before walking into the building myself seconds behind him. We walked down another hall this time the walls and floor were made a pale brown wood.
Blah blah Blah. Okay let's just skip to them entering the meeting room because I'm putting myself to sleep with all this boring walking. Ugh. Also the description of the Captains and such are vauge and strange because Naruto is still a little dizzy from his fall and he doesn't really care about peoples appearence.
Okay here we go!
As we entered the room I noticed that there were lots of weird people in the room. And suprisingly enough they all were dressed in black.
Okay If you want you can skip the whole next 2 paragraph because all it does is describe the 13 Divsion Squad!
There was a super old guys standing at the back of the room with a huge beard held together with a purple ribbon ((1st Division Captain: Yamamoto Genryuusai)) beside him was a man with white hair and a mustash ((((1st Division Vice Captains: Sasakibe Choujirou)). To his far left stood a short woman with long black hair her pigtails wrapped in white tape ((2nd Division Captain: Soi Fong)) and beside her stood an ugly giant with short black hair picking his nose ((2nd Division Vice Captain: Oomaeda Marechiyo)). To his left stood a man with messy black hair and stupple ((3rd Division Captain: Shūsuke Amagai)) beside him was a meek looking man with long blonde hair like Ino ((3rd Division Vice Captain: Kira Izuru)).Next to him was a gentle woman with long black hair braided in the front ((4th Division Captain: Unohana Retsu)) and a woman with short gray hair stood beside her ((4th Division Vice Captains: Koutestu Isane)).
Next to her was a man with long black hair that looked strangely like Neji((6th Division Captain: Kuchiki Byakuya)) and a man stood beside him with long red hair in a ponytail and black tattoes above his eyes and on his neck ((6th Division Vice Captain: Abarai Renji)). Next to him was a giant brown cat ((7th Division Captain: Unohana Retsu)) talking to a man with short black hair and sunglasses ((7th DivisionVice Captain: Iba Tetsuzaemon)). Across from him was a man with long grown hair, a beard and a mustace wearing a pink shirt over his shoulders ((8th Division Captain: Kyouraku Shunsui)) and a short girl with short black hair and glasses stood at his side ((8th Division Vice Captain: Ise Nanao)). Another man standing beside the girl talking had short black hair and a line of tape over half of his face below it was the letters 69 tattoed to his face ((9th Division Vice Captain: Hisagi Shuuhei)). Oooh a fly...
"So your Naruto Uzumaki" the old guy said in his old guy voice.
"Believe it!" I shouted grinning.
...
Sweat drop
...
"Ah yes well it's a pleasure to meet you. I'm the 1st Division Captain Yamamoto Genryuusai"
Yamamoto, Yamato. Old guy, sensei. Huh...
"I'm also the Head Captain"
Huh... Wait! What?!
"You mean your the Head Captain guy!!" I shouted speechless. This guys the Head Captain? I came all this way to meet an old guy!
"Yes I am"
"But your old!"
"With age comes great wisdom Naruto"
"Ugh. Great"
"Naruto, there's someone I want you to meet" Sofubo said. ((Sofubo means grandparent!))
"Who?" I said confused.
"He's an old friend of mine and from what I've learned..."
\Knock, Knock/
"Well I guess I'll let him tell you himself." he said before he turned towards the door and said in a slightly louder voice
"Enter"
The door slowly opened
Naruto slowly turned
Step, step
Turn, turn
Intake of breath
Blue eyes met
and
Silence...
Ramen Society...
Ugh I'm so deeply unsatisfied with this chapter. Half-way through writing this chapter I started to hate this story but I'll probley put out another chapter by the end of today or tommoro though it will probly be short. Sorry for the bad chapter but I just really couldn't think anything up in a couple spots of the story. Also sorry for all the AN I just wanted to a make sure you knew what was happening. I'll probley make a second version of this chapter later on and hopefully it will be better. Sorry again about the lateness! Bye guys!
Lady Alyseb630