ok so i finally decided to update, its been wut? a year
i also concluded that some of my stuff previously was dumb, the weapons thing, the names and such. so w/ that being said, i'm switching all the wierd weapons and guns and i'm gunna do things a bit different
(this will include swearing, adult theme stuff, and drugs/acholhol/related items) so hopefully this is better
"Can you at least try and get along with him?" asked Rachel. She was seated curled up on Rai in his room.
"It's not that easy...god i hate that man," fury filled his words as he reminisced.
"He's still your father."
"I refuse to believe he is," he stated still angry.
"Hey Raimundo! There's a scary man out there!" Sparks yelled as he and Brie came flying in. "He was really really happy to see us, ran, and gave us a huge hug. who is he?"
"No one you need to know, just avoid him for now on. OK guys?" he answered not wanting them to know.
"Okay," they replyed and immediatly ran away to do what they were before.
"Are you really going to keep them away from thier dad? Don't you think they would at least want to know that he's alive and actually get to meet him?" Rachel scolded him.
"No matter what, it's going to end the same as last time and they'll just get let down," he sighed.
"Rai, your dad wants to talk to you," Kimiko said through the curtain.
"Well this won't end well," he got up and left.
His dad was sitting on a couch waiting for him. "Look, Raim-"
"Why are you here?" Raimundo interrupted.
"I want to make up it up to you."
"You shouldn't make it up to me. Make it up to the others who are still back "home" in the ghetto threatening thier life just by walking and alley," he said coldly.
"I first wanted to explain to you. You see, I was going through a rough time."
"Weren't we all? I already know you're going to use mom as an excuse but at least you didn't watch her die. Loosing your mom at the age of twelve isn't the best thing that can happen in your life." Rai said with pain. Meanwhile the others were outside the door wondering what was wrong.
"It's not the same."
"You're right, it's not the same. You were coping by drinking all the time and laying around, forcing your kids to do everything and fending for them selves. You got so drunk that you just ran away not caring about anything you left behind."
"I didn't leave because I didn't care!"
"Than why did you throw me against the wall several times? Why did you smash a glass bottle against my head and then leave? I still have scares from that if you can't remember. Hell, I still have scares from many things that prove that I was a better father to your family than you were. I took bullets for them, and other people pierced me for doing so! You did nothing but get lost for four years! Do you have any idea what happened over that time? We got rejected by the rest of our family, lost a place to stay, currently still living in the ghetto, starved for the longest time, and so on! You still say you care? Why don't you try and help us instead of hurting us and never come back!!" Raimundo stormed out of the room.
"Och!" Omi was taken aback, Ramundo just ran into him. He kept going straight to his room.
Rachel sighed, "I'll handle this guys, i know more about this than you do." She went on to his room and sat in front of him.
"I don't want to talk," he stated plainly.
"Well that's obvious, you did enough back there. I just want to comfort you," she tried to look innocent. She crawled on top of him so they were face to face. She kissed him sweetly.
"Feel any better?"
"No"
"Would it be any better if I went all the way later tonight?"
"...maybe."
"Rachel are you sure we should do this?" Raimundo asked while she lied on top of him.
"Sure, why not? We've done a lot worse," she reasoned.
"You mean you've done worse," he corrected.
"So I've done tons of drugs and am working for the black market selling illegal things, its not too much worse."
"Yes it is."
"Well it's not like I care. I can stop anytime I want," she said determined.
"Okay, than do," Rai smirked.
"Sure, but once I get my load of money tomorrow," she agreed.
"Are you guys sure we should do this?" Kimiko asked the others. They were about to enter Raimundo's mind for the second time.
"The only way to help Raimundo and his father's problem is to see what went on," Omi declared.
"Alrighty than, let's go. Shadow of Fear!" said Clay.
Once they were there, something was different than the night before. It was much darker and depressing. The room where they saw Rai in his dream place before was empty. One lone person was sitting, facing a corner. The person was all white, you couldn't tell if it was a man or woman for it was wearing a hood. The white clothes were torn and worn with many holes.
"Guys, somethings not right." said Omi stating the obvious.
"Lets ask that person over there," Kimiko suggested pointing to the one in the corner. They walked over, the person turned slightly turned to glance at them. It sharply looked away and flew toward and right through them like a ghost screaming with beaming red eyes.
Immediately as it passed through the three were teleportedto a dark room you couldn't see anything. Two loud shots were heard. Lightning flashed five times, Two boys were on the floor, blood pouring. Meanwhile and girl screamed loudly in agony, it got louder and worse for a minute. they were teleported somewhere else.
They were on a street. Two cars before them were in a total wreck, ambulances and police were nearby. A man and woman were laid dead by the ambulance. Rachel appeared from an alleyway and stopped dead in her tracks, she rushed forward halfway the the wreck and stared with pain filled eyes. She ran back to where she came not looking back.
they were teleported again.
This time they were in the temple kitchen, dark. A silhouetteopened a drawer rapidly and frantically looking for something. They got it, it was huge and sharp. They held it with both hands pointed at their neck. Right before it plunged downward another silhouette tackled the other grabbing the object out of the persons hand and threw it across the room. The three monks forgot that they weren't really there and the sharp object went straight to them. It past right threw and a huge knife was stuck horizontally in the wall. Meanwhile the two characters were wrestling on the ground, the one on the bottom that was first holding the knife, was screaming and having a fit. She yelled at him, "You always ruin everything," punching him as he hugged her to give her comfort. She soon was hysterical and quiet down.
Meanwhile Rai and Rachel were halfway when suddenly a figure appeared. Next was a huge yell, "Raimundo!!!"
ok so that was the 3rd chapter, what do u think? was it actiony enough? did it form more questions in ur mind? was it good?
R&R, i'll update whenever, who knows, it might b another year
