Idk how many reviews I've gotten for this story, but I wanna continue it!!! Lol My winter break is suckish so I'm bored, sue me!!! Hahaha Member when I said I don't own nothing? Well that is still intact for this chapter… that's over with, so I don't know what to say about this chapter, the ideas are coming in yet so I hope they will when I start writing!!! Oh yeah I'm gonna go back and forth for POVs like I'm the narrator for a third person omniscient story.
Ashen Estate
November 20, 2008
4:30
"Where's Ally," asked Demi in a rather harsh tone. She has her date with Derrick tonight and everyone was here except for her.
"Sorry, I'm late… we had a soccer meeting," said Ally, out of breathe.
"Don't you hate soccer," said Rikki, while filing her nails.
"I do, but I love my rouge M.A.C. lip gloss, and to my parents this is the price I have to pay." She said, flipping out her tube of lip gloss and waving it in the air like a wand.
"Whatever, back to me, What do you think Derrick will like better," ask Demi pointing to an outfit that consisted of a plain black tee from DKNY, a red hoodie from Marc by Marc Jacobs, a Dolce & Gabbana dark denim mini, black knee high stockings, and red ballet flats from Jimmy Choo with her right arm and with her left a red tank from Abercrombie, black Bermuda shorts, and red pumps from Prada, and a black headband from Bebe.
"You have seriously got to get out of this red and black only phase," said jasmine.
"Like I said before, only I can pull it off so why not wear it," said Demi. (She's said it in BPYalpha's stories)
"I think you should do the mini, show off your legs," said Ally adding flair to the word legs.
"Okay, I will," she said grabbing the outfit and heading to the closet.
Skate Park
November 20, 2008
6:00 p.m.
"Hey Derrick," said Demi waving at him.
"Oh, hey," was all he could manage. Why am I here I know who I really want? He asked himself silently.
"So, do you skate much," pointing to the ramps, trying to break the silence. (I don't skateboard, so please forgive my not knowing any terms.) In her head she thought, what did Massie see in this guy? But then she looked at him, really looked at him and saw he was disinterested as she was. His shaggy hair covered his eyes, but it was still visible that he was staring at his shoes.
"Kinda, I more into soccer though," he said, his mind elsewhere.
"Sorry, Derrick, but this isn't working… there is no spark," She said confidently. Sparks, it reminded derrick of his dream that kiss, with Massie, not Demi.
"You're right, we should just be friends," he said placing his hand out to shake. Great, just what I need, another friend.
"Sure, whatever," she said shaking his hand, but her head she knew that she was going to have to get one of the soccer boys to be her more than, just friend.
The Mall
November 22, 2008
3:00 p.m.
"Ooh, looks who's here, my lover," said Rikki pointing at Josh who was at Lacoste. "Just couldn't stay away from me, could he," she said obnoxiously.
"Girl, he isn't here for you, he's probably buying something new for his date with C-licia," said jasmine, while trying to get everyone to go to Coach with her.
"Oh, but he will be," she said positively. She walked up to him, backwards trying to seem as if she 'accidently' bumped into him, but without thinking(which she did a lot) she did.
"What's your problem, dude?!" she screamed, not realizing it was josh.
"Um, you bumped into me," he said questioningly.
"Oh, yeah, sorry," she said stumbling for words. She never stumbles for words; she stumbles for kind words, but never regular words.
"No problem," he moving his hair out of his face for her to see his beautiful eyes. "Hey, you go to BOCD, right?" he asked.
"What's it to ya, I mean, yes, yes I do," she said, again fumbling for words. What's happening to me, why am I being so not mean?
"Cool, well see ya around," he said casually and left her standing there alone, but the girls rushed to her side at once.
"OH," said Demi.
"MY," said Jasmine.
"GOD," said Ally.
"You so weren't mean, I can't even get you to not be mean to me, but to him, you weren't mean!!!" Demi practically shrieked for her friend.
"I don't know what happened to me, it's like my brain wasn't working well," she said confused.
"You're brain never works well, omg, I think I caught her meanness when she started to be nice," said Ally, her hand covering her mouth. They all started to crack up, but Rikki still wondered; what's happening, will I stop being mean because of this guy?!?
Yeah, I know, a lil bit short, but I have to keep everything in track and my mom is yelling at me to get off the computer!!! Lmao so R&R… 3 reviews before continue!!
