A/N First Published FanFic... I am open to CONSTRUCTIVE critism, but I don't do this for a living, so please be kind!
If you don't know what constructive critism is, please look it up. Being told that something is painfully bad doesn't make a person feel very good.
Time Frame: Goblet of Fire
Disclaimer: I am not JK Rowling... I do not own any of her characters, plot, etc. Anything you don't recognize, however, is from my imagination... (That includes Elisaveta, Katerina, Chavdar, and friends, as well as the basic plot and Borislava)
For Reference: Italics equals English
Warning: I have slightly changed the plot of GOF... nothing major really changes, though!
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For Andy - May "big bad basses" reign forever :D
Recap: "Whatever. This just means we will definitely have to beat you. I'll go find Katy, we'll use her as a chaser." Smirking, I walked back to the Gryffindors.
Reaching the group of teens in red and gold, I found Katerina and called her over. "Katy, since the meatheads are playing for the Slytherins, I want you to be a chaser."
"Ok, Elly, just make sure it is fine with the Gryffindors..." she told me.
Seeing the puzzled group of teens, I told them. "Vould it be ok vor my friend Katerina to play as a chaser? She's very good."
"Sure, that's fine. Oh look, here come the snakes now." One of the team members said. The others groaned.
Turning, I saw a group in silver and green approaching. As they reached us, a young boy with pale blond hair spoke.
"Hey, Gryffindorks... We've got Viktor Krum and his friend playing today. You've got no chance." He smirked at us.
"Watch what you say, Malfoy, and you may be surprised. We've got two amazing quidditch players subbing for us today." Harry retorted, making his feud with the arrogant boy evident.
"Viktor, Chavo, they are saying we are going to lose to you. I promise you we will do no such thing." I shouted in our native tongue to the two teens.
"Elisaveta, I will take that as a challenge. But now, let us begin." My brother shouted back, taunting me.
"I don't know about you English people, but us Bulgarians are ready to play." I stated, getting more strange looks from the Slytherins and Gryffindors.
"You heard her, let's go!" One of the Gryffindors said.
With that, we all flew up into the air and the balls were released. Immediately seeing the glint of gold, I flew off.
(Time skip, I'm not great at writing games. Sorry!)
An hour later, Viktor and I were neck and neck, chasing the ever elusive snitch. Glancing over, I noted that he looked cute with his dark hair tousled in the wind. 'Wait!' I screamed at myself. 'Stop thinking like that!' He turned to look at me, and I looked away.
Sensing my chance, I pushed myself the last little bit and grabbed the little gold ball in my fingertips. Screaming in victory, I zoomed around the field, signaling that the game was over and we had won.
Landing, I hopped off of my broom and promptly got crushed in a big group hug. All I heard was bits and pieces of sentences.
"Bloody hell, she beat Krum!"
"We beat them!"
"This is rubbish!"
The last one came from that annoying boy, Malfoy, I saw as I pulled myself out of the crush.
He stalked up to me, annoyance on his face.
"You may have won the match, but I know that you are just a skank. How soon did you get into Potter's pants, eh?"
I stiffened, rage rushing through my brain. Before I could even say anything, I slapped him. Hard.
"You bitch!" He screamed, a handprint appearing on his cheek.
It was then that I glanced up to see Chavdar and Krum running up from behind him.
"Elisaveta, what's going on?" Chavo asked, a puzzled look on his face. Viktor, as always, had a strange look on his face.
"He called me a skank and said I slept with Harry Potter. I got pissed and slapped him, then he called me a bitch. End of story." I said, shrugging. Viktor's expression darkened, and my twin scowled darkly. The boy's rage was slowing, mainly because he was trying to understand what we were saying.
"What's going on here?" My brother asked.
"This little whore slapped me!" He shouted, anger returning.
Before Chavdar or I had a chance to do anything, a large fist connected with Malfoy's jaw. Shocked, I glanced at the deliverer of the punch and saw none other than Viktor, a scowl set on his face. 'Woah, the prat just defended me? Again?!' I thought. 'I didn't know he cared about anyone but himself!
"Bloody... hell... ow! What was that for?" He asked, his jaw swelling.
"Obviously somevone did not listen to me. No vone vill say anything bad about Elisaveta. You deserved that slap and that punch." Viktor said, anger adorning his normally calm features.
"Oh, and by the way," my brother added, regaining his senses, "Elly is my twin sister and you have no right to speak to her that way." He was growling, now.
"Oh... crap... well then... um" Malfoy stuttered, shocked.
"I am thinking now vould be a good time to apologize, Draco" Viktor said, frowning.
"Look, I'm sorry, I didn't know..." he started, looking sheepish.
"Save your stupidity for somevone who cares. It should not matter who I know or who I am related to." I told him before turning and stalking off. Seeing everyone staring, I spoke. "Go on, that vas not that interesting."
Slowly the crowd started to disperse as I made my way back to Katy.
"Stupid Malfoy. He ruined the fun of my win!" I pouted.
"Well, yeah, I can imagine." Katerina replied, a small grin on her face.
"Hey Elly, you hungry?" Chavo called, approaching after a small secretive discussion with Viktor.
"Not really," I started, but my stomach growled before I could finish.
"Elisaveta, I do believe we had breakfast around 6 this morning. It's almost 1, and by the sounds of it, you are definitely hungry." Viktor reminded me.
"Oh, yeah, well then..." I trailed off, slightly embarrassed.
"Let's go to lunch, then." Katy said, rescuing me.
Katy and I ran off to change back into our regular school uniforms. I ran a brush through my hair, not caring if it was a little messy. I had been flying all morning, after all.
We ran back out on to the pitch and met Chavo and Viktor before heading back up to the large stone castle for lunch.
A/N: I hope you like it...
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