Naruto: New growth
Authors Ramblings: Hey guys. Well, it's official. This project has been dumped by my former compatriots. I know until now I've been hyping up the fact that this was going to be written by multiple people from different views but now I'm not even sure I want to keep writing it. So if you could be so kind as to tell me what you think, I would greatly appreciate it.
-Narutard17
Disclaimer: Naruto and all related characters are the property of Kishimoto-sense. The interpretation of character is my own. Most any name you don't recognize is mine.
The Achumachi Compound:
"Good morning children. How was your sleep?" A woman of average height with long blond hair worn in a pony tail down her back said as a young girl and boy entered the kitchen.
"Hey kids! You're just in time for another one of mom's best breakfasts."
A stout man with his long brown hair held out of his face by his head band said from the table.
"Every meal isn't just the food I make." Ino said with an angry X appearing on her temple.
"I know. I know. 'It's about the people who eat it." Choji said with a laugh. This was normal for the family of Acumachi Choji. Ino calmed down quickly and turned back to her cooking.
"Hello! We exist to you know." Shouted the young girl who had entered the room with her brother in tow.
"Of course we do Tera-chan. But we mustn't interrupt when mother and father are talking." Admonished Akumachi Heelone.
"Quit bein' such a goody two shoes Heeli. Jeez. You're almost as bad as the Kushina chick. Now she's weak." His sister retorted.
"Teranna," her mother admonished, "don't you talk about The Hokage's daughter that way. It is not respectful."
"Ha. Like Naruto would care." Choji said under his breath. He didn't show Saratobi any respect until he was dead."
Ino turned on her corpulent husband and shouted, "That is not true! Naruto loved Saratobi like a father. Baka may have put on a tough face in trying to surpass him, but that doesn't mean that Naruto didn't respect him."
"Sheesh. This coming from the girl who called him the worst ninja in Konaha." At this comment, the mind-transform mistress spun in a blur and materialized with a kunai pressed to her husband's throat.
"You know what pudgy?" She whispered in his ear. "I've had enough of your lip."
Sweat-dropping major, Chojo stammered out, "Honey, the kids." And Ino immediately back-peddled and returned to her work with a guilty face.
"Aw man! And it was just getting good." Terranna groused.
"Get washed up kids." Chojo said.
"I don't wanna." Terranna challenged.
"Do it. NOW!" The expansion artist said standing slowly and expanding his hand to show what would happen if he was not obeyed.
"Eep" Terranna yelped and rushed up the stairs with her brother in toe.
A.N.: All right. So I've done three of these suckers and they will all be put out together. If you like this story please let me know by message. Much as I love people rating my stuff, I really want some verbal/written critique so that I know I have loving fans. Send me a message also if you know of any good fan fiction I should read.