The sun was hot, the thin sheets stick to her tangled thighs like those cheap bandages she buys with that Spongebob character smiling up at you.

The sheets remind me of stupid that square sponge in pants, and I sneer at them.

'Happy sheets' are what she would call them if she were really here with me.

Coma is the word the doctors use but I prefer 'dead'.

More closure, less sugar-coating.

Don't missunderstand me, sugar has its place, but too much and everything is bitter and unsavory.


100 word Drabble!

This took a bit more effort and nit picking than I thought it would!

this is just a little piece of what I am submitting to a 'Double Drabble Dribble Exchange that I am doing with a writing club of mine in a couple of weeks....I had four themes to include:Haiti, Painting, Coma and Sugar.

Still two more to go......TTFN!