Chapter Eleven:

Chapter Eleven: The Fangirl, The Shark, The Doctor and The Snake.

Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto.

In Reply to Shashuko The Paisley Maiden:

Hai, I understand, and you are forgiven for your mistake. Bah-bum! I'll see what I can do with Sasori-san. Gahh… This is difficult. My situation: Mou, Another person doesn't want me to use Sasori… You on the other hand want me to use Sasori… Hard decision… HARD DECISION!! MOU! I'll try to put in some fluffiness… if it's okay with that other reviewer … Mou, I'll tell you how the scores are so far:

Deidara: Two!

Sasori: Two!

Itachi: Okay, Here we go…. FIVE!!

As you see… Itachi is quite popular with the ladies. Ahem. Okay, So… I need either TEN or SEVEN votes for one guy for Shizuka to be with…

Manami's Point of View

"Sasuke-kun," Orochimaru said.

Okay, this was kinda freaky… knowing that Orochimaru was there… I mean… Just how long was he there for?

"What do you want?" Sasuke sneered.

"I was wondering why you ran away from the lair. And why you didn't come back," Orochimaru frowned.

"I don't want to work for you anymore!" Sasuke yelled.

He activated his sharingan, and Orochimaru stared into them.

He didn't flinch.

"Kabuto, Karin, Suigetsu," Sasuke growled. "It's no use hiding,"

Three people came out of the shadows, Kabuto, that fangirl back at the hideout, Karin, and another guy with a big sword.

"It's so nice to see you again, Sasuke-kun," Karin said.

"Hn, you four shouldn't be here. Leave and never return. I don't want to see your faces ever again," Sasuke said emotionlessly.

"You'll be seeing a lot of us if you don't come with us soon, Sasuke-kun," Orochimaru smirked.

"I won't come back to you; all you want is my body. It'll be pointless," Sasuke narrowed his eyes.

Orochimaru chuckled.

Sasuke grimaced. "Chidori Nagashi (Chidori Discharge)!"

Electricity surrounded us.

Orochimaru quickly jumped up with Kabuto.

Karin and Suigetsu got electrocuted.

I gasped and stayed close to Sasuke.

The Chidori… It's coming out of his body… I didn't know he had gotten so strong... I thought.

I took out a kunai and got ready to fight.

"Manami, whatever you do, don't fight Orochimaru. He's my fight," Sasuke glanced at me.

I sighed, uncertain. "Be careful and don't die,"

He smirked. "I won't,"

I faced Karin, Suigetsu and Kabuto.

They were all smirked and I cringed.

"Three against one, kinda unfair, isn't it?" I asked.

"We're ninjas, Manami, we don't care about being unfair," Kabuto said, placing chakra in his hand,

"Well then, mind introducing me to the dude with the cheese knife?" I placed my hand on my hip.

"You'll find out soon enough, Manami," Kabuto answered.

He ran towards me and tried to hit me with his chakra hand.

I dodged as much as I could.

I got a few scratches, but I was fine.

Then, as I was fighting Kabuto, the guy with the sword jumped onto me and pinned me to the ground.

So unfair.

"I don't like to waste my time." He said. "So, I'm gonna kill you now,"

I smirked. "Feeling pretty confident, I see. What makes you think that you can kill me that easily, hm?"

He narrowed his eyes and took out his sword.

"For one, I have this," He said, placing the sword next to my neck.

"And?" I said, bored.

He frowned and sliced the sword through my neck.

I turned into a log.

Hah, classic.

"Substitution Jutsu, huh? Very old school. Very boring," He said.

Kabuto jumped out to help Orochimaru.

I did some hand signs and summoned all the feline animals. They had surrounded Kabuto, Karin, and the sword guy.

I jumped down from a nearby tree. "I'm guessing you're Suigetsu, correct?" I said, looking at the sword guy.

"Hn," He said.

He lunged towards me again, but this time, two jaguars stood in front of him, growling.

"So, you're the one who can summon little kittens. They're nothing against sharks," He smirked.

I threw a couple of kunai at him.

It didn't hit him.

But he didn't dodge.

It went through him.

I gasped. "What the…"

"Like I said. Kittens are nothing against sharks," Suigetsu said.

I commanded the felines silently to get him with everything they had got.

But Suigetsu hit each and every one of them.

I swore in my mind and took out my two swords.

"Hn, water against fire. Let's see who wins," I spoke.

Then, I glanced at Karin. "Don't you do anything?!"

"I just came here to see Sasuke-kun, so leave me alone! I'm watching him fight!" Karin cried.

"You are the worst fangirl I've seen yet," I cringed.

Suigetsu then kicked me in the rib and I quickly summoned out fire from my swords and hit him.

He winced but recovered.

"You can run as much as you want, I'll get you," Suigetsu yelled.

"Yeah, right," I growled.

He spat out water at me and I got soaking wet.

Gross, I know.

I began getting stiff. "What the hell's happening?!"

"That water is slowly paralyzing you. Stop moving or else it'll make it worse," Suigetsu smirked.

Shit.

"Now, I'll have time to slowly kill you," Suigetsu snickered.

Double Shit.

"Suigetsu! Don't kill the girl. We'll take her back to the hideout," Orochimaru yelled over the fight.

Shit, Shit, SHIT.

"You won't take her!!" Sasuke shouted.

"Just watch us," Orochimaru smirked.

"No-!" I yelled.

Suigetsu took hold of one of my legs and broke it.

I screamed and fell to the floor.

"I… can't give… up… Itai (Ow)…" I strained.

I took out shuriken and tried to hit Suigetsu.

It only went through him again.

He knelt down next to me and I punched him.

It went through too.

"What are you?!" I winced at my leg.

"Something you don't need to know about," Suigetsu muttered.

He pressed my pressure points and soon, everything was black.

Sasuke's Point Of View

As I was fighting Orochimaru, I saw Manami get knocked out.

"It's strange to see you run away for a girl," Orochimaru said.

"Hn," I scowled.

"I trained you. You should respect that," Orochimaru frowned.

I appeared behind him and stabbed him. "Maybe you trained me a little too well, then,"

He smirked. "Suigetsu, take the girl. Let's go everyone,"

He turned into a log and he came out of the bushes, and jumped away from Konoha.

Manami was being carried by Suigetsu, over his shoulder, and I quickly chased after them.

"Give her back!" I screamed.

We were jumping in the forest now.

They ignored me and ran away even faster.

I was close behind Suigetsu, and I saw Manami slowly waking up.

"Manami!" I yelled.

Her eyes shot open and then she realized in what state she was in.

She looked up and her eyes widened at me.

"Sasuke!!" She yelled.

She reached out her hand to me and I stretched out for it.

But, damn, Suigetsu was a fast runner.

I took out some kunai, but then I realized that it was pointless to hit him.

I ran as fast as I could, and I took hold onto Manami's hand.

She sighed of relief and I quickly pulled her out of Suigetsu's hands.

He looked back at me and smirked.

I looked at Manami and she was smirking too.

"Nani..?" I said.

Then, I noticed, tucked under the neckline of her dress and an explosion tag; it was a fake Manami.

"Kuso!" I yelled.

I quickly dropped the dummy and jumped away.

It had soon exploded.

I decided not to be seen by them, so I hid my chakra and followed them behind some trees.

Orochimaru smirked and I glanced at Kabuto.

Manami was in Kabuto's arms, tied up with masking tape over her mouth.

She saw me and her eyes widened. She moved around in Kabuto's arms, trying to get out.

She was screaming under the tape.

I could see small sparks of fire coming out of her fingers.

Kabuto smirked. "It's no use, Manami. Those ropes slowly drain your chakra. If you fight it, it gets stronger,"

Her eyes widened, but she continued to struggle free.

Then, Kabuto winced.

"Argh… Manami just went hot," Kabuto said.

"Kabuto now's not the time to flirt with her…" Karin said.

"No seriously, it's as if she had just risen her body temperature," Kabuto frowned.

I soon saw a bit of smoke seeping out between Manami and Kabuto's hands.

Kabuto held Manami tighter. "Keep doing that, Manami, you're just gonna waste your chakra and you're going to regret it,"

He hit her pressure point again.

Her eyes widened and she went unconscious… again.

Manami's Point Of View

-x-x-x-x-

I opened my eyes later and rubbed my head.

I sat up and looked around.

"Nani… Kore (What is this)?" I asked myself.

It was dark, and the only source of light was a small candle on the wall.

I was in a small room.

It had a desk, a bathroom and I was sitting on the bed.

I looked at the door.

I quickly ran to it and tried to open it.

It was locked.

I tried getting out some fire from my hands (To melt the door), and when I did, my body felt weak.

"Kuso… I wasted all my chakra back there… That summoning of felines wastes too much," I mumbled.

I sighed angrily and punched the door.

"Let me out," I murmured.

I punched it harder. "I said, let me out!" I yelled.

I… began bashing up the door.

Makes me sound kind of lonely.

I did this for a while until I saw the door knob unlock.

I stood back and held my fists up, getting ready to punch whoever came in.

It slowly opened and I threw my hand in front of me, to punch them.

But they caught my hand.

I looked at them with wide eyes.

"Sasuke?"

Ahh ! That was kinda of short . xD The Melbourne Shuffle has been distracting me. I have a short attention span. x How has everyone been lately? You might have noticed "Chidori Nagashi" and I translated it into "Chidori Discharge" . That's what it's called in the manga. Lol. Waiting anxiously for the latest Naruto episode... "

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