Episode Three
Hey guys! im so so so so so so so so so sorry! i ment 2 update but things have been a bit hedic 4 me. i hoped u liked the last chapter, it was my longest ever. Remember, I put this story as just Edward because i dont want u guys 2 no who wins in the end!!
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Story: War Family
By: Twird96!
Rating: T
Summery: Bella was Maria's partner. She wants out. She gets help from her new brother Jasper. They get separated. Will Bella cause family problems? Will she fall for the carming Edward? BXE JXA EMXR OOC and AU Check it out!!!
Last Time:
The first fight has started and one girl is off. Next time, a family member comes to get a look at the girls and give Edward their thought. Little does everyone know, this family membber and Bella have a past. See you soon!
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BellaPOV:
The room is a lot better without Victoria here. I feel bad for who signed her up for this. The might end up with broken limbs. I just hope the in hiding like Leah's brother, Seth.
Today, we are meeting Edward's sister-in-law. I hope she's nice. I wonder if any one will get into a cat fight today? Maybe Jessica and Leah? Tanya and Carmen? Who knows?
I was sitting down when Edward's car came up. Everyone looked up. Edward brought in his sister with him. She was about 4ft 7 and had black spikey hair. Had a lot of fasion sence and reminded me of a pixie. Wait, that looks just like....
"Pixie?" I asked. I could tell everyone looked at me but, I had my eyes on her. She looked cafefully at me before she asked.
"Jella!!!!!!!!!!!" She screamed and tackled me to the floor. When we were young, Alice couldn't say her B's and my mom called me Jelly-Belly. You see, we were childhood friends. From 3 to 14. Then she moved. Wait, if she's Edward's sister-in-law.....................
"MARY-ALICE BRANDON!!!!!!!!!!!" I yelled when she let go of her death-hug. "WHY WASN'T I INVITED TO THE WEDDING???????????"
"Ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, I would have played Bella-Barbie?" She asked. I did hate Bella-Barbie.
"Fine!!!!!! Be that way. I would have let you play it too." I told her. Edward cleared his thourt.
"You guys know each other?" He asked.
"Oh, of course! We BFFs when we were kids. I would dress Bella up, shop with her and play with her."
"So Alice, you married Edward's brother."
"Yeah, Jasper is my soul mate!" She told me.
"Hey Alice, shouldn't we get to the mall for the scavenger hunt?" Edward asked.
"NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" I yelled. Everyone looked at me. "Alice+mall+credit Cards= crazy never stoping shopping Alice!!!"
"For that, I'm taking you shoe-shopping after." Alice said
"No, no, anything but, that!!!!!!" I pleaded and everyone laughed there heads off. We all walked to the bus.
Time Change, at the mall!
AlicesPOV:
I can't believe I have my Bff back! I've missed her soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much! Soon I'll force her to play Bella-Barbie everyday *evil laugh*!!!!! I'm going to have so much fun!
"Okay, everyone. You each list of things you will need to where to the elimation ceremony. Each list is different. The outfit must match and look fashionable. Who ever brings back the best outfit wins and gets to keep their dress for free! The rest must put theirs back or pay for it by themselfs. You have two hours. GO!" I screamed the last part.
"Same old hyper pixie." Bella mumbled.
"I HEARD THAT! Thank you!" I added the last part in a evil voice. She gulped and backed away slowly into a store and disappearing behind some shoes. Hahaha, I'm sooooo evil!
It was my idea for the challenge. They don't know I'm also picking Edward's date. I also had a plan on walking around and seeing their additudes. I will give my list* to Edward for little help picking who would go. I changed into a different outfit that made me look older and I got in super high heels. They make me 5ft 4!!!!!!!! I love them! I filled my hands full of bags and walkked around untill I saw one of the girls. It was Tanya.
I walked up neer her and I tripped (Like Bella!). My bags went everywhere. She sneered at me and had the nerve to say, "Watch were your going!" The stepped on my arm!!! She wasn't going on the good list*. I gathered the stuff and walked away. Next I saw Leah and Emily.
I tripped and fell. Both of them came up and helped me up and asked if I was okay before helping me gather my stuff. I thanked them. They were going on my good list*. Irina was not far from me.
I tripped and she didn't even look at me. She just looked at a dress in the store window. How rude! Yes, I say lines from full house. Like you never do. I started to walk away when I heard someone.
"Miss? Excuse me! Wait a second please." It was Bella. I turned to her. She was holding a shirt that I had bought for my bags. Bella was always so nice and would soooooooo be on the good list*. She looked at me and sighed.
"Alice, what are you-" She started before I covered her mouth.
"I was never here." I told her a quickly walked away. I heard her mumble something about me being a crazy pixie but, I kept walking. Bella could alway tell it was me. Do I let off a hyper-pixie-shopper vibe? Then I saw Jessica and Lauren.
I tripped and they looked at me a kept walking. No way would they be on the good list*. Angela came over from a different store and helped. Now, she would be on the good list*. I saw Kate.
She saw me fall and helped me up. She picked up two bags and left. I guess she goes on the good list*. Soon I spotted Maggie and Jane looking at cute shoes.
I fell and Jane came and helped. Maggie just watched. Jane was on the good list*, Maggie no. I soon saw Heidi.
I fell and she just kept walking. Not the good list*. I looked and saw Charlotte and Carmen.
I tripped and they both laughed at me. After a second I heard that they were talking about the real me saying how short I am and that I look stupid. It took everything in my power not to hurt them. I saw that it was time to get back so I quickly changed and walked back. I gave him the list and told him what they said. He was so mad I though I saw smoke come out of his ears. I calmed his down and Tanya came up. (I have no clue what is in season and what is out! I am just being random with colors and clothing styles I know. So plz dont scream at me!!!!!!!! Also they are NOT wereing the outfit!!!!)
Her dress was pretty but, the shoes didn't match and the hot pink color is soooooooo last season.
"I give it a 6 out of 10." I told her. She looked ready to argue but, I glared at her so she stayed quiet. Soon Angela came up.
I liked her dress. The only bad thing was the one shoulder thing is one shoulder is out this mouth. Though, I color is right, the shoe match, and the jewery is okay.
"I give it a 8 out of 10." I said. Angela smiled but Tanya muttered that this is an ugly dress. I glared at her and she shut up. Leah and Emily came up after.
Leah has a punkish dress but it works for her looks. Emily has a sweet flowery dress. It also fits their style.
"I give both of you 8 out of 10." I told them. They each smiled. Angela shyly asked "If their is a tie, what happens?"
"I will rejudge and pick the one I like the most." I explained. Then Jane appeared out of no were.
Her outfit has some style, though had a bit to much red.
"I give it a 7 out of 10." I desided.
"That's good, cuz' I'm not very good with fashion." and with that Maggie came out.
Her outfit was horrible! The shoes were lime green and the color is vomit green!!!!! Not to mention green is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo three seasons ago!
"I give it a 0 out of 10! That outfit needs to go in the trash!" I screaed. Maggie made a face at me and walked away. After a minute Lauren and Jessica walked over.
Lauren had an banana color dress with a similer shade shoes. Jessica had a blue dress that was super short. They were both if-y atbest but, not as bad as Maggie.
"I give 5 out of 10 for each." I told them. Each were shocked and looked like they wanted to hurt me. I gave them my best touch-me-and-I-will-hurt-you-badly look. They backed down. Kate and Irina came up.
Kate had a cute dress but, to many ruffes. Irina had a nice but, last season dress with the best shoes I've seen yet!
"I give Kate 7 out of 10. I give Irina 8 out of 10." I told them. They both smiled and walked on. Charlotte and Carmen came next. It was hard not to punch them.
I took one look at their outfites and screamed! One outfit is soooooooooooo three years ago! The other looked like someone through their lunch on it! The shoes didn't even have a close shade! The jewery looked like a four year old made it (no effence to people w/ four year kids/ sisters/ cousins/ nieces/ other)
"I give you both -3! The clothes you have are horrible!!!!!" I told them. The glared at me and I glared right back. Heidi with a black eye came up to us.
"What happened?" Edward asked.
"Ask Irina!" She yelled and glared at a smiling Irina.
Her oufit was a pale pink. The stuff matches. There is something off on her dress but, I can't put my finger on it. I think it might be all the sequences on the dress.
"I give it 8 out 10." I told her. Her eyes went wide.
"What?!?! I am a fashion expert! I design clothes! You-"
"I don't care! I am Mary-Alice Cullen, I maker of the Ali and Jazz chothing line!" At this everyone gasped.
"I knew you made it." A voice from behind me said. I looked and there was Bella. "Who else would have made the Bella-Barbie collection." She finished with a huge smile. It was true. I made that collection with a Bella-needs-fashion-sence-but-untill-then-I-will-let-her-borrow-mine mind. I took a deep breath and made a silent plee that it wouldn't be that bad.
Her dress was perfect! Everyone gasped at it. In style design, matching clothes, good jewery, and a totaly in deep purple! It went an inch above the knees, had a high cut V in the back. It also had a star belt. A bit simple but, Bella could pull it off. The jewery was a choker with a small purple star charm. Lastly the shoes were the same shade off purple and had a two inch heel.
"Bella! This is perfect! Were did you get fasion sence?" I asked as she laughed.
"Well, you forced me to shop so many times that I think some of it sunk in! I now know fashion and designers." She explained. I felt my ears tear.
"I'm so proud!" I said! "Bella has won. Don't protest! I saw all of you gasp and stare!" I exclaimed. Some glared and me while others smiled. "Now Bella, time to shop for shoes!" I stated. I grabbed her hand and dragged her with me.
ThirdPersonPOV:
All of the women lined up. Some looked confident, others nervous. Each looked beautiful but, the most beautiful being Bella. Soon Edward stared the ceremony. He held a box with the 13 charms. They were gold hangers. He took the mic. and began.
"Tonight I will give 13 of you a charm. 1 of you shall go home. I was very temted to send more of you home but Aro talked me into giving you second chance. I may not do so again. The charm is a gold hanger. It repersents all the shopping Alice most likely will force you to do. Bella, please step forward." He said.
"You look beautiful. You and Alice are friends and that means alot to me. You fallowed that 'random stanger' to give back her stuff. You also won the challenge. Will you accept this charm and stay at the house?" He asked.
"Yes, of course." Bella said. He put the charm on and again kissed Her wrist. "Angela, please step forward." He said.
" You stopped what you were doing to help someone you didn't know. You are a kind person. Will you accept this charm and stay at the house?" He asked.
"Yes, of course." Angela said. He put the charm on and kissed her wrist. "Leah, please step forward." He said.
"You are nice but, won't take anyone's additude. Will you accept this charm and stay at the house?" He asked.
"Yes, of course." Leah said. He put the charm on and kissed her wrist. She smiled a smug smile as she walked back. "Jane, please step forward." He said.
"You were kind and helped another while another just watched. Will you accept this charm and stay at the house?" He asked.
"Yes, of course." said. He put the charm on and kissed her wrist. She was shocked. "Emily, please step forward." He said.
"You are kind and have a loving heart. Will you accept this charm and stay at the house?" He asked.
"Yes, of course." said. He put the charm on and kissed her wrist. "Kate, please step forward." He said.
"You helped out another for no reason. Will you accept this charm and stay at the house?" He asked.
"Yes, of course." said. He put the charm on and kissed her wrist. She sweatly smiled at Tanya who glared back. "The rest of you did not help the 'fallen stranger'. I am disapointed of this amount. Maggie, Irina, Jessica, and Lauren please step forward to get your charms." He said. The girls quickly grabed their charms.
"The rest of you step forward. I wanted to kick all of you off this show. You were unkind to the fallen stranger. Tayna." He said. He waited a second. "Here is your charm. You were the lest bad of this group. Don't have to be this far back again." Tanya looked releaved but, mad about being so far back.
"Charlotte and Carmen." He started. "Here are you charms. Don't let me find out you were bad talking anyone again. I had to restrain Alice from attacting you. Heidi, you were almost elimated last time, argued with my sister, and got in a fight. Good-bye." Edward said.
"B-but, but, but-" Heida studdered.
"The only but I want to see is yours leaving."` He said and everyone walked away walked away.
Interviews:
Edward:
Another hard choice. I wanted to take out all four. They had better try to lay low or they're next.
Bella:
Alice is a crazy pixie. At least now I know why she was wereing that outfit. But, now we can stay in touch. I can't wait to meet her husband. I'm so happy I was picked first.
Tanya:
Great! Now I'm on probation. But, don't worry, I'll win for sure.
Carmen:
All I did was gossip. Every girl herehas done it. I guess try to stay quiet.
Heidi:
I guess it's my turn to go. Maybe I should learn to keep my mouth shut. Edward, if you're watchinh, don't pick a Bitch, they'll cheat, steel, and spend all your money.
That's our show! Another fight, another ceeremony, another gir home. Next time is two group dates, another fight, and another girl will be gone!
*Good List: (in no order)
Bella
Leah
Emily
Jane
Angela
Kate
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